Changes to improve Today’s episode!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hello Guys!

How are you all doing? I am doing fine just disappointed completely with the plot of KHNK nowadays.

Anyways, Coz I dont have much time to write fanfiction about KHNK, I would just write down a few points about what I want in KHNK.

If I were the sciptwriter, I would have included the following:-

- A tyre puncture of Kunal's car oh his way to drop Nimmo to her place. Kunal decides to change the tyre and then it starts raining. Kunal says: "Nimmo if you want to go ahead, look a taxi is coming and you go ahead. I think the tyre changing is gonna take some time and tumhein der ho jayegi."

Nimmo says: " Kunal, Koyi baat nahin. I will wait for you. After all, you are so nice to offer me a lift and meintumhein kaise is halat mein chor sakti houn?"

She stood there in the rain with an umbrella to cover Kunal while he is changing the tyre. meanwhile, both are having flashbacks of their past especially of the days when Kunal was kicked out of the house and how Nimmo stood by his side during his bad days.

Kunal thinks to himself: Nimmo, abhi tak nahin badli. Even today, she is standing by my side.

Nimmo in the meantime is staring at Kunal with her teary eyes full of love.

Tyres changed and now Kunal is putting all te tools in the car and Nimmo is behind her when the Umbrella gets blown away by the wind. Nimmo is about to go behind itwhen kunal catches hold of her hand and says: " Nimmo, rehne bhi do na! vaise bhi baarish mein Bheegne mein kitna mazaa hai!"

Nimmo:" Kunal tum to..."

Kunal then, puts his hand on Nimmo's Lips to shush her. Ummm 😃

They go on staring at each other and thats when Natasha passes by and sees them.

I think that if Nats saw something like this, it would be more worthwhile. Then she can be definite that there is something going on between Kunal and Nimmo and can make Kunu realise that and may be Pressure him to think harder that he isnt happy with Nats and Nimmo is hs love.

About today's episode, I didnt like the way Nats asked the watchman no to let Nimmo in. Nats knows Nimmo and also does accept her as afriend to some extent. I think she should have confronted her rather than behaving so meanly.

Ok Guys, what changes would you have made to make today's episode more interesting?

I know I said a few points but I wrote a whole scene. I couldnt help it.😆

Looking at Eijoo's pic on my screen just inspired me.

Ok do tell me what your views are.

Ok kisses and hugs

Nisha

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Posted: 19 years ago
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I like your scene 😊 especially the chemistry between Kunal-Nimmo 😛
Maybe the reason Nats was portrayed like that is bcos she's going to turn completely negative and make it easier for Kunal to go bac to Nims (I only read the update and felt this way...haven't seen the video yet, so I maybe totally wrong)...what do you think?
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nisha yaar kya scene likhi tune! wah kya baat kya baat hai tune tho kamal kar diya! i loved it. man u shudve been da scriptwriter! excellent job! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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[[[I like your scene especially the chemistry between Kunal-Nimmo
Maybe the reason Nats was portrayed like that is bcos she's going to turn completely negative and make it easier for Kunal to go bac to Nims (I only read the update and felt this way...haven't seen the video yet, so I maybe totally wrong)...what do you think?]]]


Well "Springs", I think that Nats gonna turn negative in the sense that she is going to be more possessive about Kunal now. Kunal isnt going to like it at all and he is going to distance himself away from her more and more.

Well about Kunal and Nimmo coming together, related to this, I dont know. It all depends on the number of times Nimmo and Kunal meet and actually have a proper conversation. they dont talk much these days. They are very formal with each other. Hope that Kunal confide in Nimmo why he married Nats and tell her about his marital probs and most importantly that he is in love madly and crazily with Nimmo.


And Sweet_angel: Even I am impressed with myself. 😳 hehehehe Well I think KHNK lacks some sizzling scenes esp between Nimmo and Kunal. Well yeh sab to Eijoo ki badaulat hai. I was looking at him and then inspiration milti gayi...heheh 😳

Nisha
Edited by n_nisha1 - 19 years ago

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