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Posted: 14 years ago
hay haye tumhey mila meri taraf sey behsarmi ka medal
me liked it yaar ...guess karo kyu ?🤣
really very well written keep going and keep writing hot hot scenes 😉
hay hay what a tasha scene first time i read it i drowned in the bubbles🤣hay hay uff yaar kamal kiya hain tuney ...😆😆



Edited by newbe - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
sophie.......kitna hot update that,..........especially the TaSha bath room scenes.......u rock girl......loved this part too........yeh kya.......no pre.........hamari sophie evil nahi bohut sweet hai.....next time she'll surely give us pre....😉.........m i correct????
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Posted: 14 years ago

very romantic 😳😳😳😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey Sophie. Nice sexy update and i loved coz it had lots of Tasha. And the promo was scary. Kya yaar Nisha lost her child and Pata nahi Nakku ka kya hoga. I'm sensing sumthng fishy here. ok thnx 4 d p.m.. Update wen free. LUV...
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh gosh poor nisha, wil naku giv 1 baby 2 nisha...?
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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 29....

TaSha Scene...

Its 11 o'clock and Dutta is still sleeping. Nakku is standing by the window enjoying the view and daydreaming. She had to wake up early to feed the kids. Rahul starts crying and Nakku comes back to her senses. Dutta also wakes up hearing Rahul. He sees Nakku running towards him and quiets him down. Dutta sits up with his eyes closed.

Dutta: Kya yaar, sone bhi nahin dete. Kal raat bhi do baar utkar roya tha.

Nakku: Jaane do na..

Dutta: Jab bhi main tumhare saath waqt guzarna chahta hoon, rahul ya aman ro parta hain

Nakku: Achi baat hain

Dutta: Kya?

Nakku: Kuch nahin, sau jao..

Dutta lies back down and covers his face with the cover. Nakku walks around with him humming.

Dutta *under the sheet*: You never hum to me

Nakku: Aap koi bacche thodi hain

Dutta: RaMan tumhare liye sab kuch hain, main kuch nahin.

Nakku: Aapke bina Rahul and Aman nahin hota

Dutta *gets up and sits straight*: To phir Rahul aur Aman ko aur bhai behen de do.

Nakku: Nahin, abhi nahin.

He lies back down and covers his face again. Nakku smiles and sees that Rahul is sleeping. She puts him back in his crib and orders breakfast.

Nakku: get up, I ordered breakfast.

Dutta: Nahin, saune do na

Nakku: Uth jao na *pulls the cover*

Dutta pulls Nakku on the bed and pins her to the bed. Nakku bites him on his hand and runs away. Just then someone knocks on the door.

Dutta: I will open, you stay here

Nakku: why?

Dutta: Because your gown is transparent.

Nakku: Oh and if someone else see me like this, you will get jealous?

Dutta: Dutta SriRam Patil doesn't get jealous

Nakku: Yeah right, fine, I will go open then.

Dutta: NOOOO!

Nakku: But you said you're not jealous

Dutta: I'm not jealous; if he looks at you I will just pull out his eyes and make him eat it.

Nakku smirks, she goes up to him and pecks him on the lips and runs to the bathroom to change. Dutta smiles and goes to open the door but the waiter is a lady. She comes in with breakfast and puts it on the table. A few napkins drops on the floor and both (dutta and waiter) bends to pick it up. Nakku comes out the bathroom and sees this. She doesn't seem to like this lady waiter. Dutta saw her expression and decides to take advantage of this. He "accidently" touches the lady's hand and smiles at her saying sorry. Nakku storms there and gives him a dirty look. They both stand up and the lady leaves.

Nakku: What was you doing? Why was she here? Why were you sitting on the floor? Why did you touch her hand?

Dutta: Areee shaant ho jao.. jalan ho rahi hain?

Nakku: Nahin, mujhe koi jalan valan nahin hoti.

Dutta: theek hai, I will call her again to ask for some coffee.

Nakku: NAHIN.. I don't want to see her. If she comes back I will cut the hand that you touched and make you eat it.

Dutta smiles and hugs her. Dutta: Mazak tha.. Sorry

Nakku: Jao, I don't want to talk to you.

