~AMRIT VEER (AmVeer) DT #4~||Marte Dum tak hum umeed nahi chodhenge|| - Page 96

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: gibige

Guys are you'll watching KJ's latest interview?

It seems like I am listening to an old friend talking🤣

I don't know when I became his fan or he became my friend😆🤣


Just finished watching it...gosh he loves to talk 🤣 hope they upload the next part soon, I wanna know what he has to say about Veer & KUDCA 😛


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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: indian_beauty


Just finished watching it...gosh he loves to talk 🤣 hope they upload the next part soon, I wanna know what he has to say about Veer & KUDCA 😛


True, he is very talkative and simple( that's why I got old friend vibe) 🤣

They should upload the second part too and I also want to know about Veer

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: RAGHVIFAM

i didn't watch it but watch... It looks like you become his jabra fan so you getting friend vives from his.... Wese kahi kahi hota it if like they are talking to you 🤣

Watch it you will also feel like I know this guy🤣🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: gibige

Watch it you will also feel like I know this guy🤣🤣

can you share the link itna sare post m gum ho gya h woo interview
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: indian_beauty

So here is my take on the Veer giving Amrit's hand in Randheer's..if you're gonna throw joote chappals and tamatars at me then please, throw some nice pairs of joote chappals and no tamatars me no like tamatars smiley37

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Veer looks at Amrit with so much affection in his eyes, without saying anything, he asks her for hand. She hesitantly gives her hands in his hand. He takes her hand and gently places it in Radheer’s hands.

Hum aapko iss rishte se azad karte hai Amrit, khud se azad karte hai. Aap Randheer ki thi aur aap humesha Randheer ki hi rahengi. Hum jaante hai humne aapke saath bohot galat kiya, lekin hum ab apni galati sudharna chahte hai. Hum aapko aapki khushiyan lautana chahte hai, hum aapka pyaar aapko lautana chahte hai. Hum aapse aur Randheer se wada karte hai hum karwaenge aap dono ki shaadi. Hum baat karenge Rani Maa se, hume yakeen hai who humari baat zarur maanegi. Veer says with so much conviction.

Amrit’s eyes well up with tears, she couldn’t believe what Veer had just said, what he had just done. Amrit couldn’t understand why Veer was doing this. Didn’t he ask her to give him one chance, didn’t she deep down also agree to give him a chance. Amrit’s head was buzzing with only question, why was Veer doing this? Why?

Randheer on the other hand couldn’t control his happiness. He happily hugs his big brother and thanks him for giving him his Amrit.

Veer turned towards Amrit; she was still stunned at what just happened.

Kya hua Amrit, aap kuch nahi kahengi? He gently holds her by her shoulders and says, Amrit, hum jaante hai aap yehi soch rahi hongi ke yeh sab kaise hoga, gharwaale kaise maanenge. Lekin iski fikr aap mat kariye, hum hai na, hum sabko mana lenge.

Amrit looks at him with her eyes still full of tears. Arey aap ro kyun rahi hai? Veer asks worriedly. He reaches up to her to wipe away her tears but stops and pulls himself away from Amrit when he hears Randheer’s voice…

Bhai yeh toh Khushi ke aansu hai meri Amrit ki ankho mein, hai na Amirt?! Randheer says, as he moves next to her and reaches up to her face to wipe away her tears. Veer hides his pain and smiles at his younger brother.

As Randheer reaches up to her face, Amrit backs away. She doesn’t let Randheer touch her.

Kya hua Amrit, aap theek hai na? Randheer asks her, aap bilkul chinta mar kariye Amrit, bhai ne kaha hai na woh sab kuch theek kar denge hai na Bhai? He asks Veer

Veer smiles at Randheer and nods his head, all this while Amrit has eyes only for Veer.

Kya hua Amrit, kuch toh kahiye? Randheer asks her.

Finally, Amrit looks at Randheer and with painful voices says, kya kahu mein Randheer? Mere kuch bhi kehne se kya farq padta hai? Main kya chahti hoon, meri kya iccha hai isse kya kisiko farq padta hai?

Both the brothers look at Amrit confusingly.

Aap aisa kyun keh rahi hai Amrit? Aapki iccha, aapki Khushi humare liye bohot zaruri hai. Veer says.

Sach Veer Sahab? Kya aapko sach mein meri Khushi ki, meri iccha ki parawah hai?

Haan Amrit hum…

Amrit stops Veer from speaking, and continues…

Galat! Aapko meri Khushi ki, meri iccha ki koi parawah nahi hai Veer Sahab. She accuses him. Agar parwah hoti toh, toh aap yeh sab naa karte. Aapne kya samjh kar rakha hai mujhe Veer Sahab?? She asks angrily.

