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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 3

Neha is on top of Manthan in the tub, they both can't stop staring at each other. Song plays in the background. Manthan puts back a lock of hair that falls on neha's face, Neha tries to get up but falls back on him. Both continue to stare.

------------ Bhoomi come in -------------

Bhoomi: manthan, neha, yeh tum kya kar rahe ho? what r u doing?

neha and manthan snap out. Neha gets up and out of the tub. she gives a sharp glance to Manthan and goes out

Bhoomi: bhai, whats up, you n neha... n e thing you want to tell me about?

Manthan,: nothing, we got locked into the bathroom, we had a fight amnd she pushed me over.

Bhoomi: she pushed you alright, she made you fall really fast

Manthan: what?

Bhoomi goes out. Neha and Manthan meet in the corridoor, after a few hours. Manthan tries to say something, but Neha goes away into Nakul's room.

Nakul is on the laptop and is doing some research

Neha: hi nakul! what r u doing. she sits on the table where the lapto is placed.

Nakul: nothing, i just have to do research on stock market for my new project.

NeHA: I HAVE A REALLY GOOD WEBSITE YOU COULD GO TO, we use it in our training classes.

Neha leans over and is showing \nakul something on the net, but Nakul just looks at Neha's face. Music plays, Neha i stalking, but it seems like nakul can't hear her voice. he can only see her.

Neha: you understood, OK bye

nakul: bye

Neha: oh haan mai to bhool gaye, i forgot, i want everyone to gather in the hall today at 6 o'clock. We are going to play antakshri.

Nakul: what? we never do that as a family

Neha: i know, its like there's not much connection in your family. Well, now that i've come, i'll teach you all to live again! It will be really fun, you have to come.

Nakul: but..

Neha holds nakul's hands and says: Nakul, no bahana, you hAVE TO come.

Nakul looks at neha holding his hands and says OK.

Manthan also sees neha holding nakul's hands.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome plz continue. this story is going well u no wat i so want ekta to show ur story. it'll b fun to watch 😳 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks 😳 will post another soon 😳 😆

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