The Second Chances upd Epilogue pg63 on 22thFeb - Page 43

Originally posted by: vahgar

Wow Shilpi.........guess you outdid yourself with today's update........what a lovely poem to start it off with.......... what a way to start my day, I was so excited seeing your update, had to read it before I started work....... 😊

Oh Thanks Lalitha...i am honored to have that impact on someone...I know wht its like to be consumed in work...sometimes when u open ur eyes in the morning the first thing that comes to ur mind even be4 praying to God and thanking Him is ..okay so i have to finish this file in office today..i have to crack this deal..meet this client..thts how life has become in the competitive world today..and if in this world i get to distract a person i have never met with a few written words...the feeling is undescribable... Thank you

Thanks for bringing Tudu back, guess now that all his feelings, fears and guilt are out in the open for his love to see he is feeling free, nothing to hold him back......except himself.

Loved the mail , she knows every reaction, for a while I was confused as to who maya was, never guessed it was his dog ha ha ha.....nice touch.... Poor Nakku must be going thru hell trying to pretend to be happy for her parents and finally letting it all go in her mail to Tudu.....

Just a question, did she always write the mail like a convo or did she start that way after she sensed that it was'nt going unread...... does'nt matter either way..........loved the mail....

would love to see Dutta's face reading about their pink room 😊

See as said in the update she started with a accusatory ,mail where she poured her heart out...so yes..the mails were always in the conversation vein..they are informal and fluid with her emotion just as she would have talked when he was there with her....she asks Q,tell him about every little thing in her life like she used to do when they were kids..

And I always come back to your post to read Vandu's ananlysis, Wow Vandu......your replies make an awesome read......its like we are getting a review..... 😊

I don't even want to guess what is in the CD, am sure we will be pleasantly surprised, Hope Dr E plays cupid here.......

I feel no one needs to play Cupid between Naksh and Tudu...they are already in love..what Tudu needs is senses knocked into his thick skull...which i want him to do himself...how long should he cave in his fear..time to break through..by himself..hai na?

--Lalitha

Originally posted by: preety_219

Hey Shilpi,
U have this amazing skills of writing.👏In ur last update u left me in sea of pain & with this update u showered happiness.How do u manage to do this?
The shadow - amazing lines ⭐️
As for ur this update ,u have said it all .I don't have sufficient words this time.
Can love be any purer than this?any soulful than this?I don't think so.
Now,i am wondering what will be the final catalyst which will unite these two -will it be person or situation or god,himself?
I really hope to see some of ur thoughts published in future.

Pooja😊

Originally posted by: shilpita87

ohh..How i wish i could be that good that i get published yaar...sometimes i feel i have done gr8...then i read some amazing writers and start feeling...no i am nothing in comparision..when will i get that Good..would i ever be that good...then my whole confidence gets shaky...i wish some real writer did read my work and reviewed it, criticized it..then i would learn my shortcomings...i seriously need a professional consulting...some critic going thru my work and shredding it to pieces so that i can improve..