FF : KKTM UPDATED.Part33:Sath nibhayenge on pg 106 - Page 29

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Posted: 14 years ago
@ Spandy : Will update soon dear..........Thx a lot for the reply.........
@ Soni : Even I hope Baaji-Gajri fall in love soon............... .............Thx for the reply dear...............
@ Molly : I am gald you loved it yaar....................Yup they are awsome indeed.....................
@ Suhana : Ok.I will make sure they wont leave Jungle soon.......Yup poor Gajri....................Thx for the reply dear..Will surely update soon............................
@ Sonee : K dear........As you please..........Next time will give you a long update................. ..Thx for the reply.......Will update soon................


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Posted: 14 years ago
hi saaki ! loved the update yaar...loving baji and gajri!...
u have written it beautifully ...thanx for the PM...update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nazia.icycool

hi saaki ! loved the update yaar...loving baji and gajri!...

u have written it beautifully ...thanx for the PM...update soon...

Nazzzzzzzzzzooooooooooooo........... ..................I am happy to hear you loved Baaji-Gajri scenes........
Thx a lot for such a lovely reply dear.............. .........Yup will update soon...................



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"Dekh,waqt nahi hain hamaare paas.Main teriko yahaan aise akela nahichodsakta.Chal jaldi " again orders Dutta.

awww....!!!! responsible guy..>!!!!!

Nakku is all in tears.Frightened totally watches here & there.Except for the road,she gets the feeeling that she is actually walking in between Jungle where there is no sign of a single village even far to where she stood.
wow..!!!!! kya opportunity hai..???!!!!! com'on make use ppl..!!!


"Ghabrana mat.Baaji hoga teri dost ke saath.Sab theek hi hoga.Iss Jungle main dhoondna hi hoga.Musibat mein padhgaye to mushkil hojaayega.Ek kaam karta hain,tujhe jahaan jaana hain tu bol,teriko chodke vaapas aake Baaji aur teri dost ko dhondega main." Dutta looks at Nakku expecting an answer from her..................
Nakku just lowers her gaze & then speaks,
"Nahi.Main akeli nahi jaasakti.Aur Gajri pata nahi kaisi hogi.Hum usse dhoondakar saath main lekar hi jaayenge.Pan main akeli nahi jaayegi." says Nakku firmly.
ya..she's got a point....and it will be a double work for him too..!!!! aur agar woh chali gayi tho love story kaise shuru hogi...???!!!!!

Gajri totally hurt opens her eyes slowly to see herself around the bunch of leaves & slowly gets up & sees her leg is not in a position to move.Yet slowly makes attempt to get up ?& succeeds finally.She sees all around & notices Baaji at a distance who is also hurt & sitting with a stick in his hand .Gajri looks at him & gets irritated & comes to him..............
"Teri wajah se,teri wajah se hua hain yeh sabkuch.Pata nahi Nakku kaisi hogi,kahaan hogi.Main teriko kabhi maaf nahi karegi " shouts Gajri.
Poor thing wat did Baji do...???!!!!!!!!!! ....i wonder why baji didn strangle her still..???!!!!!!!

"Shhhhhhhhhhh................,yeh jungle hain.Teri adda nahi.Yahaan chillayegi to jhitne bhi saare Sher hongena ek saath yahaan aajayenge.TAb meripar chillanekeliye na tu zinda rahegi aur na main.Aur waise,teriko yaad dilaadoon,jhagda tune modli thi.Maine nahi.Mera paisa bhi tune looti thi .Maine nahi.Aur ab iss jungle main phasa hoon main teri wajah se hi." Baaji too gets angry.
haye.....
"Achchaaa...................Sab meri galti hain.Aur tera kuch nahi? ha?...Kisne kaha tha meri haath pakadneko jab main BUS mein chadnehi jaarahi thi.Kisne kaha tha meri par girne ko jiske wajah se jungle mein aa tapke dodno..........Tune meri ko choone ka himmat kaise ki".......
Shout Gajri again.
Suddenly she hears a tiger's roar & gets frightened & Huggs Baaji who stand shell shocked........
Bas....yeh Kami thi..aur woh bhi puuri hui..>!!!!!! i love you Saaki...!!!!!!

Babi while returning hears some lady's voice & turns to there.............
"Kishore,najaane kitne dinon se maine iss waqt ki intezaar kiya hain.Main apni manzil ki itni kareeb aakar vapas nahi jaasakti " says Kala to her husband.

