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Sophia Khan

@Sophia21

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Woah... Amazing OS... the phone convo got me all emotional especially when he tells her to wait for him in their room...!!

Damn shilpi.. u planning to kill me with ur beautiful OS'?

n LOL.. Dutta pounced on chacha here as well.. bechara chacha.

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usha

@ushankitvc

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

so touching OS, shilpi......... really made me very emotional...........how much he cared fr her.............the telephone convo really bought tears into my eyes.........especially in the end .........

Dutta couldn't bear her to be scared like this- Nakku? Nakku- jee,saab?

Dutta- tu mere kamare mein thi?

Nakku stopped remembering the day she had left this room promising to return at his call. But she couldn't stay away from this room in his absence from her life as this room had his essence that calmed her, brought him closer.

Nakku-j..jee,Saab?

Dutta smiled leaning his head against the wall closing his eyes trying to see her him his room. It gave him peace and an eagerness to get back to her. He needed this fire now, he fed on it, revealed in it. Dutta- wahi mera intezaar karna. Main aunga,bahut jald. Tere paas.

OMG!!!!!!!!!! my heart is simply going out fr them...........

Gr88888888 OS.........too touching and emotional.........

Thanx fr PM

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Kavita

@KavitaDR

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Hey Shilpi,

Take a bow.👏👏👏

Mindblowing and coming right from the soul for the happy souls on the Forum. You have captured the essence of what we all want to see happening and that would redeem to a certain extent the CVs for all the crap/bloopers that they fed us during the last two/three weeks. Even they would be embarassed if they do not manage to appropriate the story/concept you have narrated so brillantly.

Next OS PLEASE😳😳😳😳😳And as long as this one.

Luv,

Kavita

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suhana19

@suhana19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Hey Shilpi Omg what Emotional OS yaar😭.....I loved it ....Iam Lost for the words here ...👏....U write so beautifully ....it touches ones heart yaar .....Wow the Phone conversation was superbly written yaar👍🏼

It was romantic the last line was killer yaar when he says her to wait for in there room😃 ......

U are planning to kill us with this mind-blowing writing👍🏼.....

Thanx amillion yaar .....Will wait fo the nxt one ...u take care and see ya around.....👍🏼👏,,,,

Love and Hugs suhana🤗

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desigrl414

@desigrl414

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

absolutely loved it! this is actually how i envision their phone conversation as well!

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Chinchinchoo

@Prinsesse.Suvi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Wow!! Shilpi....it was fabulous!!! And the phone call bit..so emotional..so sad😭

Thanks for the PM

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mozart66

@mozart66

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Lovely!

Wish it happens exactly the same way as described in your post!

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-bharti-

@-bharti-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Too Good!!!!!!!!!!!😍

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kiran255

@kiran255

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

SHIlpi

This OS is beautiful!
I soooooooooo love it

every word has its meaning !

i just wish exactly the same happens

cuz this cant get any better !

awesome SHilpi !

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divya17-7

@divya17-7

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#20

hey shilpita....😊

i am speechless............. i wish such a convo really comes up in the serial......... ur OS is so fantastic n elastic........ the CVs wud hav itch their brains off....... now i think........

oh god............. u were fabulous dear.........

its amazing...... just reading it, i cud see pictures of naku n dutta hav that convo........... i jst had said sometime back, he would first tell, mein teek hoon nakku..........

but after that, ur imagination is amazing............... there are no words to explain the phone convo u hav imagined n put it in words........

lotz luv n tc
divya

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