Dutta holds his ear and bends to be at the same level as Nakku "I'm sorry Jaan" He whispers near her ears. Nakku blushes and hugs him.

Dutta: you really thought I was flirting with that girl?

Nakku: No I trust you.

Dutta: My day starts with you and our kids and ends like that as well. I don't even know how she looked like, I didn't look at her.

Nakku: Ok ab theek hain

Dutta: Maybe you should try the skirt she was wearing, it was nice.

Nakku *shocked*: SKIRT? You saw her skirt? You said you didn't even look at her and you saw her skirt?

She picks up a pillow and starts beating him. Dutta picks up a pillow to protect himself and they both end up having a pillow fight and rips all the pillows. The room became messy with the fluffs. While fighting, Dutta picks her up from the back and put her on the bed. He holds her down and starts kissing her naughtily. Aman wakes up and starts crying. Dutta bangs his hand on his forehead and lets Nakku go. She laughs and runs to pick Aman up.

Dutta: Areee yaar, paanch minute intezaar nahin kar sakta tha?

Nakku: Ssshh

Dutta: Yeh hamesha galat waqt par rota hai

Nakku *to Aman* : Meri acha baccha

Dutta: ACHA? Galat waqt par rota hai aur tumhe acha lag raha hain?

Nakku: Haan.

Dutta: Main jaa raha hoon

Nakku: Kahan?

Dutta: Nahane

Nakku: Ok theek hain, jao

Dutta: Jaon? Tum nahin aaoge?

Nakku: Nahin aap jao, main baad mein jaongi

Dutta *sad*: theek hai.

Nakku puts Aman. She goes to the bed to clean it as the fluffs are everywhere. Dutta goes in the bathroom to take a bath.

Dutta *shouts from bathroom*: NAKKKUU

Nakku: HAAN

Dutta: towel dena

Nakku: Haan

She takes the towel and goes to the door to give him. He opens the door, pulls her in and shuts it. (Well you know what happens next right, Na not round **, just a warm bath together lol)

After a while, Nakku runs out with her saree wet. She gets irritated and looks for another saree. Dutta comes out in his towel and laughs at her.

Dutta: Madad chahiye?

Nakku: Nahin, main khud kar loongi

Dutta: Aao Na..

Nakku: Nahin.

Nakku turns around and starts looking for a saree in the wardrobe. Dutta comes from the back and starts opening her dhoris. He pushes him off with her elbow but he doesn't move and removes her wet saree. *Background Music – Jal jal ke dhuan – Ek khiladi Ek haseena*He wraps her with a white silky bed sheet making it look like a boobtube (sleeveless) dress. He opens her wet hair slowly. Nakku walks away but Dutta grabs her hand and pulls her back. She leans against the wardrobe. He leans in and kisses her shoulder to her neck. Turns her back and removes her hair. Kisses her from her neck to her waist and turns her back to face him. She pulls him to the bed and takes his shirt off. They start kissing and Dutta lets out a giggle through the kiss. Nakku lies down on the bed and pulls Dutta by his chain and they kiss again. Dutta covers Nakku completely with his strong body camera fades away on the babies sleeping.

(Now, I know there are lots of AHEM AHEM these days but what to do yaar? The show is disappointing us big tym.,, It's been so long since they got married and all they did was eye-talk or hand hold.. REALLY? That's not enough lol)

BaSha Scene…

Baaji and Nisha woke up early to visit Cochin. They went for a boat ride and had lunch at a restaurant.

Baaji took Nisha shopping and they bought lots of gifts for everyone at home especially for Rahul and Aman. BaSha returns to their hotel in the evening after a long day. Baaji is tired but Nisha wants to do more shopping and go out.

Baaji: Nahin.. Yahan hi reh nah.. If we go out how will we win against bhao and Vayhini?

Nisha: Matlab?

Baaji: Areeee.. Unke Pass to Rahul aur Aman hain.. We need to have lots of kids as well.

Nisha: Dhut..Abhi Nahin.

Baaji: Kyun Nahin?

