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Posted: 17 years ago
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NOVEMBER 26, 2007 WRITTEN UPDATE

SHORT UPDATE

    Mohini gets suspicious about Tulsi and the shovel
    A small pooja is arranged for Gautam & Damini's anniversary
    Nakul and Lakshya seem to upset Gayatri with their ways of talking which leads to Gayatri blaming Tulsi for everything
    Lakshya gets suspicious about Nakul but disregards it
  • ACP comes and arrests Gautam for murder

DETAILED UPDATE

IN SN LIVING ROOM

Tulsi*thinking to self*: I will ask the garderner about this shovel being in the garden and who dug up the ground, he must surely know

*Tulsi places the shovel on the table and Mohini sees this*

*Tusli leaves and Mohini approaches the shovel and touches it*

Mohini: a shovel? since when has this Tulsi Maiyya started gardening? HMM..let me go quickly and notify Daksha Dadi of this news

IN DAKSHA DADI'S ROOM

*-Daksha dreaming-Daksha dadi stirrs awake to hear someone singing 'gumnaam hai koi'. It is Tripti coming down the steps singing with a candle in her hand*

*Mohini walks in Daksha's room to see her lying down in her sleep chanting the Hanuman Chalisa*

Mohini: DAKSHA DADI!!

*Daksha gets up*

Daksha*still in shock*: Tripti, please forgive me, I didn't kill you! Mohini did!!

*Mohini yells Daksha dadi and switches on the light*

Mohini: Daksha Dadi! its me Mohini, not Tripti...

Daksha: oh its you Mohini? Ar ra ra...why are ghosts dress code always white?

Mohini: Hello, why their dress code is white, I don't know... but I know that they come in that person's dream whom they got killed by

Daksha: she doesn't come in your dreams?

Mohini: no

Daksha: She came in my dream and she was my friend. Just like in 'chamatkaar' how nasurdeen shah was friend's with SRK, just like that... she came in my dreams with her shovel type hands asking me, 'daksha dadi, who murdered me'?

Mohini: Tulsi maiyya...she came in and set a shovel down next to the flower vase

Daksha: with a shovel?

Mohini: something seems amiss, dadi...I hope its not like Tulsi maiyya had buried Tripti's body in the garden...

Daksha: We already have creamated her

Mohini: but that still leaves the truth about Tulsi maiyya hidden

Daksha: Tusli maiyya isn't the type to go sneaking around, she isn't like you

Mohini: oh really? she isn't like me? so why was there a shovel in her hand?

Daksha: Or maybe she saw someone with the shovel, and she's trying to hide the shovel to save the murderer...

NEXT MORNING

IN GAUTAM'S ROOM

*Eklavya opens the curtains and Gautam awakens. Kt and Damini smile at him*

Eklavya: Mom...Dad...happy anniversary

Gautam: Thank you

Kt: many happy returns of the day upon your marriage anniversary

Gautam: Thank you

Eklavya: in this time of happiness I've brought you a clock/watch. I hope time is always by your side [eku dear seems a bit uncomfortable acting happy lol]

Gautam*thinking*: time is what I really need right now

*Baa enters with a pooja thali*[she's so cute]

Baa: Gautam, Damini, congrats upon your wedding anniversary

*Damini and Gautam touch her feet and say thankyou. Baa blesses them and gives them prasad*

Baa: I had gone to the temple and served prasad, for your wellness

Eklavya: Well, Maa, don't you think in such a occasion there should be a party?

Damini: No Eklavya, such a situation is happening in the home and to give a party...

Eklavya: But mom, why not?

Damini: Try to understand Eklavya, that ACP Ragini looms around this home with danger. She thinks all of us to be a murderer, and any of our wrong steps could lead faulty

*Gautam seems disturbed*

Baa: Damini beta, we'll go through our happiness and sorrows together, if not a party we'll surely have a pooja, and this way the buri nazar[evil eye] will perish

*Damini agrees*

Kt: I'll do all the preparing for the pooja [I just love how these ppl are so estatic about doing pooja 24/7 ::sigh:: khair, they need it]

Gautam*thinking to self*: even if the knife disappeared, where did it disappear to?

IN LIVING ROOM OF SN

*Nakul is putting on his shoes, and Gayatri comes down the steps to him*

Gayatri: Beta, today we're having a pooja, where are you headed?

