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saakshi

@--Saaki--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: Irika95
wow what a precap wating 4 the next part plzz update asap

Sure Irika.

Will do it Asap.Thx a lot for replying..............................

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saakshi

@--Saaki--

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: kiran255
OMG Saaki 😛
loved the update 😆

loved the character of Gajiri

and dear

not fair kahan roka hai tum nay

its a cliff hanger 😡

i sooooooo want to see Dutta expression but no worries

update soon 😉

Thanks for pming 😊

Kirannnnnnnnnnnnnnnn................ .............................Kal tak thodi sabr karlo yaar .Tomorrow I will update the next part & it will be a bit longer one..........I am damn sure you will love it. .

Thx a lot for replying...........................

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saakshi

@--Saaki--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: suhana19
Hey saakhi thanx for the update and PM yaar 🤗 loved the baaji and gajri convo 😆 ..the promo looks really intersting...wow face revelation in nxt part that too in front of dutta ...pls jaldi update karna...take care and see u around 👏 👍🏼 🤗

Suhana.......................... ....................I am sooooo glad you liked Gajri darling.

Will update soon .U too take care .Love you....................

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saakshi

@--Saaki--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#164

PART 8

"Nakku tu kuch bhi bol,apnni basti main aakar bhuta khaane ki jo mazaa haina ,wo kahin aur nahi . Aur aaj to bonus mila hain tere saath khaane ka.Bahut mazaa aaraha hain" Gajri smiles broadly.

Nakku watches her friend for a while with a broad smile on her face,a guy is running towards her in the behind.Nakku still gazing at her friend,remembers how she & Gajri used to crave for Bhutta when they were very young.She felt like she was living the moment again.

Then she was suppposed to take the bite of the Bhutta,the guy hits her & she accidently falls in the lake.

"NAkkuuuuuuuuuuu................"Shouts Gajri.

Dutta who was running behind the guy stops hearing GAjri's voice near the lake.

Gajri calls her back.But,there was no sign of NAkku.Dutta comes running & stands near Gajri.......

Gajri almost had tears in her eyes again shouts loudly.

Dutta cathes the guy &hits him right & left,leaves him on the floor taking the paisa from him & returns to the lady who came near lake.

Turns back to see Gajri who is all worried as she doesnot know to swim .Dutta sees her & sees at the lake & about to go into the lake to save NAkku,slowly he sees someone coming out of the lake.

Dutta watches the person infront of him with his mouth wide open.CAnt understand whats happening.

Gajri gets tensed looking at Nakku.Nakku tries to hide her face ,she lowers her gaze with fear running over her face.Fear of people around her who were looking at her with their eyes wide open & talking about her all the way.................

"Arey,paani main dubki maari aur yeh to kaali se gori bangayi" says a lady standing near the lake.

Dutta still gazing at her ,after sometime realises that a lot of people have surrounded near lake.He looks at Nakku who is so frightened & throws her a look of care & content in his eyes.He himself takes the first step & goes to her & stands near her.

Nakku who has lowered her gaze,slowly sees Dutta infront of her.He takes her vail & raps it around her & holds her shoulder & makes her move from the lake.

Nakku gazes continuously at Dutta all the way from lake to the land.

Gajri too helps him.

"Aajtak aisa item dekha nahi boss" a guy says at the lake.Dutta stares angrily at the guy & he ,with his friends leave from there.Looks back at Nakku who was very frightened & had tears in her eyes.Dutta was confused & was not knowing "whats with this girl".Yet he couldnot see tears in her eyes.

"NAkku ,tu theek to hain" Asks Gajri anxiously.Tears were coming out of her eyes as well.

NAkku finding very difficult to smile nodds to Gajri saying "Yes".

Dutta leaves Nakku's arm & gazes at her.NAkku too gazes at him once hesitatingly.Without asking anything,Dutta leaves from there........

NAkku still gazing at Dutta,sees him going silently without even making any comments or any tease.

"Nakku,chal jaldi ghar chalte hain."GAjri takes her by her arm .

"Pata nahi kya locha hain.Yeh kaali se bilkul gori bangayi" says a Lady.

"Aye,Nakku kaali hain ya gori ,isse tujhe kya?Jaa tu apni kaam dekhna" angrily replies GAjri to which the lady stops.

"Kya khade khade dekhrahe ho sab.Arey jaao apni apni kaam dekho........"everybody leaves from there to Gajri's angry roar.

NAkku walking back home remembers with amaze how Dutta came & helped her .How he gave that nasty look to the guy who was teasing her.

Precap : "Ab kya hoga iss ladki kaa?Yeh log,yeh duniya chodegi kya isse?" cries loudly Baabi.NAkku sits with no xpression on her face.

Dutta is laying on the bed with his eyes open & remembers Nakku with a question mark in his face .

I thought of making it big.But couldnot do it .So,I hope you enjoy this small update.

Do comment.......................

Edited by kateleode - 14 years ago

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shonapinky

@shonapinky

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#165

Hey sweet angel....awwwwwwesum yaar....!!❤️loved it....!!! loved d face revelation in diz part...and in d precap...dutta remembring naku...!!😍cant wait 4 ur next update...keep rocking yaar....!!!!!!

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nazia.icycool

@nazia.icycool

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#166

i agree with shona...😆
i wanted more but as u said it was short but very sweeet 😍 ...the precap looks romantic too..so will be waiting for the update...
BTW nakku-dutta gazing rocks!!!1 😎
thanx for the PM saaki..

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saakshi

@--Saaki--

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: shonapinky
Hey sweet angel....awwwwwwesum yaar....!!❤️loved it....!!! loved d face revelation in diz part...and in d precap...dutta remembring naku...!!😍cant wait 4 ur next update...keep rocking yaar....!!!!!!

ANGEL............................... ...................................

I am sssssssoooooooooooooooo...................HAppy that you loved this part.I hope I have done justice to Face revelation part.

Yup,Next update,I will promise you will be the longer one....................... ....

Thx a ton for reading & commentinggggggg................

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Nikita

@niki_2293

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#168

you write so well tht i dont have words to describe ur FF....i read ur whole FF......n found it lovly 👏 ....this is for u...just from me.........u hav done a brilliant job 😊

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saakshi

@--Saaki--

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: nazia.icycool
i agree with shona...😆
i wanted more but as u said it was short but very sweeet 😍 ...the precap looks romantic too..so will be waiting for the update...
BTW nakku-dutta gazing rocks!!!1 😎
thanx for the PM saaki..

Thx NAzzzzzzooooooooo............. ............

Hey,I am really sorry I had to keep this short.But,I promise next one will be longer one .Today I couldnot do much.

I am glad you liked "Gazing" session of TaSha.

Thx a lottttttttttt.........for your valuable comments dear.IT means a lot to me..........................

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saakshi

@--Saaki--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: niki_2293
you write so well tht i dont have words to describe ur FF....i read ur whole FF......n found it lovly 👏 ....this is for u...just from me.........u hav done a brilliant job 😊

Hey, thx a lot nikki.You too are AWEsome.........I have commented for your FF .Check that out.

I am so happy to know that you liked my work.......Thank you sooooooooo .much for reading all the parts & for such a encouraging comments..................Love you.....................

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