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Babi after silently watching everything says to herself,
"Najaane kaise kaise log rehte hain iss duniya main.Hey Bappa dekh raha haina tu".
Babi starts to move forward.
Eww Babi...!!!!!! you were listening to a husband wife's conversation..??!!!!!!!


Dutta & Nakku are still walking in the Jungle without even able to find any way out of Jungle nor finding their friends.
Nakku gets tired & she feels dizzy & sits on a rock besides her.Dutta suddenly stops moving & turns back at Nakku & sees her.He realises that there is a small lake besides where they were standing.
Nakku slowly opens her eyes & sees water in front of her which was kept in the bowl of leaves & which was held by DUtta.She sees him once.Dutta too silently gazes at her & signals her to take the water.
Nakku takes it with both her hands & drinks it.She gazes at Dutta all the time she was drinking who was trying to find out the way where Baaji & Gajri would have gone.
Dutta suddenly sees that the bowl of leaves in which there is little water left is infront of him.
Nakku signals him to take some water himself too.Dutta gazes at her first & lowers his gaze & takes the bowl himself & he too drinks the water innocently.
Nakku stares at him all the way with a smile running through her face.

Haye...the last scene reminded me of the jungle scene that happend in the serial..>!!!!! it's nice to see Nakku stare at dutta...[spclly the mesmerised kinda stare..!! ]....!!!! i wonder when will Dutta stare at Nakku like that..?????!!


Precap : Gajri falls into a gutter which are made to catch the wild animals.Baaji turns back & sees Gajri in the gutter . He sees her seriously for sometime & burst out Laughing laoudly...........
Gajri gets irritated...........
Nakku & Dutta are sitting infront of fire in night,
"Aapko dekhkar kagta nahi ki aap sukoon ki zindagi jeerahe hain.Aisa lagta hain aapki dil main bahut ghaav hain.Kya hua aapki zindagi main?" asks Nakku curiously.
Dutta sees at the fire & halfly smiles & turns towards Nakku...............................

the precap is freaking awesome..!!!! Dutta kind of smiles at her..???!!!! he's doing that first time to a ajnabhi..!!!! really curious to kno wat his story is..!!!!! Update soon Saaki..!!!!! and do PM me...!!!!!!!
love you....!!!!!





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PART 12

Baaji looks at Gajri .Gajri who was so frightened keeps hugging Baaji tightly..............
After sometime Gajri comes to her senses & moves back leaving Baaji.Gajri feels uncomfortable & speechless............Baaji too looks here & there........................
"Idhar udhar kya dekhrahi hain.........yehi khadi rahegi to koina koi sher to aayega hi aayega........Jaldi iss Jungle se nikalna hoga........." says Baaji to break the uncomfortable feeling which was eating them both.................................
Baaji moves forward..........Gajri too follows without saying anything..................
Dutta drinks water & throws the leafy-bowl..............stares at Nakku who was smilingly gazing at her................Seeing Dutta ,she lowers her gaze..............
"Pata nahi iss Jungle mein kaha bhatakrahe honge dono............Shyaam hone ko aayi hain.....yahaan to koi raasta bhi nazar nahi aarahii.........Najaane kab niklenge iss Jungle se.........................." Says Dutta trying to find the way out of Jungle..............
Nakku & Dutta starts walking again in the Jungle which was surrounded by beautifull greenaries all around & which was very calm & silent......................
"Waise,aap uss din Puraane Mandir ke paas kya karrahe the?" asks Nakku.........
Dutta stops & again starts to walk without giving any answer to Nakku..............
"Suna hai aap Satya Bhao ke saath kaam karte ho...........koi dandha karte ho.........Galat haina yeh.........Kaiko aisa kaam karte ho??" Nakku continues her questions...........
"Jab Insaan ke zindagi main insaan se zyaada majboori bolne lagti haina,tab insaan sahi aur galat ke baare main sochna chod deta hai.............Aur tu kiss galat ki baat karrahi hain.....tune to Khud hi apni chehra chupaake phirti hain.Kissliye?" Dutta asks Nakku back............
"Apni aayi keliye" Nakku answers this time.....................
Dutta sees her standing silently very he stood.............
"Meri ek Taayi thi..........Roopa naam thi uski..........Bahut sundar thi.Pan uski khoobsoorati par duniyawaalon ki nazar padhgayi......Uss Raju ne taayi ko apni pyaar mein pehle phasaaya.phir Paise ka laalach dikhaaya.......Taayi behak gayi aur chali gayi Dubaiiiiii.............Aayi ne bahut rokne ki koshish ki..........Pan Taayi nahi suni...Tab se AAyi darti hain iss chehre se.........Kahiin meri saath bhi aisa hi na hojaaye.......Iss liye tab se kaalick pokhdi meripar......Aayi keliye main aajtak aise hi jeeti aayi hai.......Bhale hi Duniya ke liye main "Galat" hai.Pan,Aayi ke liye main sahi hi karrahi hain.Basti main rehnewaali ladki keliye "Khoobsoorati" ek shraap hota hai" Nakku opens her secret in-front of Dutta..................
Dutta silently listens to everything she said & felt very sad for the girl standing in-front of him as well as started respecting her for the sacrifice she was doing for her mother's sake...............
"Chalo"...............Dutta moves forward followed by Nakku...............................
"Gajri,Nakku ko kabhi akele mat chod.Jitna jaldi hosake nikal jaao tum log yahaan se.Jab yahaan sab theek hojaayegi,Nakku ko koi achchi aasra miljaayegi,tab main khud bulaayegi tum dononko.Sambhaalna Gajri"