Nakul: to meet Sanchi

*Nakul gets up to leave but Gayatri grabs his arm and stops him*

Gayatri: no need, I've already told that girl to never come to this home again, and you will no longer meet her

*Tulsi hears this*

Nakul: where I go and where I won't...this decision I can make on my own [HALLELUJAH !!👏🥳 *pats Nakul on back* Thank God he stood up to her and is fighting for his love]

Gayatri: If you can't respect your dadi, then atleast respect your mother. You do remember no, that Tripti was completely against this relation

Nakul: and she came in between us, I am sure you know pretty well about what happened to her after that...And I am warning you also, don't try coming in between us either...or else it won't be good

*Nakul leaves. Lakshya is passing by him and stops to see Gayatri walking towards Tulsi*

Gayatri: all this Nakul may have said, but the words are yours. Before I had left this home the kids didn't even leave this home without the permission of their elders [like how old are they, 5? get out of the stone age lady...] But these days? these days they've started talking back! And why not, kids do the same as they see their elders do. And you never respected your elders, so obviously what would the kids learn?!

Lakshya: Dadi, why are you taking out Nakul Bhaiyya's anger upon Tulsi dadi [OH YOU GO SON!👏]

Gayatri: just now one has talked back and now another is questioning me? What I'll do and what I won't, this you will tell me? When elders are speaking, youngsters shouldn't interfere *looking at Tulsi* Did no one teach you that?

*Lakshya looks displeased and leaves*

Gayatri: while those 20years when you weren't at home, we were all living so peacefully!! Upon your returning everyone has changed...On your leaving you had taken Ansh and Savita Didi's lives and upon your returning you've taken Tripti's

*A tearful Tulsi leaves the room*

IN ANOTHER SN ROOM

*Lakshya enters a room*

Lakshya*thinking to self*: why is Gayatri Dadi after Tulsi Dadi? Why does she accuse even the littlest of crime upon her? why is she doing such?

*Lakshya shuts the door and accidently hurts his finger and it starts to bleed*

*Lakshya heads towards the bathroom and gets a flashback about Nakul's shoes*

Lakshya*thinking to self*: Did Nakul Bhaiyya...no no, what am I thinking...

IN DAKSHA DADI'S ROOM

*Daksha dadi is sitting with a notepad in hand singing 'yeh mera dil khoon ka deewana'. Mohini enters and sits next to her*

Mohini: dadi, what are you doing?

Daksha: I've been in thought about who actually murdered Tripti...I am writing down all the names...a face should come up

Mohini: let me see *snatches the notepad*

Daksha: all the names that are listed are of people who where not present during the murder..

Mohini: Tulsi Maiyya, Mihir Papa..Nakul...Mohini..Dadi! this is my name, why is my name here?!!

Daksha: hey, you can't cheat, no cheating *snatches notepad* but during the murder you disappeared didn't you?

Mohini: how did you know it was murder even before the postmortem report? So you were absent also! now write down your name on the hit list also!

*Mohini and Daksha argue about writing the name*

Mohini: but why are we fighting dadi, the killer is Sahil...he got backstabbed the worst

Daksha: no no, Sahil cannot do such

*Mohini and Daksha make a bet upon if Sahil is the murderer or not*

IN SN DURING POOJA TIME

Baa: arrey, there isn't any Kapur[I have no idea what this is] Gautam beta, go get kapur

Gautam: yes, Baa

*Gautam heads out to leave but runs into Tulsi. Tulsi tries to speak to him but he looks a bit uncomfortable and leaves. Daksha sees this*

Tulsi*thinking to self*: Why is Gautam avoiding me? There is surely something about it...

Daksha *to Mohini*: look look, how sternly Tulsi is looking at Gautam...beta, you've lost the bet. Not Sahil but Gautam committed the murder [vaah! kya parivaar hai, kitne khushi khushi se keh rahi hai ke 'humara ghar ka sadasya ek khooni hai']

Mohini: that ACP also looks at everyone with suspicion...let the decision be final dadi...uh, due to the rules of our bet, make sure you property papers are ready...

Daksha: just do aarti!

*Jai Ambe Gauri plays in background*

Tulsi*praying*: please protect our family, first let us come out of the shock of that incident

Lakshya*praying*: Nakul Bhaiyya doesn't have anything to do with the murder...but the blood on his shoes, that scares me...please protect Nakul Bhaiyya, Maa...

Sahil*praying*: please give rest to Tripti's soul, Maa...

*Baa tell Gautam Damini to do aarti together*

*Pooja is done and everyone takes aarti*

*ACP enters*

Sahil: ACP Ragini?