Amrit now raises her voice. She had such fire and hurt in her eyes. Veer has never seen Amrit this hurt, not even when he blackmailed her into marrying him, not even when she was sitting on their bed on the night of their wedding. This was a different kind of hurt. It pierced Veer’s heart to see Amrit in so much pain. It hurt him even more because he again caused her p ain.

Amrit continues in her accusatory tone, Jab mann chahha mujhe apne saath rishte mein bandh liya, jab mann chahha azad kar diya. Jab mann chahha apna bana liya aur jab mann chahha paraya kar diya. Main koi khilona nahi hoon Veer Sahab, jis se ab jab chahiye jaise chahiye khel sakte hai. Aur aap hote kaun hai mujhe iss rishte se azad karne waale. Matlab ek Mazak bana kar rakh diya hai meri zindagi ka aapne Veer Sahab. Jab rishta joda tabhi meri marzi janna zaruri nahi samjha, aur ab rishta tondne par bhi meri marzi jaana zaruri nahi samjhna apne. Aap kehte hai aap meri Khushi chahte hai, lekin sach toh yeh Veer Sahab ke aap meri nahi balki apni Khushi chahte, apne chote bhai ki Khushi chahte hai..

Veer interrupts her and says Aisa nahi hai Amrit, hum sirf aur sirf aapki Khushi chahte hai

Nahi Veer, aap meri Khushi nahi chahte, agar aap sach mein meri Khushi chahte toh jo apna abhi kiya woh aap naa karte. Aap ko pata hai Veer, mujhe laga tha aap mujhe samjhne lage hai, lekin main galat thi, aapne kabhi mujhe samjha hi nahi Veer. Agar samjha hota toh aap yeh samjhte ke main kya chahti hoon.

Veer is stunned listening to Amrit. Somewhere in his heart he has a slight glimmer of hope. Of hope that maybe just maybe Amrit wanted to stay with him. His heart started racing at the thought of Amrit wanting to be with him, willingly. He didn’t want to hope though, because he knew every time he has had hopes or expectations, he’s been let down. It already hurt him like hell to place Amrit’s hand in Randheer’s, but he knew he was doing the right thing by giving Amrit her love. But now he’s just confused, this is not how he expected Amrit to react.

Kya chahti hai aap Amrit? Veer asks her with a bit of uncertainty and a bit of hope in his voice.

Amrit was now very angry at her husband. How can he still ask her this, did he still not understand what she wanted, who she wanted? Did he really not know her?

Main aapko chahti hoon Veer!! Amrit yells at her husband. Aapko chahti hoon main, aapke saath rehna chahti hoon main, aapki patni ban kar, aapke saath iss rishte ko nibhana chahti hoon main Veer. Amrit breaks down as the words escape her mouth. She’s now on her knees, sobbing. Aap kyun mujhe khud se door kar rahe hai Veer, kyun mujhe khudse alag kar rahe hai aap. Kyun Veer? Kyun?! Amrit says in between her sobs.

Veer just stood still. He was not sure of what just happened. Did Amrit really say she wanted to be with him, she wanted him. No. He was sure he was dreaming; he was sure he would wake up any moment now and see Amrit and Randheer together. Moments passed by, but Veer didn’t “wake up” from his dream. Veer was jolted back to reality as he heard a loud thump. It was his younger brother, he stormed out of his room in anger. Veer still couldn’t believe what had just happened. He looked over to Amrit, she was still sitting on the floor next to their bed, still sobbing.

Veer slowly walks towards his wife, hesitantly, he holds her shoulders and helps her stand up. Veer wasn’t sure what to say. He definitely did not expect this, he was not sure how to react or what to say.

Amrit hum his voice trailed off

Main aapke saath rehna chahti hoon Veer, main aapse door nahi jaa na chahti Veer, please Veer mujhe khud se door mat kijye please. She sobs and rests her forehead on his chest. Amrit wraps her arms around her husband and hugs him. Veer slowly raises his hands up and gathers his wife his arms. They’re both hugging each other like their life depended on it. Moments pass by, Amrit and Veer still were standing there hugging each other.

Veer finally breaks their hug but has his hands around her and stays very close to Amrit. She realizes their position and of all that just happened. Suddenly she can feel the blood rush, her cheeks flushed. Veer slowly places his index finger under her chin and tilts her head up.

Amrit tilts her head up towards her husband, but keeps her eyes closed. Amrit…Veer softly says her name, there was so much love in his voice. Amrit hume dekho, he pleaded.

Amrit very slowly o pens her eyes, her cheeks are still flushed, her eyes finally meets her husbands. Veer can clearly see himself in her eyes, he can see all the love, care and affection she has for him. He just wanted to her take her back in his arms and hold her so close and tight. He never wanted to let her go. But he couldn’t, not just yet. He wanted to be absolute sure that she wants him, wants to be with him. Even though he heard Amrit loud and clear, he wanted to make sure she didn’t just say that in the spur of the moment. Even though he could see the love she had for him in her eyes, he wanted to hear it from her.

Amrit aapne jo abhi kaha kya woh…

Haan. She answers him before he could even finish his question. Haan Veer! Maine joh bhi kaha sach kaha. Main aapke saath rehna chahti hoon Veer, aapki patni bankar aapke saath apni zindagi jeena chahti hoon Veer. Yaad hai apna kaha tha mujhse ke aap mujhe jeetna chahte hai, toh bas aaj aapne mujhe jeet liya hai Veer. Mera dil jeet liya hai aapne. Aapne mujhse ek mauka maanga tha na, aaj main aapse ek mauka maangti hoon. Kya aap mujhe ek mauka denge, aapki patni banne ka, aapse pyaar karne ka?

Veer couldn’t hold it anymore, he pulled Amrit into a sou lcrushing hug. Veer couldn’t believe his ears, Amrit really just confessed her love to him. He pulled her back again, stared deep into her eyes and said I love you Biwi Sahab!! Hum aapse bohot pyaar karte hai, aur aapse wada karte hai hum aapko humesha khush rakhenge.

Amrit’s heart started racing, all the feelings she was feeling for Veer in this moment she had never felt for anyone ever in her life. Amrit’s eyes well up again, I love you Veer Sahab she finally confessed. Main bhi aapse bohot pyaar karti hoon aur main wada karti hoon main humesha aapse bohot pyaar karungi.

Veer’s eyes welled up with tears of happiness, this is exactly what he had longed for his whole life, someone to truly love him. He cupped her face in his hands and gently placed a soft, sweet kiss on her forehead. Amrit closed her eyes as her she felt her husband’s lips touch her forehead. She slowly opened her eyes and met with Veer’s eyes full of love. She blushed and Veer again wrapped his arms around her and pulled her into another hug. She hugged him back, both promising each other a lifetime of happiness and love.

This is how I wanted Amroo to react. I literally wanted her to scream on boys for doing ping pong with her as if she was a toy with whom brothers will play. But she happily agreed to Veer like an adarsh wife🤣🤣...Makers brutally butchered her character as just weeks ago she decided to be happy & took stand for herself everytime par go goa gone ho gya iska vo jalwa🤣.


But this write up is so beautiful Zarqa❤️🤗....I loved it totally. Totally loved the way you penned it down❤️. I liked how fiery & head strong A was here who knew to fight for herself. Btw "She realizes their position and of all that just happened"😆☺️....me was smirking reading this. For me this happened for real. I like to be delusional that's a better place to be😆❤️

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Me is Veer Right now,the story touched my heart❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: gibige

I have so far been a silent reader as I did not have much time, but from now onwards will take active participation. I will come with the name 'ginige' and will see you there😆

which name and where?
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: indian_beauty


Training se kya hota hai, original toh original hi hai na 😆 decide toh A ko karna hoga ke zada acha kaun uthata hoga bada bhai ke chota bhai🤣

Veer ka toh ek hi yaad hoga usko baaki teeno time biwi madhosh thi🤣
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: gibige

@indian_beauty

Seriously… you’re underestimating yourself, but if you so wish I can send some chappals😆

The OS is heavenly and with every word you served AMRIT in the real sense👏

This probably was every Veer &AmVeerian’s dream. We all waited for this moment to come in the serial. Even though we didn’t get it, you made me feel it with your words. The two alternative endings you guys wrote for AmVeer and Veer are ethereal and I feel so happy that we gave a beautiful tribute to our very own fire couple.

P.S. Mahi, you both have given the best endings to AmVeer, I do not want to change a word. I will happily believe that Veer and Amrit had these endings to their journey❤️

Trust me even I am considering those endings. Especially Zarqa one because Veer is breathing happily there with Biwi Sahab walking beside him.❤️🤗
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: RAGHVIFAM

can you share the link itna sare post m gum ho gya h woo interview

😆

https://youtu.be/KRSVtBG04EI

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Posted: 4 years ago
Ye toh chopping PDA session ka part tha💔🤣

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He said something like kaha khoyivi hai,aapka sara dhyaan humpe hona chahiye and started chopping the veggies by wrapping her hand in his🤣...

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