"Kaaki,meri pe bharosa nahi hain teriko?Tu bilkul bhi tension mat le.MAin haina,vaada karti Nakku ko kuch nahi hoga.Tu bas apni khayaal rakh."

Gajri keeps thinking about all that happened................
"Kaaki ne kini bharosa karke kaha tha ki Nakku ko sambhaalo.........Aur main........." Gajri cries & keeps thinking about her Kaaki's words again & again.................
Suddenly Gajri falls to the Gutter......&....screams..................

Baaji who was moving ahead,turns back & runs to where Gajri was there.............
Baaji sees her once seriously.....Then burst out Laughing.......................
Gajri who was already in tears,gets irritated yet keeps quite...Baaji stops for a while & sees that Gajri has tears in her eyes & she is quite sad......then gives her his hand......
Gajri looks on to Baaji first & stand still.....................
"Haath dede....Ab Gutter main rehkar to ladaayi mat karr...Chal de apna haath" Baaji asks her lovingly.................

Gajri gives him hand & Baaji lifts her out of the Gutter.......................
"Waise to bahut bolti hain...Pan utna hi darti hai...Aur mujhe nahi pata tha.Darr ke wajah se aasoo bhi bahaar aate hai teri aankhon se........." says Baaji searching for the reason of her tears in her.........................

"Maine Kaaki ko promise kari thi ki Nakku ki khayaal rakhegi......Pan,main khud yahaan aake phasgayi....Pata nahi Nakku kaisi hogi........Mujhe bahut darr lagrahi hain" Gajri looks worried..........................

Baaji notices her keenly & gets surprised to see her so much frightened as he has never seen Gajri like that....................
"Dekho,Ghabrana mat.......Who,Mere Dost wahaan pe.........Woh teri dost ko akela to nahi chodega.Woh dodno zaroor saath honge.Phikar mat kar" Baaji tries to convince Gajri.
Gajri feels better & gazes at Baaji.........................
Nakku & Dutta are feeling very tired & it was getting very dark............So,Both decides to stay at a place during the dark..............
Dutta brings some wood pieces & puts it infront of Nakku.............
Nakku takes her Bag & takes out match box & lights it..............

They both sit in-front of Fire keeping their hands at to fire to get some warmth from it.......
" Aapko dekhkar kagta nahi ki aap sukoon ki zindagi jeerahe hain.Aisa lagta hain aapki dil main bahut ghaav hain.Kya hua aapki zindagi main"........Asks Nakku seeing at Dutta .........
Dutta gazes at the Fire & looks back at Nakku with a half-smile in his face........
"Kuch khaas nahi......Wahi hua jo har uss ladke ki zindagi main hota hain jiske aayi-baaba uske zindagi se door hojaate hain...........Zindagi ne hamesha mere saath mazaak kiya hain......Baaba ne mujhe bade pyaar se paala.Pan,shaayad uska meri zindagi main saath rehna likha nahi tha.........Ek din mandir se aate waqt,baaba ka khoon hogaya kuch gundon se.........Baaba ka khoon ki khabar sunkar Aayi bhi dum todli........Phir meri Taayi ,uski raksha,apni zindagi .yeh sab mera zindagi bangayi............Rone tak ka waqt nahi tha meri paas..........Ek dhaaba mein kaam karraha tha ,chota sa kholi bhi banaya..............Pan,uss aadmi ka chehra jisne baba ka khoon kiya meri dhimaak mein baithgayiiiiiii thi..............Ek din sadak pe jaaraha tha to dekh uss aadmi ko ........Bhaag raha tha........Khudko rok nahi paaya aur main bhi usske peeche jaake churi daaldi uski pet mein.......Police thaane bhi gaya aur darr bhi gaya apneliye nahi taayi keliye...............Phir maine jiss aadmi ko maara,usski dushman log mujhe thaane se chudaake dhande main rakhdiya...........Bus,shuru hogayi yeh kaam............Najaane kitne log mare hain in haaton se.......Jab bhi kisiko maarta hoon,sochta hoon ki apni majboori ne mujhe kaha laake khada kardiya................................." Dutta lowers his gaze as feeling bad about himself & turns to look at Nakku who had tears in her eyes.............................
"Ab main apne hi dhanda shuru karna chahta hain........Pan,usskeliye pehle Bhao ki kaam khatam karna hoga.........Pata nahi woh bhi hopaayega ya nahi" says Dutta seeing at Jungle & the Dark knight.................
"Agar itni takleef deti hain aapko yeh kaam to chod do" Nakku says to Dutta with her innocent eyes pointing at Dutta........
Dutta sees her with his mouth open ...........
Precap : "Baaji..............Baaji........................." shouts Gajri seeing Baaji nowhere around her & gets scared to the core.............
Dutta slowly opens his eyes & sees that Nakku is sleeping on his shoulders & her hair covers her face due to the cool breeze of Jungle.......................
Ok..........Frds..........It is quite a long one...........
Hope you all enjoyed this one....................Plzzzz....do comment......................



Edited by kateleode - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
yayiiiiii first one to comment loved your update
dialogues were just simply wonderful
so touchy n meaningful yet so typically Mumbai ya 😳😳
I loved your dialogues in this update more than anything😳😳👏👏👏👏
jaldi se update karo am waiting for more


Edited by princessmithai - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great update dear...
precap is amazing....waitng..
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tat was a quick update Saaki..!!!!


Baaji looks at Gajri .Gajri who was so frightened keeps hugging Baaji tightly..............
After sometime Gajri comes to her senses & moves back leaving Baaji.Gajri feels uncomfortable & speechless............Baaji too looks here & there........................"Idhar udhar kya dekhrahi hain.........yehi khadi rahegi to koina koi sher to aayega hi aayega........Jaldi iss Jungle se nikalna hoga........." says Baaji to break the uncomfortable feeling which was eating them both.................................

ahh...tat must be a bit embaressing...!!!



"Pata nahi iss Jungle mein kaha bhatakrahe honge dono............Shyaam hone ko aayi hain.....yahaan to koi raasta bhi nazar nahi aarahii.........Najaane kab niklenge iss Jungle se.........................." Says Dutta trying to find the way out of Jungle..............

Arrey baba..itni bhi jaldi kya hai.???!!!!!!


"Suna hai aap Satya Bhao ke saath kaam karte ho...........koi dandha karte ho.........Galat haina yeh.........Kaiko aisa kaam karte ho??" Nakku continues her questions..........."Jab Insaan ke zindagi main insaan se zyaada majboori bolne lagti haina,tab insaan sahi aur galat ke baare main sochna chod deta hai.............Aur tu kiss galat ki baat karrahi hain.....tune to Khud hi apni chehra chupaake phirti hain.Kissliye?" Dutta asks Nakku back............

wooo..i loved the explaination he gave..>!!
"Apni aayi keliye" Nakku answers this time.....................
Dutta sees her standing silently very he stood.............

"Meri ek Taayi thi..........Roopa naam thi uski..........Bahut sundar thi.Pan uski khoobsoorati par duniyawaalon ki nazar padhgayi......Uss Raju ne taayi ko apni pyaar mein pehle phasaaya.phir Paise ka laalach dikhaaya.......Taayi behak gayi aur chali gayi Dubaiiiiii.............Aayi ne bahut rokne ki koshish ki..........Pan Taayi nahi suni...Tab se AAyi darti hain iss chehre se.........Kahiin meri saath bhi aisa hi na hojaaye.......Iss liye tab se kaalick pokhdi meripar......Aayi keliye main aajtak aise hi jeeti aayi hai.......Bhale hi Duniya ke liye main "Galat" hai.Pan,Aayi ke liye main sahi hi karrahi hain.Basti main rehnewaali ladki keliye "Khoobsoorati" ek shraap hota hai" Nakku opens her secret in-front of Dutta..................

