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Posted: 14 years ago

Here is part 24...

Morning After...

TaSha Scene

Nakku is sleeping on Dutta's bare chest and Dutta's hand is on her waist holding Nakku close to him. He opens his eyes and sees Nakku on him. He smiles but then remembers the bitter truth about Neha. Dutta says to Nakku in his mind "Main tumse bohut pyar karta hoon Nakku lekin maine ek sach chupaya hai. Aur agar yeh sach tumhare samne agaya to hum dono ki zindagi barbaad ho gaye gi aur main tujhse khona Nahin jaati Nakku. Tum meri jeene ki wajah ho, mein tumhe yeh sab Nahin bata sakti Nakku, kis mou se kahoon ke maine tumhe dokha diya, tumhe andheere mein raka? Main kya karoon Nakku? Kya karoon mein?". He starts crying and hugs her tightly. Nakku holds him close to her to keep herself warm and sleep comfortably.

BaSha's Scene

Baaji is alone on the bed. He turns and touch nisha's place but doesn't feel Nisha next to him. He calls her in his sleep "Nisha...Nisha". But no one replies. He gets up quickly but doesn't see her. He looks around and then Nisha comes in with morning tea. Baaji thought "WOW, my wife looks beautiful". Nisha's hair was wet and she wore a red saree with her bangles and shaadi ki nishani; her sindoor and mangalsutra. Baaji couldn't take his eyes off her. He was mesmerized by her beauty. Neha comes next to him but baaji was just staring. She takes his finger and puts it in the hot tea and Baaji jumps and screams. Nisha laughs. She puts the tea on the side table and tells him to drink it. She gets up to leave but Baaji pulls her onto the bed. He removes her hair from her face and kisses her passionately. Nisha pushes him off and runs out the room. Baaji scratches his head and lies down again.

Noops scene

Naman comes in the room with breakfast (ghoru ka gulaam LOOOL). Roops is still sleeping. He puts it on the side table and wakes roops up. She jumps up...

Roops: OMG im soooo sorryyy.. Im late

Naman: Nahin jaan, here's breakfast

Roops: Ahh Breakfast??? I'm such a bad wife, i was ment to wake up early and prepare breakfast for you.

Naman: it's okay jaan, you don't need to prepare anything. You just eat. And if you need anything, you ask the maid.

Roops hugs Naman and he kisses her forehead. Naman tells her to go freshen up and get ready as she has to go to PN today as per the tradition. Roops gets excited and runs to the bathroom to get ready.

In PN...

Nisha and Nakku are serving breakfast at the table. Baaji and Dutta comes with RaMan and sits in the hall. Dutta is lost somewhere. Baaji notice this

Baaji: kya hua bhao, do din se itne khoye khoye lag rahe ho

Dutta: hmm Nahin kuch Nahin

Baaji: Kya bhao, mujhe jhoot mat bolo

Dutta: aaj mujhe kahin jaana hai

Baaji: haan bhao bolo kahan jaana hai?

Dutta: chal apni purana adda chalte hai

Baaji: theek hai bhao

Baaji goes over to Nisha and tells her he will be back in a few hours and kisses her forehead. Nisha takes Aman from Baaji. Dutta tells Nakku the same and gives her Rahul. They both leave.

Purana Adda...

Baaji and dutta stops their jeep before and walks to their purana adda. Dutta looks lost and baaji is curious.

Baaji: Ab to batao na bhao, kya hua?

Dutta: Mujhse ek bohut badi Galati hui hai baaji

Baaji: matlab?

Dutta tells baaji everything that happened between him and Neha and breaks down. Little did he know that he did nothing wrong. He didn't know he didn't sleep with her, he didn't touch her. But Dutta is trapped in Neha's plan. He tells baaji how he slept with Neha thinking it was Nakku. He didn't know what he was doing. Baaji is frozen from head to toe. He looks at dutta emotionless... He doesn't know what to do or what to say.

