Preeta FF Ja tujhe maaf kiya ( no preeran happy ending)

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Posted: 5 years ago
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I did not watch the episodes where karan left preeta in the road after marriage uttered harsh words on her. I have seen the promo that was enough for me to make my blood boil. This ff is written for my satisfaction and people who want preeta to have some self respect and leave karan.

Prologue

" Ma'am here is a call for you from India " Mary says smilingly whereas

" connect it " Mary hears her boss order from the other head and sighs. She had been working around here in this office from beginning and only think she knew about her boss is that she hates emotions and attachments. Her boss is not any stone hearted person but hates to be weak in front of people. She connects the call to her boss as she has ordered.


"Hello... " preeta lifts up the call

"Hello " she repeats again. Was it a prank call? She decides to end the call and warn Mary to check properly before she connects the call next time. She did not have time to waste. She runs physiotherapist firm and has meetings to attend and expansions to decide.

" Preeta " she heard the whisper from other end and she was startled. She knew this voice very well.

" preeta are you here? " the voice asks and somewhere she could sense the confusion.

" I'm here. Mr Karan luthra " preeta said in the most possible cold voice she could speak.

" how can I help you? " she asks him without letting me speak.

" I'm sorry... " he apologized and she knew he had finally found the truth which had told him hundreds of times more but he refused to believe.


" I'm don't have time for this "

"what?! " she could sense his amusement from his voice. What had he excepted? Once he had said sorry she would cancel all her works, take the next flight to India and land up in his house like love sick puppy.

" it has been two years and I am done with everything. It does not matter. If you want forgiveness. Fine I forgive you. Please don't waste your time and even mine by calling here the next time. Bye " she hung up the call before she could hear more from him.

" Mary next time please check before you connect some unknown stranger call to me " preeta ordered her before she started going through some emails in her laptop.


" sorry sir, we can't connect your call. