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OK, external linking to updates isnt allowed, so we cant use piczo anymore..... It was a great idea to make updates steal proof though... I tried the watermarking thing, but my whole computer got stuck and it took me hours to get it started again... Which is why the update is so late today...I am really sorry guys... I dunno what to do...

SO im just gonna post updates like before...

BURI NAZAR WAALE, WHO STEALS THIS UPDATE, TERA MOOH NEELA HARA PEELA AUR KAAAALAAAAA!!!!!!!! 😔

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Short Update

    Aseem invites Karan to his house to meet his wife "Nandini" … Tanya drops a glass and cuts her finger. Karan is tending to Tanya's cut when she asks him what if Nandini doesn't return? Karan just dismisses the question, not even dwelling upon it, and says that is impossible and she will definitely come back. Abhir invites Bhoomi to meet his dad. Bhoomi comes and meets Raj Bhasin.
  • Aseem tells Nandini about how he met Karan. Nandini says she knows Karan. She is about to tell him about her past, when Aseem has to leave suddenly.

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Same scene as yesterday…Aseem returns after attending to his phone call with Nandini…

K: We have kept you too late… Looks like you got a good scolding from your wife…
A: My Nandini isn't like that… I have a very loving, caring wife… I am very lucky... She loves me lot…
K: My Nandini is also….
Aseem looks puzzled… Karan looks at Tanya, who looks hurt…

K: Ummm, meet my wife Tanya… Tanya, this is Mr Aseem Gupta…
A: You have introduced me to your wife, now I have to introduce my wife to you too too…You have to come to our house…
K: Definitely…
A: Actually it's just near yours...We live at (starts to tell address…)

Tanya drops a glass and breaks it to distract him… She cuts her hand…

K: Tanya look at how much you are bleeding… Come with me…. (pulls Tanya with him)

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Bhoomi is talking to Abhir on the phone…
B: Temme Abhir…
A: If I knew I had to wait so much to meet the one I love, I'd never fall in love… You dunno how much I'm missing you…
B: But what I'm going through, I need you more… I miss u a lot…I feel so much loneliness…
A: I know…I feel too lonely without you… Actually I called you to come over, dad wants to meet you...
B: But…
A: Won't you it do for me? Fine... I'll tell dad you don't wanna meet him…
B: No! I'm coming…
A: Come fast….

Bhoomi leaves….

Abhir maarofies usual dialogue…I didn't even BOTHER listening to his BS this time…

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Karan pulls Tanya into their bedroom…

K: See how much blood is coming…Tanya, you are not careful at all…
Tanya looks on wistfully and tearfully as Karan tends to her...
Tanya thinks - When you go away from my life Karan, who will heal me like this?
K: Does it hurt a lot?
T: No, I'm fine…
K: Then why are you crying… ? You're my best friend…You have to temme…
T: I was just thinking about Nandini…Karan, what if she doesn't return??
K: No… Never… She loves me as much as I have loved her my whole life… I know she has missed me a lot in these 20 years… Rather than live without her, it is better to die…

Karan leaves…

Okie I am not going to even bother with what ever Mr delusional - "Oh my Nandini loves me so much and I'm crazy and I live in a magical world where pigs fly and elephants are pink and made of bubblegum" - Karan said… Why should I waste my breath….? Let's move on, okie??

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International Headquarters of Evil and Badly Dressed Fathers… (IHEBDF)
Raj Bhasin and Abhir are talking….

RB: I am worried… Tulsi has seen me and I don't want that small mistake to ruin our plans...
A: No dad…Just a few more days, It will be too late by the time she finds out…And everything will be ours…
RB: This is exactly what I expect from you Abhir…What is the plan ahead?
A: I have called Bhoomi to meet you… She doesn't know anything about you, to make her trust me…

Bhoomi comes there…

RB: Interesting…. Very interesting…

Heeheeheeheehee!

A: Dad….
RB: I know, this is Bhoomi… Abhir talks about you all the time… Temme how are you?
B: I am fine…
A: You are exactly the kind of girl I had in mind for Abhir… Your confidence makes you different from the others, you look like you move with the times…
B: Looks like Abhir has told you too much about me, but he has never told me about you…
RB: I wish I could tell you about myself, but I am going abroad for a meeting today… I promise I will return and I'll tell you everything about myself…
A: Afterall you are coming into this house forever….
Abhir and Bhoomi start to leave….
RB: Bhoomi, from today, I am handing over all responsibility of Abhir to you…

Bhoomi smiles and leaves….

RB: Interesting, very very interesting…!