Dutta: Main Nakku ko aankhen Nahin mila sakti

Baaji: Bh..Bha..Bhaoo

Dutta: Baaji, main ya karoon? Mujhe kuch samaj mein Nahin aa raha hai

Baaji: yeh kya hogaya bhao? Yeh kaise ho sakta hai.. Nakkkuu

Dutta: Nakku, main Nakku ko kaise bata doon?

Baaji: Bhao, aapko kuch aur yaad Nahin hai?

Dutta: Nahin, kuch yaad Nahin aa raha hai..

Baaji: Agar Neha Nakku ko bata dein to?

Dutta: NAHIN.. usne mujhe kahan ke woh Nakku ko kuch Nahin batae gi

Baaji: Hume kuch sochna parega... humein Neha ko yahan se dhoor bhejna hoga.

Dutta: Lekin baaji, uske saath yeh karne ke baad, main aisa kaisa kar sakta hoon.

Baaji: hum uske responsibility leinge. Hum usse har mahine(month) paise bej denge.

Dutta: Nahin, Nakku ko shak ho gayi to?

Baaji: yeh bhi sahi hain

Dutta: tum chinta mat karo baaji, bhool jao iss baat ko.

Baaji: Lekin baho

Dutta: mujhe iss bare mein koi baat Nahin karni hai.. Chal ghar chalte hai.. Aaj Roops ghar aarahi hai. Aur Nisha tumhare intezaar kar rahi hogi, Chal.

Baaji: Theek hai bhao, chalo * they both leave to PN*

In PN...

AS tells Nakku and Nisha to cook Roops favourite things as she's coming home for the first time after marriage. They both agree and goes to cook lots of Roops favourite things. Dutta and Baaji comes back. Baaji looks for Nisha but doesn't see her anywhere. AS tells him and Dutta that Nisha and Nakku are in the kitchen cooking for Roops as she is coming home today. Duji goes to the kitchen and hug their wives.

Roops comes in with Naman. They take blessing from the elders. TaSha and BaSha hears her voice and runs to the hall to meet her. Roops hugs everyone and Naman greets them. Dutta is happy to see his little sister happy. He's never seen her smile so much before. AS tells Roops that Nisha and Nakku prepared all her favourite foods. AS makes Roops and Naman sit down and feeds them lots of food. Everyone else looks on happily. After a little while Naman, Baaji and Dutta goes to the bar to talk and Nakku, Nisha, Roops and Leela goes to Roops room to talk and play with the kids. They all got so busy talking that it's already night time. No one realised the time. They were all into the conversation that they never go time to see what's happening anywhere else. Naman comes to roops room and tells her that it's late and they have to go. Roops gets sad and hugs the girl and kisses the babies. She goes to bid goodbye to Dutta and baaji and then AS. She leaves with Naman. Nakku goes to her room with RaMan, she feeds them and puts them to bed. Baaji and Nisha are in their room. Nisha is taking her jewelleries off so that she can go to bed. Baaji comes hug her from behind and starts taking them off for her. He unpins her saree and wraps the bed sheet around her. He then picks her up and puts her on the bed. He caresses her body and LIGHTS OFF! (loool Round 2)

Nakku is in the room looking outside the window. Dutta comes in and sees her standing near the window with the moonlight on her face. Her silky gown was flying with the wind. She looked like an angel. A beautiful angel. He starts to walk towards her but stops in middle.

Dutta *thinking*: how can i touch you Nakku? This hand touched someone else! How can i do this?

Nakku *turns to dutta*: Aap yahan? Aapne kuch kahan?

Dutta: Nahin.. tum kya soch rahi ho?

Nakku: kuch Nahin, aapki intezaar kar rahi thi, go change.

Dutta: Haan.

Dutta goes to the bathroom for a shower to calm himself down, his guilt is eating him inside out. He's not able to look into Nakku's eye. He's not able to touch her. But he can't stay away from her. He knew if he continues to behave like this then Nakku will know something is wrong. He comes out the shower and sees Nakku on the bed sitting. He decides to tell her everything. He couldn't keep her in the dark anymore. He didn't want to lose her but he cant lie to her anymore. Dutta walks over to Nakku and sits beside her. Nakku puts her head on his shoulder.

Dutta: i need to tell you something

Nakku: Haan bolo

Dutta: main tumse ek...

Just the Rahul starts crying, TaSha looks at him. Nakku quickly gets up and attends him. Dutta is devastated. He gathered courage to tell Nakku but he won't be able to do that again. Nakku puts Rahul back to bed and sits next to dutta but he tells her he's tired and wants to sleep. They both go to bed.

Noops' house...
Roops is in her bath tub taking a relaxing bath when suddenly Naman comes in. She panics and covers herself with the bubbles. She wonders how Naman came in if she locked the door. Naman tells her that she didn't lock it and he has full right to come in. Roops blushes and turns the other way. Naman takes his shirt off and jumps in the bath and they start splashing water on each other.

Precap - 1 month leap

Neha fake pregnancy

Dutta drunk!

Nakku - Dutta argument!

Please comment and press 'Like' Next update will be today itself
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Edited by sunshiine21 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks for the PM but wat is this tasha argument how could you do this. when is this stupid neha's truth gonna com out. it better be quick😡.
noops bath seen soo cute☺️
and whats this basha's second round already, lagta hai woh hamari dutta se kam nahi hai. lol 😆
uopdate soon!!!👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update...plz update the next part soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago

oh tanx sunshine 4 the update what a beautiful update i can't beleive the stuff u come up with very interesting and how exiting another update today wow tanx i can't wait btw what is ur name?

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: bfunofbb123

oh tanx sunshine 4 the update what a beautiful update i can't beleive the stuff u come up with very interesting and how exiting another update today wow tanx i can't wait btw what is ur name?

Hey thank you sooo much
Actually i dream about the scenes then write them hahahah😆😆😆
My name is Sophia 😳
You can call me Sophia, Sophie, Soph or Sunshiine! LOL😆😉
Next update will be up soon, i'm writing it right now!😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
me waiting to see tht witch's dhulaai.😡. lovely flow😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Here is part 25...

It's been a month since BaSha and Noops got married. Both couples are really happy. But TaSha's relationship isn't working very well. Everytime Nakku touches dutta he finds some work to do and goes away from there but Nakku never complained, she never took it serious. And she had the babies to look after. She kept herself busy with RaMan.

Nakku is downstairs with RaMan and AS. Dutta was alone in his room when Neha comes in crying. He looks at her angrily.

Dutta: Ab kya hua?

Neha: mujhe aapse kuch baad karni hain

Dutta: KYA? BOL!

Neha: Main

Dutta: Main kya?

Neha: Main aapke bacche ki ma banne wali hoon

Dutta drops the folder that was in his hands. His whole world came crashing down.

Dutta: KYA? Yeh tum kya keh rahi ho?

Neha: Haan saab, mujhe aaj hi pata chala hai... main kya karoon..

Dutta: yeh Nahin ho sakta

Neha: ho chuka hai

Dutta: Mujhe akela chod do!

Neha leaves and fakes crying. Dutta breaks down. He can't figure out what to do. First time in his life he's stuck and there is no way out. One side is Nakku and his twins and on the other side is Neha and her unborn baby. Dutta couldn't take it so he left PN in a hurry. He went to a bar and started drinking. He drank directly from the bottle to cut down the pain. But however much he drinks, the pain seems to increase. He thinks what he will tell Nakku. He can't hide the pregnancy truth for so long. It won't stay hidden. The truth will eventually come out and the truth is that the baby is his. He drinks more. He tries to get up but drops down. Everyone looks at him and some people recognise him as Duttabhao. Some men takes him to patil Niwas. AS and Nakku was in the hall with the kids. The men comes in with a drunk dutta. Nakku and AS are shocked. Nakku couldn't believe that dutta started drinking again. Baaji comes there with Nisha and they are both shocked as well. Baaji runs to Dutta and holds him, he thanks the men and they leave. Baaji takes dutta to his room. Nakku looks on. AS is worried. Baaji puts dutta on the bed and is disappointed. He leaves and sees Nakku at the door. He looks at Nakku worriedly and leaves. AS stayed with RaMan downstairs and she didn't want to see Dutta like this. Nakku comes in the room and looks at dutta on the bed. He wasn't unconscious , he was just drunk. He tries to sit up but he couldn't. Nakku comes in angrily.

