Preeran FF : Fate of stars Part1 (Pg1)

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Story explores concept of love, betrayal, passion and adventure. It starts from KC track where Karan and Preeta's friendship started to grew stronger with time but what will it result would form crux of story.



Neha (helly shah) : Very strong and bubbly type of girl. Works in small food shop to get her living. Her life mainly revolves around her younger sister who is in college. Sister to super cop Neil Chauhan and considers him as own brother.

Neil Chauhan : Commonly known as dabang super cop in headquarters

Neil Chauhan : Commonly known as dabang super cop in headquarters. Dashing, and strong headed who is passionate about his work. Other side is very funny and jovial to everybody. He is ruthless for criminals sometimes

Sahil (Laksh Lalwani) : Younger brother of Neil and his jaan

Sahil (Laksh Lalwani) : Younger brother of Neil and his jaan. Very simple and innocent who wishes for ordinary life. Only hobby is music that he dedicates to girl he loved but died years ago. Has buried his love feelings inside and does not want to fall again

 Has buried his love feelings inside and does not want to fall again

Scene starts with Karvachaut day when prithvi and preeta marriage is finalized.


Sarla : preeta you happy na? Prithvi is very nice guy


Preeta : I know mom whatever you say, I am happy


Karan : aunty can I take her with me, now this dumbo doctor is getting married I want to spend time with her


Preeta hits him annoyingly


Sarla ; okay go ahead but come back on time okay and don't fight


Karan ; you tell her she keeps fighting with me all the time


Sarla : preeta


Preeta ; don't take his side mom he is instigating you against me


Karan ; oho look who is talking now come on we are getting late bye aunty


Preeta : leave my hand bajarbattu (keeps blabbering outside)


Sarla ; this two will never improve still fighting like kids (smiles seeing them)


Preeta : if you tear my duppatta then see

They hear noise of ripping while closing door. Preeta sees his face from hole scaring him


Karan ; so...sorry


Preeta : karan (shouts) you won't improve how many duppattas you will break of mine, urrgh I am so much angry


Karan : I will give you whole box yaar please stop shouting at me like this, I am the karan luthra

He makes her sit inside car and leaves for Luthra house hurriedly


Luthra house


Sherlyn arrives before them for Karvachaut


Kareena ; you are here, good see soon moon will come and then you can open your fast


Sherlyn (in mind): oh god, prithvi come here quickly only you will open my fast no matter what


Rakhi ; sherlyn what happen? you seem little disturbed


Sherlyn : nothing at all, I am fasting first time so feeling little uneasy


Rakhi ; but i told you if you are you not comfortable don't do it


Sherlyn ; I can at least do this for Rishab's long life but where is he


Rakhi ; he went out for some work, should be coming soon you sit here I called mehndi girls there they are

Mehndi girls arrives for the function. Karan and Preeta comes there as well


Karan : preeta now listen to me carefully, very quietly take Sherlyn's phone from side


Preeta : but how she is holding it in her hand, ask Kritika so sherlyn won't doubt on her


Karan ; wow staying with me even your brain started working not bad


Preeta : shut up loser luthra you don't see timing to start jokes, tell kritika quickly


Karan ; wait my dear sister where are you going


Kritika (looks around) : are you talking to me?


Karan : only your name is Kritika (Sweetly) and my other silly sister is not here


Kritika : you always call me when you have work from me not fair


Karan ; okay we will decide that later now you just go over there and get me Sherlyn's phone


Kritika :sherlyns phone, but why ? and what do you want to do with it


Karan : my question paper I will write answer for you personally later please do as i say


Preeta ; karan stop making riddles for her, kritika we will tell you everything later but please do it for now get her phone


Kritika ; okay fine (goes next to sherlyn) girls make sure my brother's name shines in her Mehndi, and sherlyn keep your phone here your hands are not free give me


Sherlyn hesitantly gives her phone.


Kritika : I will be back in a minute okay (gives phone to Preeta Karan) where is my reward


Karan ; I will give you on right time bye my sister (runs away)


Preeta : open it quickly, she have password now what yaar


Karan : wait preeta arora i have keys to every lock see (opens password)


Preeta : how did you


Karan ; because I saw other day when she was unlocking her phone now let me focus on this don't try to distract me


Preeta : Am i crazy to distract you? now come on check on her phone


Karan and Preeta are unable to find anything in her phone as Sherlyn deleted or locked messages


Outside


Rishab is coming back to home when a girl is running hurriedly and sits in his car


Rishab : wait who are you


Girl : I will tell you everything but first please drop me on next crossing hurry up


Rishab ; what the hell? you want me to break law due to you


Girl : come on hurry up now you talk so much


Rishab drops her outside a chawl while she breathes heavily


Girl : Some water please?


Rishab : here you are (gives her annoyingly) now will you tell me what is going on


"Myself Neha, I needed ride to get here thank you Mr Rishab Luthra" she says


Rishab : how do you know my name


Neha : I keep record for very important people bye, I owe this favor to you (leaves happily)


Rishab : Crazy girl (Sees her small pendal on seat) hey ms silly, she left


Neha ; hey partner, everything ready look there should be no mistake okay, its big order for us


Payal : yea almost there, see how everybody will love our food


Neha : wait let me take out for my brother okay, he is my dabang bro yaar show some respect


Payal : our job would go away in your dabang brother come on

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Congratulations on your FF


Concept is very Interesting


Title is Amazing

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 1


Fabulous Start


Rishabh and Preeta's alliance is fixed


I feel bad for Sahil as he no longer wants


to fall in love

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