THANKGOD.....atleast she said it over here...not like i wont say it till ayi says it to tell...!!!! Credit goes to you Saaki..thankyou...!


Gajri keeps thinking about all that happened................
"Kaaki ne kini bharosa karke kaha tha ki Nakku ko sambhaalo.........Aur main........." Gajri cries & keeps thinking about her Kaaki's words again & again.................

Poor think....i feel soo sad for her....!!!!

Baaji sees her once seriously.....Then burst out Laughing.......................

Gajri who was already in tears,gets irritated yet keeps quite...Baaji stops for a while & sees that Gajri has tears in her eyes & she is quite sad......then gives her his hand......Gajri looks on to Baaji first & stand still....................."Haath dede....Ab Gutter main rehkar to ladaayi mat karr...Chal de apna haath" Baaji asks her lovingly.................

Awww....tat was sooooo sweeeeet of him....even after she did all that him...!!!!

Baji seems to be all phiglaoing after seeing tears..??!!!!!!


"Dekho,Ghabrana mat.......Who,Mere Dost wahaan pe.........Woh teri dost ko akela to nahi chodega.Woh dodno zaroor saath honge.Phikar mat kar" Baaji tries to convince Gajri.

now this is called giving confidence....


Dutta brings some wood pieces & puts it infront of Nakku.............

Nakku takes her Bag & takes out match box & lights it..............

Hahaha...this is quite sensible....not like she lights fire from stones...!!!


" Aapko dekhkar kagta nahi ki aap sukoon ki zindagi jeerahe hain.Aisa lagta hain aapki dil main bahut ghaav hain.Kya hua aapki zindagi main"........Asks Nakku seeing at Dutta .........
Dutta gazes at the Fire & looks back at Nakku with a half-smile in his face........
"Kuch khaas nahi......Wahi hua jo har uss ladke ki zindagi main hota hain jiske aayi-baaba uske zindagi se door hojaate hain...........Zindagi ne hamesha mere saath mazaak kiya hain......Baaba ne mujhe bade pyaar se paala.Pan,shaayad uska meri zindagi main saath rehna likha nahi tha.........Ek din mandir se aate waqt,baaba ka khoon hogaya kuch gundon se.........Baaba ka khoon ki khabar sunkar Aayi bhi dum todli........Phir meri Taayi ,uski raksha,apni zindagi .yeh sab mera zindagi bangayi............Rone tak ka waqt nahi tha meri paas..........Ek dhaaba mein kaam karraha tha ,chota sa kholi bhi banaya..............Pan,uss aadmi ka chehra jisne baba ka khoon kiya meri dhimaak mein baithgayiiiiiii thi..............Ek din sadak pe jaaraha tha to dekh uss aadmi ko ........Bhaag raha tha........Khudko rok nahi paaya aur main bhi usske peeche jaake churi daaldi uski pet mein.......Police thaane bhi gaya aur darr bhi gaya apneliye nahi taayi keliye...............Phir maine jiss aadmi ko maara,usski dushman log mujhe thaane se chudaake dhande main rakhdiya...........Bus,shuru hogayi yeh kaam............Najaane kitne log mare hain in haaton se.......Jab bhi kisiko maarta hoon,sochta hoon ki apni majboori ne mujhe kaha laake khada kardiya................................." Dutta lowers his gaze as feeling bad about himself & turns to look at Nakku who had tears in her eyes.............................

.....tat was really saad.....!!!

"Agar itni takleef deti hain aapko yeh kaam to chod do" Nakku says to Dutta with her innocent eyes pointing at Dutta........Dutta sees her with his mouth open ...........
hahahaha..soooo cute...!!!!!!!!

Precap : "Baaji..............Baaji........................." shouts Gajri seeing Baaji nowhere around her & gets scared to the core.............
Dutta slowly opens his eyes & sees that Nakku is sleeping on his shoulders & her hair covers her face due to the cool breeze of Jungle.......................
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG.....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SERIOUSLY...???!!!!!!!! ......


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Posted: 14 years ago
hey saaki
great update hun..loved the tasha scene..even baji n gajri one
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Posted: 14 years ago
ohhhhoooo saakiji dil khush kar diya aapne😛😛😛
so nice update yaar.👏👏👏... loved it😉😉😉
i like d datta's attitude haaan
nakku is so innocent😊😊
baji n gajari are amazing yaar😆😆😆😆
tnkx 4 d long update saakiji
nice precap....😲😲😲 waiting🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱
Edited by sonee - 14 years ago

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