FF : KKTM UPDATED.Part33:Sath nibhayenge on pg 106 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: 2010huma

Thanks for updating soon... loved it...eagerly waiting for the next update

Thx for replying yaar.
Am glad you loved it.Next i will update on Tuesday dear.
Thx once again.



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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
wait.... so naku is really dark in real in this FF? cool...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13
awesome Saki.......it sounds interesting.......update soon......
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: 2010huma

wait.... so naku is really dark in real in this FF? cool...

Yes dear.Her "Face secret " thing I am keeping in my FF also.Just to have the concept of LTL intact.



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Posted: 15 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: swati2008

awesome Saki.......it sounds interesting.......update soon......

Awwwwwwwwww.................Thx Swati ...........
Will update soon the next part.Hope u like that as well.😃.



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Posted: 15 years ago
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plz dutta ki entry jaldi karo do................
plz pm me whn u update.
Edited by moully - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: moully

plz dutta ki entry jaldi karo do................

plz pm me whn u update.

K dear.Sure will Pm.I will bring him in my third part.I will give you the precap in my next part.
Thx for replying. .



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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice FF

update soon and PM me when u update
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Irika95

Nice FF

update soon and PM me when u update

Sure babes.Rt now I am doing it.Will be updated soon.



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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART 2

"Taayi,kya karrahi hain darwaaze ke saamne?khana dena taayi" alerted by Sethji's words Nakku turns inside & again looks back at the door ,moves back to sethji who is very hungry & waiting for his taayi to feed him fastly.
"Dekh ,zindagi char din ki hoti hain maamu.Khaane ka,sone ka ,mast rehna ka kya?"Laughs a guy near the mandir with his friends.
Suddenly he was hit behind & falls to ground .Angrily looks at behind to see Babi standing with a danda.
"Teri ko ab tak akal nahi aayana.Pichli baar boli thi teri ko zyaada ud mat,apni aukad pe rahe.Par tu to kabhi sunta nahi naalayak.phir se tang karraha tha Kusuma ko ki woh teri ko paisa de.Aa mein deti hain teri ko" Babi lifts her danda .
"Yeh Babi,nahi re nahi.Marna nahi meri ko.Nahi tang karega teri dost ko"Ali fumbles.But,Babi is BAbi starts hitting continuously & suddenly gets full tired & sits on the ground as Ali escapes.
"Babi,tu theek to hain......??"Ask Kusuma worried.
"Aayi ..Aayi................"Babi looks at the way her daughter NAkku is coming running to her with all worry in her face.Babi signals Nakku "That she is alrite" to her worried daughter.
"Aayi kaiko itna ladti ho.Teri se hota nahi hain re.Kyun nahi samajhti Aayi?"She helps her Aayi to get up.
"Kuch nahi hoga Nakku.Chinta mat kar meri.Tu jaa.Teri factory ke liye dair horahi hain.Jaa tu jaa".
Tells to NAkku.
Nakku still worried leave to her factory where she works all day .
"Suna tum logone?Wahan uss purane hawaali ke peeche jo ghar hain wahan pe aag lagi thi aur sunne mein aaya hain ki woh aag koi Ladka ne lagai thi.Uss ghar mein ek aadmi rehta tha jo hamesha ladkiyon pe buri nazar daalta tha.Suna hain Uss ladke ko aise logon se bahut nafrat hain.Jo ladkiyon ko chidata hain usski to jaan leleta hain.Waise to koi nahi hain uska.BAs Ek Behen hain usski." the lady was talking sitting next to NAkku.NAkku silently listening to her.
"Woh ladka to basti main naya aaya haina?"Asks another lady .
"Haan.Pata nahin kaha se aaya hain.Par suna hain bahut imandar hain.woh Satya hain na ,wahi Gangster Satya uski yahan kaam karta hain.Kaafi log darte hain usse.Suna hain Ladka hoshyaar bhi hain aur kaafi ghusse waala.Use jo pasand na aaye usse to udahi deta hain."
"Kya bol rahi ho?Waise sahi hain.YEh dandhe main rehne waale hote hi aise hain.Inse to baat karne se pehle hazzar baar sochna padta hain.Chodna hamein kya?"
Lady murmers.
Nakku hearing the convo becomes quite curious to know whats with this guy who wants to fight the person whom he doesnot know just for the sake that that person or lady is teased by someone.
After the day's hectic work,Nakku starts returning to home.This day she worked over-time as a result,it is totally dark while she was returning.Nakku has to work over-time for her aayi.Aayi is suffering from sugar & she has to be given medicines time to time.All her medicines,family's necessities has to be fullfilled by Nakku's earnings.Nakku has no choice of not working over-time.
As Nakku is moving,she comes across the "Haweli" & the small house behind that which was burnt badly.She remembers the lady's words & again looks at the house & the guy who has died in that.
"Dutta ko kaun samjha sakta hain ki usse itne bhi ghussa nahi karna chahiye.Ladke ka umr bhi kya hain abhi par Ghussa to aisa nikalta hainjaise ki saath janmon ka nikalraha ho".
"Dutta"..............whispered NAkku.
She starts walking again to her way to home .Suddenly stopped by a group of people surrounded at a distance.She becoming curious to know "Whats the matter" goes near that.
"Dutta,humein pata hain tere ko bahut ghussa aata hain.Par,iskeliye kisika jaan hi lele yeh theek baat nahi.Bhale hi teri Dhanda kuch bhi ho,par yeh basti hain,yahan to teri koi dushman nahi.Kyun utarraha hain apni ghussa aisa?Yahan to thoda shanti se rehsakta haina tu?"
Shyaam kaka,jo basti ke buzurg hain aur basti mein har koi uska manta hain,woh Dutta ko samjha rahe the.
NAkku listening to this turns towards the guy whom Shyaam kaka was talking to.................
Precap : A guy is seen cutting the wood pieces with his axe.The Angry look in his eyes makes you feel you are going to be eaten.The hands which are so tough & strong that whoever sees that would accept their defeat before fighting.Listening to Kaka's words,he stops axeing the wood pieces & turns his head left to right & Turns to see KAka behind whom Nakku is standing seeing Dutta with Amaze.
Hope you all like this one.
Plzzzzzzzzz.............Do comment guys.😊.
Edited by kateleode - 15 years ago

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