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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh My My double tadka.

I loved it alot but am anxious about the honeymoon.

Pliz dont be late update asap.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

wow...double treat...2 updates in 1... tht was amazing!

m reali glad tht naku tld dutta her past... (does tht inc morey n anna incidents 2)
haha she wasnt the onli 1 tht thrt dutta wntd 2 c naku as koyal naku, cos evn i thrt tht..lol... bt he stil hasnt gt tht naku bk tht used 2 giv him bashans on evry little thing, i think she's jus gtin used 2 the idea
awww naku is so bholi....she thrt he was reali in pain...gosh didnt expect her 2 b tht naive...hehe...
hmm so they wil hav der honeymoon in PN... haha i think naku didnt expect tht 1 cumin, bt do u reali think dutta wud let her gt away with spending sumtym alone without PN lot...
i loved hw dutta is teasing naku--dropping water on himself n tkin of his kurta---gosh he is soo naughty...bechari naku man, embarassed 2 the core!
update soon n this time dnt tke 2 long!!
btw wil dutta's eyesight nw remain fine...no problems innit?




thank you very much! glad you enjoyed it..as for the whole past thing..yep i think it was something that had to be done..time for a new start now...yep it does include the whole morey thing ..that will be touched apon in the next update i think. yep i think i tried to leave you guys thinking on the whole duttas request thing..😉- as for the old naku ..no he hasnt really..he wants the bhashan queen back!

she is dead naive i think more so now that shes been away from dutta..but i think thats what makes the pair between the two of them. your right shes getting used to the whole wife idea at the end of the day..dutta has only given the status recently before he used to overlook it somewhat.

honeymoon..lol..i think dutta managed to listen to what naku was saying but all so twist to suit himself as well.😉

yep well i guess all duttas teasing is kind of building up there relationship slowly.

thank you very much for reading/commenting will try to update soon. p.s eyes are fine now..again will be in the next chapter.

jagruti


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sophia21

My Spot :)
Edited;;
Hailaaa Double dhamakaaaaa😃
Oh lord.. Baaji n his wifely attitude🤣 Yahan bhi dostana🤣... awww Dutta said he wil take care of baaji's vehini😳


Ohhhh so she thought she had to apply soot to come infron of him😆 Ahhh naive nakku.. I thought she wud hold tight and say mujhe bachao saab 😆 ... But im glad he assured her that she doesnt have to put that on anymore😳..
And FINALLY.. she told him bout her past... im waiting for that in the serial.. Dutta needs to know how much nakku suffered!😭 But his gestures was so nice.. he even brought her mandir...such a great husband.. lekin yeh nakku bhi na.. zameen pe kyun soti hain😒 But i know she's scared n nervous cause its bout time they take their relationship on the next level.. 😉😆..
Haiiiii honeymoon☺️ Aur nakku double nervous😆 Bless her.. newly wedded bride ki tarah.. How long will she run away ? 😆 Dutta is such a tease doe... 😳😆..
Aww she doesnt want to go honeymoon lekin dutta ne puri tayaari kar rakha hain🤣... So it will be honeymoon in patil niwas...with nobody at home.. only the lovebirds👏 Yaaaay! ... This must have shocked nakku.. lets hope she isnt holding anything😆 Varna ghir jayegi😆
Awesomeee update.. Loved it.. Thanks for the PM😳



thank you very much and yep..baji does have this very wifely thing going on. duttas comment was just to shut baji up..lol no i think he really meant it.
seriously i think i should have done the whole bachao sahab thing!!!!😆
yep i think she knows to chuck that shoot in the bin now!!
god knows when this will happen in our serial but as for the ff ..it needed it to move ahead. don't like drag fest!!
yah i think that was one of my frav moments in this update..the dining table conversation..seriously aint she lucky to have someone like that!!😳
you said..it shes scared hence shes avoiding dutta a little bit.
As for honeymoon yes...dutta knows what naku feels..hes heard that conversation between naku and aayi sahab. anyways..will leave that till the next update..because i dont really know what im going to write in the next one..!!!😕
anyways thank you again..see you around the forum.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: MeetPremeer

loved both the parts dear
thanks for the pm




thank you very much glad you enjoyed the updates.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ushankitvc

My Place........ I will be back after reading to comment...... Read both the parts........ so beautifully written........ u clearly put their piece of mind in the updt........ they are one by heart ..... but when it cums to physical relation..... they are yet far...... more frm nakkus side........ she is young and innocent........ the innocence which Dutta luvs her fr.........

