Angry Datta after truth of Nakku reveals!!!! - Page 5

sarala...dont go by what i say...take the story as you want it. coming to the holi segment i liked the first bit...where the color falls on him accidently and everyone thinks he will give them a "datta bhao" punishment. but only thing he does is wish naku. thats soooooooo datta shreeram patil.
but the later part where naku puts color on him i think you went a little out of character. maybe becuz u were trying to fulfill all my demands...bashing up guys, hug et al. so sarala pls continue but on ur own way.

sarala I have been a silent reader so far but I just wanted to say this today. You are awesome with your Fanfiction.. I like the pace. I just finished reading the latest part as well as catching up alll the missed episodes and had to say something about it. Just like I am not too thrilled with mushy Datta in Naku's dream on the show I felt that Datta's confession to Naku in your story has to be a little hatke as well. Blurting out the feelings in the state of nasha is just not Datta.. He has to be in full hosh hawas and in the confession has tobe in typical datta style.

Yes that 2nd part with the evning party is just not datta...maybe u can make the whole thing naku's dream. I dont want TaSha first hug and Datta's first acknowledgement of love to be with Datta all sloshed out. a little high is ok like he was in that "pain" scene...but he nearly abt to pass out and going and hugging naku and acknowledging that he cant lose her that doesnt gel with the datta we know.
but the first part is amazing...datta saying "holi mubarak ho" to naku...thats so datta!

wow sarala a drunk dutta confessing his love 2 naku nice 😊 keep it up u dont dissapoint

just love it yahr....keep it up....u wrtie a superb story....love it

OMG, awesome job saral!! especially the holi segment, finally someone taught thgat Sudarshan a lesson, i hate him soo much man! even more than that trio ><

hey sarala. this is a forum for the show fans. but i have to admit i am on this forum and writing because i am a fan of your writing too. i was never so involved in reading ff before that i just forgot to watch the episode. after i was done reading your story-addition i thought to myself --gosh--this is so not me. and i had to write to you.

Thankyou so much guys for having liked my FFs. But I must say it is the character Datta whicah has caught up one me. and I must confess I started watching the show only after Datta's entry.

oooo ok...waiting for the next one sarala...i'll let u think rather than give my stupid ideas.

Originally posted by: luvhuming

hey sarala. this is a forum for the show fans. but i have to admit i am on this forum and writing because i am a fan of your writing too. i was never so involved in reading ff before that i just forgot to watch the episode. after i was done reading your story-addition i thought to myself --gosh--this is so not me. and i had to write to you.

the way you are portrying dutta is fantastic --i have to agree with some fans though that i did not like drunk dutta confessing like a normal cheesy romantic hero. the way he is all 'kadak' but still has a heart is our datta. it is hard for him to say things like a normal person would do is not him.

hey --- iwanted to add something i noticed's. that idont know if you pay attention to or not. i do. notice how beautiful his hands are???? they are more 'gora' almost pink. and todays show when she puts the ring on his finger---i just kept going back to that part and start at his hands. they are so perfect. i was thinking ----why is he holding sups hands, she does not deserve them.

oh my god, that ring on his finger made his hand look -------. ok , i said enough i guess but hey go back and look at his hands. do u think so too? or its just me going crazy over his hands??

again, love ur writing. waiting for more.

tum is baat se andaaza laga sakti ho ke kitnay posts hain mere. tumhari writing se main likhnay par majboor hogayee.

shabana

datta's hands...they ARE nice...if u remember in the scene in front of the hospital where the public come to greet him...they keep focussing a LOT on his hands. and i want him to use those hands ONLY to hold naku and his gun. 😃