Nakku: aapne phir se sharab pee li??? KYUN??

Dutta: mujhse savaal mat pooch

Nakku: kyun Nahin poochon? Aapko sharam Nahin aata? Do chote chote bacche hain aapke, aur aap peeke ghar aate hai?

Dutta: haan, meri marzi, bolo kya karlegi?

Nakku: aapko hua kya hai?

Dutta: jao yahan se, mujhe akela chod do

Nakku: NAHIN! Aaj aap ko batana hi hoga, pichle ek mahine aap alag behave kyun kar rahe hai? Hua kya hai aapko?

Dutta: kuch Nahin, jao yahan se, mujhe tumse baat Nahin karna hai.

Nakku is shocked. She starts crying and takes out the suitcase and puts her clothes in. Dutta looks away. Nakku leaves the room and goes downstairs. Everyone is shocked to see Nakku with her suitcase.

Nakku: Don't worry, im not leaving this house, but i can't stay in that room with my kids if saab comes home drinking. I'm shifting to the guest room with Rahul and Aman.

AS: Nakku

Nakku: Nahin AS.. kuch mat kahiye.. pata Nahin Saab ko kya hua hai..

She goes to the guest room while everyone stares at her. She leaves her suitcase in the guest room and comes back to the hall to take Rahul and Aman. She goes back to the room and closes the door. Neha sees all this and is very happy. She goes to her room and calls kala to inform her about everything. Kala then tells her to make sure Nakku knows about her pregnancy. Neha ensures her and disconnects the phone.

Nisha and AS tries to convince Nakku to open the door but she doesn't. Inside Nakku puts the babies on the bed and breaks down on the floor crying. Baaji goes to Dutta and sees him sitting down drinking.

Baaji: Yeh aapne ya kiya bhao? Aapne apne hi haathon se apni zindagi barbad kardi hai bhao.

Dutta: Baaji, tu jaa yahan se, mujhe akela chod de, jao

Baaji goes to his room, Nisha comes there and consoles him. AS goes to see dutta but stops at the door when she sees him drinking. She goes to her room.

Nakku is on the floor against the door crying and dutta in his room thinking about his and nakku's relationship and drinking.

Background song comes on...

Kab se usko dhondta hoon

Bhegi palko se yahan

Ab jane woh kahan hai

Tha to mera Ashiyan

Kab se usko dhondta hoon

Bhegi palko se yahan

(Nakku looks at her babies and holds them close to her)

Ab jane woh kahan hai

Tha to mera Ashiyan

Rabba mere mujhko bata

haaye De mujhe kyon yeh saza

Ab sare bandhan tod ke

(Dutta throws the bottle on the floor and it breaks into pieces. He looks in the mirror and sees Nakku)

Yaadon ko tanha chod ke

Mein Ghum se rista jod ke jau kahan

Ek chhota ssa jahan tha

Chand khushiyon se bhara

Usko mujhse cheen kar hai

Mil gaya tujhko bhi kya

Ek chhota ssa jahan tha

Chand khushiyon se bhara

Usko mujhse cheen kar hai

Mil gaya tujhko bhi kya

Abb hai fakat sirf jaan

Kar dun mein woh bhi aata

Ab sare bandhan tod ke

Yaadon ko tanha chod ke

(Dutta starts crying and looks at the cribs which are empty. He then looks at the bed and that's empty as well)