I would like to see sumthing like this in LTL.........Luved the way he tried to relieve her by telling her to tell the past only if she really wants........ the way he made hr at ease was superb.......... Back at PN, his announcement fr Tasha going out....... wow!!! he announced his Honeymoon in style......... So Cute that Nakku is trying hard to get in terms with the fact that they would be going to honeymoon..... she is so scred....... she says it to As and AS tries to xplain things to her....... Dutta too heard it......... so he decides evrybody going out and Tasha staying back......... Naturally no KMH when he is romancing her........ and then the much awaited SR........
A real superb updt........ specially with a bonus .....
Kaash!!!!! Hope the Cvs read this FF of urs....... would really luv to see this in LTL.....




hiya and first let me add a thank you...glad you enjoyed the updates and o i thought i would bore you with too updates🥱 😳
but you summed it up really well yep they are one..but phically theres more histance from nakus side which i think is natural.
shes married to dutta shri ram patil..which girl wouldnt worry a little😆
but dutta understands naku more than she thinks..so he might just suprise her with his understanding..bit like that conversation at the dinning table..he asked her if she was really to talk about her past...he didnt demand it as such.
As for the honeymoon annoucment yep dutta did it his way..because he thinks its the right time.. he knows that hes going to have to take the first step so he went ahead and did just that.
thank you very much..will try to update soon.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: droopy_asleep

Great updates....pls post the next ones soon :)



thank you very much will try to update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dc17-7

hey jagruti,

so nice of u to give 2 updates on the same day..........

both the updates were fantastic.......... never looked purposefully written, just natural in its flow....... wat a twist at the end dear............ perfect dutta style...........

really really nice.........

tc
divya



thank you very much and its my pleasure..glad you enjoyed it and yep it was just written as it came to mind..in fact all my updates are just written on the spot...
will try to update soon..
thanks


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana19

Hey Jagurti🤗

Wow double updates that"s just awesome yaar ....worth a wait 😉
Thanx a lot for the wonderful update"s and PM ....loved it
Omg yaha pe bhi dostana shuru ho gaya🤣....Poor dutta😆.....
Awww naku was going to apply soot and come ...bechari she got it all wrong ....humhari bholi naku😳....But loved tasha convo ....how she told him why she had to hid herself and the truth ....chalo now all is well😃
So sweet of dutta to take naku to mandir....😍...But why she is still sleeping on the floor😉....i hope the much awaited reunion will be happen soon....LTL mein pata nahi kab dekhne mila ga ...u know na what i mean "coughs"SR😳😆
Haila naku all shy and blushing hearing about honeymoon ...😆bechari is still nervous and scared...But dutta is no less naughty kahi ka...dropping water on his kurta...😉....
Haila tasha will be alone in PN 😍....ab yeh huwi na baat ...thank u so much ....can"t wiat for the nxt part ....so sorry for my blabbering😆
pls jaldi update karna ......u take care and see ya around....👏👍🏼
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hiya..aw thank you very much..double update because it was soo long i split it in two😉
glad you enjoyed them...as for dostana..yey i couldnt help it..just had to add that.
yep all is well..thats one conversation out of the way... theres way for more intresting ones now.😉
yey as for the sleep on the floor..well i guess shes still hesitant..so duttas let it be for now. well ive already mentioned the honeymoon so yep hopefully it will be soon. Ive dug a whole for myself lol... im guessing you guys are going to have great exceptions from the next update..hope i can deliver. !
anyways will try to update soon thanks again.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nileshni679

Oh My My double tadka.


I loved it alot but am anxious about the honeymoon.

Pliz dont be late update asap.




hiya..nice to know you enjoyed the update..its not just you im anxious too...😆😆
will try to update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice update ..... the conversation between tasha was awesome and the way they understand each other was very sweet

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