ff-pkp-pt7/pg27 updated 6th june - Page 23

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Posted: 15 years ago
Fabulous update Marie ...
So very well written ....👏👏
u bought out the emotions so well ...
I almost felt like crying ...& the last part waz simply Mind blowing ..
Keep it up & Update soon ..!
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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing update marie loved the part
dutta is just 😍... and the last part was just awesome...

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Posted: 15 years ago
Amazing story can't wait for the next update😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
wonderful FF.finally datta realised his mistake and also the value of Naku in his life.
Waiting eagerly for next part.
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Posted: 15 years ago
marie!!...i started reading it....got very very emotional...dutta ko kitni fikr ai yaar nakku ki.. 😕 ...i had to gulp a hundred tyms to stop the tears from runnin down my cheeks.. 😕 ..i continued reading it..and when i read dutta baji..dutta-nakku convo..i just burst out crying.... 😭 kuch zyaada hi seni hogayi thi..then i had to clear my eyes to read further..and finaaly completed it....and it was WoOOOooowwww...i dont think the CV will do enuff justice to this track as much as u have done... 👏 ....well done!!!....and yes finally im laffin here 😆 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sana786a

awww marie dutta is sooo adorable i luved da way u showed his pain and da last part was amazing love dit update asap and i hope u studys r going well😃

hey sana..m glad u enjoyed this part..i know this dutta will be more adorable😉..have ideas but difficulty in arranging them..still will try to update soon😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: raziya56

loved it...jus the emotions in dutta sprang up in todays FF and it was well worth the wait. 👍🏼

hey raziya😃..thanks for the comments
m glad you are enjoying this
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: jani-yeh

wow Marie...👏⭐️👏...so cool reading a FF upd8 4m u after sooooo long...i knw i knw u been busy wiv study...iss liye i dint mention or beg 4 a upd8 in any of our convo's...😳😆...

ur upd8 was super...😃😉...big wow on all the comforting that was goin on...
espesh the huggin n crying Dutta did in his aayi's arms......
luved the convo between Dutta n Baji...😳...
awww n all the things Dutta was saying 2 Naku while she was unconscious...🥺...
the bit @ the end was...😍...
Whoa-K so now i cnt w8 2 read ur next up8...hope its soon...😉...
catch ya on wenz...🤗 mwahz...

jani🤗🤗..m so glad u enjoyed this part.mwahz
will try to continue soon😃
i m so fed up with angry dutta...the more angryb they show him the more romantic i will make him here😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: jess_dutta

hey marie..great part yaar

really enjoyed..loved dutta dialogue to naku..you showed his emotions quite well
cant wait for more tasha scenes ...hope you update soon

hey jess😃
m so glad u enjoyed this part..will try to update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sajinisingh

hey u updated after ages..loved it tho..very emotional..bt yaar am abt upset nw..my ff n ur ff are looking kind of same at this scene except in mine dutta is dying..they sound too similar n now i have to change it 😳 n i was jus about to upload it yaar 😆 never mind its ok yaar not ur fault..just pure coincidence i guess 😆 you know what they say..great minds think alike 😉 wating for next part😊

saj

hey saj..gald u liked it
sorry for the similarity hun..but u r true great minds do think alike
near death experience is always life changing help us to realise how imp the person really isEmbarrassed

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