*10min shock sequence*

ACP: jai maa durga! Is this a pooja for Durga Maa, or a celebration for Tripti's death?

Mihir: ACP, I request you to leave this place. I don't wish for our pooja to be disturbed because of you.

*ACP walks to Damini and congratulates her on her marriage anniversary*

ACP: by the way, how long has it been since Tripti's murder? I think one week? and you all here are celebrating?

Mihir: this is enough. I think I have to call the commisioner now, thats the only way you'll understand. Are you leaving or not?

ACP: I will, but not alone...I am going to take the murderer with me... Tulsi Virani, I told you didn't I...I would show my face only when I would have proof...I have brought proof, and with this proof I will take the killer from here...

Gautam: who is the killer?

ACP: what's the hurry? I won't disturb this pooja, your beautiful wife wouldn't like it...Go ahead and celebrate a little more and after that mourn..I mean, my time begins after that...until then I will be like an uncalled visitor who will be stared down by all of your eyes...

Mihir: we've always been stared down by you...and as where the pooja stands, you've already disturbed it, now just say what you have to and quickly leave from here

ACP: Oh surely the killer will be gone *to Damini* in your home on your anniversary do you do a couple dance or do you touch your husbands feet? *Damini nods yes to this* to remain forever married? but if you touch his feet today, you will not recieve such a blessing...because today, the one who gives you sindoor now has blood stained on his hands...Gautam Virani, you are being arrested in the crime of Tripti Virani's murder

*10 min shock sequence*

*ACP holds up handcuffs infront of Gautam*

Tulsi: what are you saying? you surely must have been mistaken!

ACP: ACP Ragini Suravanshi doesn't catch the killer without any proof, BUT if she finds the proof she doesn't leave the killer...here is the killer and here is the arrest warrant

Tulsi: Arrest warrant?

*Tulsi takes the warrant from ACP's hands and starts to read it*

*Damini runs to Tulsi*

Damini: don't believe her words Maa! She only wants to trap Gautam... she didn't find anyone else, she just wants to use Gautam to put in jail and close this case... this is a mistake... *Damini grabs paper and shows it to ACP* you want to arrest Gautam on the basis of this warrant?? *Damini tears paper and throws it* Now what do you have! How will you arrest him??!!

Tulsi: Damini, calm down, we're all here no?

Damini: Guatam, don't be the least bit afraid, no one can take you anywhere!

Tulsi: ACP ma'am, I am saying again, you surely must be mistaken, Gautam cannot kill anyone!!

ACP: Every mother thinks that her son is very noble, but its not always like that Tulsi Virani...

Mihir: today you've crossed every limit ACP, how dare accuse my son without any proof

ACP: ACP Ragaini Suravanshi neither looks at strength nor shows strength without proof. You will all get the proof, but that, in court

Mihir: Stop ACP... you cannot arrest my son like this.

ACP: and who is going to stop me? You? Mihir Virani, today , not you but I will call the police commissioner , and that too with the entire police force, so that whoever stops me will be arrested also

Damini: Papa, Papa, please stop them, they're going to take away my Gautam--

Mihir: Damini, nothing will happen to Gautam. I will call my lawyer instantly, before Gautam reaches the police station my lawyer will reach there, he'll release Gautam

ACP: Your husband is a murderer! He has killed Tripti Virani! Don't have such false hopes that he'll return

Tulsi: Guatam isn't a killer, he can't kill!

*ACP walks out with Gautam. Damini cries as Mihir tries to support her. Everyone is left shocked*[except maybe eklavya who is halfway smiling]

episode ends

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Rating: 6.5/10
nothing too important happened besides Guatam's arrest

*JHANVI*

Edited by desigrl05 - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nakul: to meet Sanchi

WOW Nakul, way to go!!!!
Tell her you are going to meet Sanchi
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey jhanvi thx a lot for the update 😃 well gautam isnt the murderer coz whoever is shown the most inthe beg is not the culprit aage aage dekhte hai hota hai kya 😉
desigrl05 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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fully updated😳

-Jhanvi

akhl thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks a lot. Very nice update.
Wahida, kahan ho tum? Eklavya ko bolo bewaqt nahi muskurane ko. Ye koi toothpaste ka advertisement nahi ho raha hai. 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Gautam a killer???? i dont get this..... n yea wonder full update!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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woderful update, but i am sure gautam is not the muderer.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I wounder what will happen next

Thank you
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice updates.
keep up the good work.
you are the best.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i think the acp found the knife!
i dont think it wz gautam wh killed her!

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