Nisha: Abhi abhi shaadi hui hain nah.. Thoda intezaar kar na jaan

Baaji: jaise tumhare marzi… Lekin aaj room mein hi raho nah

Nisha: theek hai.. Lekin room mein kya karein? Aur who bhi akele?

Baaji: Haan yehi to keh rahi hoon, AKELE!!

Nisha: Main nahane jaa rahi hoon. Aakar baat karenge

Baaji: Nahin.. Saath chalte hai na.

Nisha: NAHIN..

Nisha goes to take a shower while baaji relax on the bed. He was tired because Nisha bought the whole shop and he had to hold everything. He couldn't complain to her but he was tired. Nisha comes out after 30 minutes but baaji dozed off with his clothes and shoes. She sits on the bed and takes his shoes and socks off but Baaji sits up and scares her. Nisha screams and pinch him for scaring her. Baaji pulls her down with him and cuddles her. They sleep in each other's arm.

Noops Scene...

Naman and Roops stayed in their room all day because Naman didn't have any business meeting so he decided to spend every minute with Roops. They had breakfast and lunch in their room and a cozy bath together. They watched a few movies and talked a lot. Its night time and Roops wants to go out. Naman tells her to go get ready and he will take her somewhere. Roops wears a very modern chudidar, quite sexy and backless while Naman wears a casual t-shirt and jeans with a jacket. They both go disco. *Munni Badnaam hue Darling Tere Liye* song is playing in the disco with lots of people dancing around. Naman orders juice but it ends up getting spiked by some youngsters. Roops drinks all in one go unknown to the fact that there's alcohol in the drink. She asks for more. Naman doesn't drink because he didn't feel like it. Within minutes Roops was drunk. Naman noticed it too and he was shocked. She started laughing and pulls him to the dance floor. Naman tries to handle her but she's too drunk. He decides to take her home. They go outside next to the swimming pool. *Zara Sa Jhoom Loon Mein – DDLJ* Roops starts singing and Naman tries to hold her but they both fall in the pool. He takes her out and picks her up on his back and takes her back to the hotel.*Song Ends* Naman puts Roops on the bed and takes her clothes off. He makes her wear his shirt and then covers her. Naman lies down next to her laughing at what happened. Roops sits up still drunk. Naman gets up and convince her to sleep. She pulls him on top of her and kisses him but then falls asleep. (Ab Roops ko to Aadat hai sharab peene ke lool)

Precap – All 3 couples back from Honeymoon.

2 Years Leap!!!

AGAIN I will ask you for your LONG comments and please do press 'Like'

I know there are many love scenes nowadays but this is the calmness before a storm lol.. But I won't disappoint you.

Chota tiny winy comments Nahin chalega!!! I want you to write with your heart lool .. Now don't go kill yourself.. I know I know after such a hot update it's hard to even type.. But think about me yaar… I had to write this and Damn you don't know how hot I am right now.. *breathes heavily* Lol Anyway Next update will be tomorrow!!!!😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks for the update .....
Your FF is much better than LTL days...Atleast we can imagine Tasha Romance through this.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Cool FF. Loved it.

Precap: 2 year leap??? Are you getting influenced by Ekta or Colors?😆😆
Edited by ltl_fan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ltl_fan

Cool FF. Loved it.

Precap: 2 year leap??? Are you getting influenced by Ekta or Colors?

😆😆Lool This leap is necessary because I need the kids to grow up a little bit for the future tracks lool..😳😆
And Thank You Very Much😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
aaj kal tumhara update padthe waqt, i have to make sure no one is around as the mercury is rising beyond imaginable levels here😆
aree, seems like u took my comments of raman being well behaved too seriously.. yeh kya, u turned them into my babies or normal babies for this part 😉but maa-baap bhi mauke dhoond lete hi hain.. tumne bahut accha likha hain.. what is the calm before storm😕
BTW, u are so right about the show.,. i have stopped hoping to see a good tasha scne.. every week ek nayi ummeed hoti hain that yup, this will be a tasha week.. but nahin.. god knows hwy they ant show a decent tasha scene.. seriously u FF writers ke bina toh yeh waqt kaatna mushkil hota.. so aa big thank you😛
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