Mein Ghum se rista jod ke jau kahan

Ab sare bandhan tod ke

Yaadon ko tanha chod ke

Mein Ghum se rista jod ke jau kahan

Waqt ke kitne nishaan hai

Zarei zarei mein yahan

Doston ke saath ke pal

Kuch hasen Kuch gumjyda

Waqt ke kitne nishaan hai

Zarei zarei mein yahan

Doston ke saath ke pal

Kuch hasen Kuch gumjyda

Sab hua abb to fanna

Bas raha baki dhuan

(Nakku holds her mangalsutra in her hands and remembers her second marriage with dutta, on the other side, Dutta looks at his chain and remembers his first and second marriage with Nakku but then he remembers neha and her pregnancy)

Ab sare bandhan tod ke

Yaadon ko tanha chod ke

Mein Ghum se rista jod ke jau kahan

Ab sare bandhan tod ke

Yaadon ko tanha chod ke

Mein Ghum se rista jod ke jau kahan

Kab se usko dhondta hoon

Bhegi palko se yahan

Ab jane woh kahan hai

Tha to mera Ashiyan

Rabba mere mujhko bata

haaye De mujhe kyon yeh saza

(Dutta walks to the guest room he fell a few times but managed to get there. He looks at the door and hears Nakku crying. He was about to knock but stops. He sits against the door and cries silently)

Ab sare bandhan tod ke

Yaadon ko tanha chod ke

Mein Ghum se rista jod ke jau kahan

*Song Finishes*

Dutta goes back to his room and sits on the floor looking completely lost. Baaji in his room sitting on the bed with Nisha consoling him. It's a new day, Nakku didn't sleep all night. She sat against the door and cried till there were no tears left. She wasn't able to understand what was wrong with dutta. She didn't know what made him behave like this. Dutta woke up with a bad hangover, he looks for Nakku but then have a Flashback of her packing her clothes and leave the room. He feels sad but doesn't have the courage to face her. AS, Leela and Nisha knocks on nakku's door telling her to come out. Nakku still sitting on the floor, she hears them but doesn't open the door. AS tells her to think about her children as they must be hungry and if she doesn't eat then what will she feed them. Nakku realise what AS said and opens the door. They are all sad to see like this, she looked weak and fragile. Her eyes were red and they could tell she didn't sleep all night. AS tells her to freshen up and come eat breakfast as she needs to feed RaMan. Leela and Nisha takes RaMan. AS goes to the table where baaji is sitting looking lost. Nakku washes her face and comes to the table. Dutta also comes down just then. Their eyes meet and dutta sees tears in Nakku's eye. He feel bad and wants to talk to her but Nakku looks away and starts to eat. Dutta also comes and sits down next to her. Baaji calls Nisha, she comes and tells baaji she will eat later when Nakku feeds Aman as she is holding him. Dutta looks at Aman silently. No one talks to dutta on the table because of what he did last night. Leela comes with Rahul who is crying. Dutta stands up and tells Leela to give Rahul to him. But Nakku stands up and takes Rahul to the guest room and feeds him. Dutta is left standing there and everyone leave the hall. Nisha goes to Nakku and gives her Aman as well and leaves. Dutta comes to the door of the guest room and looks at Nakku crying with Rahul in her hands from far. Nakku doesn't see him as she is facing the other way. Dutta puts his hands forward to touch her but he doesn't and leaves.

I know, it's an emotional update, I was crying while writing it 😭

Anyway I promise Neha will be out soon! The truth will come out!😃

Precap – Neha's pregnancy comes infront of everyone. 😲

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Posted: 14 years ago
OH Sunshine
thanks for the update
im mpressed k u managed to update :)
thanks for pming dear

well well well i hate guilty Dutta
i miss the sher
hate that Neha , she should better get out
and precap is quite interesting

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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG Sunshine
nooooooooooo
it was to much emotional
i cant see my Tasha like this
im crying too
but how u describe Dutta senario is superb
u have made me cry so ur successful in telling us what u want
and plz kick that b_ _ _ _ _ out
hate her

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Posted: 14 years ago
i am crying too.. very emotional part and very well written, esp D-N's pain.. pls end nisha track soon dear.. kudos for posting so quickly though.. loved it

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