Rishta Simran FF - Saajan

I dedicate this FF to my friend Jasminerahul who has been asking it for one year.

Character Sketch

Rishab - Adopted son of Mahesh & Rakhi. Foster brother of Karan. He becomes a well-known poet.

Karan - Son of Mahesh & Rakhi. Rashab's foster brother. He becomes a flirt.

Preeta - Raghuveer & Sarla's daughter. She loves poetry.

Simar - Janmalal & Meena's daughter.

Prologue

Rishab had lost his parents and was left in an orphanage. He was afflicted by polio and was taking the help of a walking stick.

Karan: I want an elder brother. But I am the firstborn child.

Rakhi: How is it possible?

Mahesh: If there is a will, it is possible. We will adopt.

Mahesh and Rakhi adopt Rishab to give him a good life.

Mahesh: He is your elder brother.

Mahesh was completing Karan's demands not as a father but as a friend. Karan hugs Rishab.

Later Mahesh takes Rishab to the best of the doctors so he can live a normal life.

Though doctors gave up on Rishab, Mahesh and Rakhi didn't give up on him.

One day, they get an appointment with a doctor from Switzerland.

The family settled in Switzerland.

Rishab begins to walk on his own.

Later, the doctor puts on a strong implant, so he gets stability to run.

Mahesh, Rakhi, and the doctor succeed in their mission.

Both the boys study in Switzerland.

They return to India after completing graduation.

Part 1

thank you very much.I really liked the Jodi name SimRan.surprising that just because karan wants an elder brother his parents adopted rishab.glad to know that through treatment rishab became alright.in the movie till the end he had problem.here you changed that.right? waiting for you to start it

Good prologue Kavitha. 🤗

Dedicating to someone who has encouraged you is a great gesture. ❤️Such small things in life add immense value to the person who has given and who has received it!

Congrats on the FF

awesome cs

update soon

Congratulations on your new FF

Character Sketch is so Interesting

Prologue is Captivating

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Rishab starts leading an everyday life.

He starts writing poems and attains wealth and popularity.

Karan, on the other hand, becomes a spoilt brat and a ruffian.

He starts flirting with girls.

When the family was in Switzerland, Rishab was very intellectual. It took time for him to completely recover from polio, after which he began riding a bicycle. Karan was mischievous, backed by Mahesh.

Flashback

All four of them were in the hotel.

Suddenly, Karan goes under the table.

Mahesh: What's the matter?

Karan: I saw one coin had fallen.

Mahesh, too, goes under the table, and he saw a lady wearing a short dress.

Mahesh: Karan, so you have gone under the table because of this reason. Anyway, let me search for the coin.

Rakhi sees that.

Rakhi: You guys come up. I will search for the coin.

Mahesh and Karan sit at the table.

Rakhi: I can understand Karan's mentality. But what about you? Junior Luthra is famous, but Sr. Luthra is fantastic!

Mahesh: Father is not fantastic. He is just brilliant. Like father like son.

Mahesh: Karan, it's because of you I am getting abused.

Karan: No, dad, it's the other way round.

Flashback ends.

Rishab fills the showcase and the table with a lot of trophies.

Mahesh: Wonderful! You have won all these cups by yourself. I'm proud of you.

Rishab: All these were possible only because of your best wishes and blessings.

Rakhi: You always get results and do beautiful things.

Rakhi to Mahesh: Ask your useless younger son that what he has brought.

Karan: Dad, I knew that mom would ask this question. If Rishab has brought the cup, I have not come empty-handed. I have got the plate.

He takes out the plate.

Mahesh giggles.

Rakhi: See, Rishab brought the cup, but Karan brought the plate. I am not going to leave him.

Rakhi runs after Karan to beat him, but Karan hides behind Mahesh.

Karan: Dad, tell mom that I am 24 years old and I am still g

Mahesh: Leave it. He is 24 years old. If he does it next time, you can thrash him.

Rakhi: Yes, one day, he will get thrashed.

Karan: Mom, get me a cup of tea.

Rishab laughs: This guy will never change.

Mahesh: Karan, it's because of you I'm getting fired.

Rakhi: Have you seen the result? It's because you have pampered him. That's why he got spoilt.

Karan: Dad, your dialogue.

Mahesh: Does love spoil someone? I also love you. Did you get spoilt? I have never differentiated between Rishab & Karan. I love Rishab as much as Karan. Did he get spoilt?

Rakhi: Let's not talk about it in front of children.

The entire staff came to Luthra House.

Mahesh: I am going to introduce my sons to you. He is Rishab, my eldest son.

Karan: And I am Karan, the youngest son of Mahesh.

Mahesh: I thank you guys for all the support. From today onwards, my sons will be taking charge of Luthra Constructions. I hope you guys would support them the same way.

Mahesh takes Karan & Rishab to his cabin.

Mahesh: Karan, this is your cabin.

Karan: What will I do in this cabin?

Mahesh: You have a mobile phone & on top of that you also have a landline phone. You can dial the numbers of the girls when you are free.

Karan: So, you have permitted me?

Mahesh: Of course, my boy.

Karan: You are the greatest dad in the world.

Rakhi: And you are the naughtiest child in the world.

Rishab touched Mahesh's feet.

Mahesh: Oh, what's the need for it?

Rishab: I have heard about the angels, but now I have seen two most excellent angels in parents like you.

Mahesh: Nothing is outstanding that I have done.

Rishab: You have given your name to an illegitimate child like me. You have taken me to the best of the physicians to make my feet alright. You gave me all the love & respect. I am very much indebted to you, which I can't repay in my entire life.

Mahesh: Is my love a debt?

Rishab: No, dad.

Mahesh: If you don't talk about loans, debts & other things, it would be better.

Rakhi: We love both of you equally & have never differentiated between you guys.

Karan: Yes, you have differentiated. In your eyes, Rishab is a scholar & I am a duffer.

All of them giggle.

Mahesh: Yes, you are right. Anyway, we need to go to the party. But you guys are not going anywhere today.

Mahesh & Rakhi leave.

Surprising that Rishab has recovered completely.Karan rishabMahesh Rakhi scenes were funny.

This was an interesting dialogue-

Mahesh: Does love spoilsomeone? I also love you. Did you get spoilt? I have never differentiatedbetween Rishab & Karan. I love Rishab as much as Karan. Did he get spoilt?

Surprising that Mahesh allowed karan to speak to girls.

Loved rishab telling that he saw angels in MaheKhi’s form.lovedrakhi saying that she has never differentiated between both.nice pics.

Plz update soon.cant wait 4 Preeta n Simar’s entry.

Not able to post my comment in the rang comment section.So I am posting it here.

Liked Mihir Premscene.Though Tulsi suspected prem she believed him.thats nice.Moloy mohini fight was silly n funny.Is simr right?They don’;t wnt simar to stay in India?Why did simar say that she gotlove in installments n she will bring lots of love from this world?liked moloy’s dialogues about love to Simar.Prem’s reason why he cant be friends withSimar..that dialogue was interesting.I am surprised that 4 showing prem,simar walked instead of taking the car.Surprised to see Rishab here.Does Rishab have any love interest in this ff?I liked Prem apologizing to simar.Simar demanding him to take her 4 a car drive was cute.nice pics.nice edits.

thanks for the pm

Congrats in the FF

awesome update and nice cs

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A Fabulous Start

Originally posted by: taahir004

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A Fabulous Start

Your story is very interesting.

Please update soon.