Heeheeheeheehee! Cartoon kahinka! Lmao…

RB:Today one Virani member has melted in front of me, tomorrow it will be the whole family…

Yea yea, you wish…

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Aseem and Karan are drinking champagne at a bar…They are both talking about their "Nandini" nor knowing that one fool is pining for her and the other has her, but will never really have her….Lord…Men are such idiots… Some are cute idiots (eg. Lakshya, Karan, Shiv of KAA) … But idiots nonetheless…

K: Nandini is the second name of my life…
A: Nandini is the first and only name of my life…
K: I can recognise her without looking at her…
A: Nandini gave me and my life meaning… She filled life with colour… But I'm sure when u see my Nandini, you'll forget your Nandini…
K: Wait till you see my Nandini, you wont remember your Nandini…

A: Now we have to see each other's Nandini's…Actually there is a party at my place tomorrow…Please do come...
K: (smiles fondly) Actually I really cannot make it tomorrow.. I am meeting someone very special…But I will surely try!
K,A: Cheers! (drink their champagne…)

Saaale bewde log… Yeh bhi nahi pata ek hi aurat ke bare mein shayaari kar rahe hai kabse…..Can't wait to see Karan's face when Nandini reveals the truth to him…. Hmm, do you think he'll try and kill himself!?!?!

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Abhir and Bhoomi are outside his place….

A: Look at the darkness of night of the night…It feels so good…I feel like the light has come down from the sky and I'm touching the moon (touching Bhoomi's cheek)

Sheesh, I would never fall for a cheesy line like that… I'd say "Get real dude…Tell me how pretty my eyes are… *flutters eyelashes*

B: I am thinking that I'm so lucky, I've got everything I want…
A: There is just one difference b/w u and me... You got everything you want.. what I want, I have earned…Bhoomi, I want there to be no distance in our heartbeats…

OH! DIALOGUE DEKHO! Seedhe seedhe yeh kyun nahi kehte ki abhi se hi suhaag raat manaane chahte ho? Idiot… What a loser… Sheesh…

B: I understand Abhir..
A: Then why is there this distance between us….?
B: Just a few more days…
A: Fine.. I am going to delhi… But tell me…How will you live without me? I can't live without you….
B: I will miss you too…
They hug and Abhir makes evil face….

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Aseem is at home…. Nandini comes and sits next to him on the bed…
N: What happened today?
A: I am tired, but now I'm refreshed (makes this dirttttty leering face, smiling at Nandini)

I really don't like this guy…He looks like one of those guys who follows girls and sings dirty songs at bus stops and pinches them and gets slapped in return…. Galli ke aware romeo… And the couple is the dirtiest couple I have seen in my life!!!!! Jaise Maalkin aur Naukar ki jodi banni hui hai…. ICK! ?

N: Achcha, why did you go to SN today?
A: It's an interesting story…The conference I went to today?? I met a man, we started talking…And this man, he got the tender, and he credited me with his getting it!!!!!!!!
I didn't do anything.. I wondered why but the more interesting thing is that do u know who it was? It was Mr Karan Virani… !!!!

Nandini is shocked and then we have….Flashbacccckkkkkkkkks….Now I know why they call them flashbacks….The scenes were FLASHING so fast, I got a fricking headache, I am currently being sedated by large amounts of painkillers thanks to Karan and Nandini and their love story….

A: He was giving me credit… Strange… But you know what? I thought he was a very good man, witty, intelligent and discerning….
N: I know Karan Virani….

Aseem looks interested and puzzled…

N: Years have passed but when I think about it, it feels like a few days…. Past is not just past time, everything has to do with our life…
A: You remember, you told me that u never wanna talk to me about past. And in fact, it is because of this very past, you decided to live with me forever….
N: I remember everything... I didn't know at the time, that life would bring me back to where my past started…

A: Sweetheart, (EWWW STOP CALLING HER THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!) our past, it gives us confidence to step into our future… it's something else that you faced everything alone, but now I'm here for you and I wont let you get hurt, I wont let tears come into your eyes again….
N: I know you'll always be there for me. I told you not to ask and you never asked again. But now its time that I answer all your questions…

Aseem's phone rings. He has to go for a meeting…

Nandini thinks: Before the party, I should tell Aseem about Karan, or there will be misunderstandings…
A: I have to go SWEETHEART. (AAAAAAARGH!!!!!!!!! STOP IT!!!!!!) Don't wait up for me….
N: How can I sleep without telling you everything?

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Comments: Bhankas episode… Nothing worth watching. Aseem and Nandini make the worst couple in the world ever…

Overall rating:3/10

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Sorry again! I just dont know what to do anymore! šŸ˜•

Hope you liked the update,
Nimmi




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Posted: 18 years ago
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I loved your flashback comment. great update as usual.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Lovely, rocking, mind blowing update! šŸ‘ You made such a boring eppy šŸ˜• very interesting and funny šŸ˜† šŸ˜†
I love your updates Nimmi! International Headquarters of Evil and Badly Dressed Fathers… (IHEBDF) indeed šŸ˜† hilarious! šŸ˜†
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thnx,it seems aseem is more interested in business than his wife? šŸ‘ŽšŸ¼
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Posted: 18 years ago
#5
Nandini is digging a hole for herself.

Good Update!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Maybe Aseem was meant to look like that to gain more audience sympathy for Nandini
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i loved the word bhankas šŸ˜† šŸ˜† šŸ˜†
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i loved the word bhankas šŸ˜† šŸ˜† šŸ˜†
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Posted: 18 years ago
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4/10 for the epi..

10/10 for ur comments.. šŸ‘ šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
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LOVELY UPDATE,LOVED UR COMMENTS šŸ˜† šŸ˜† šŸ˜†

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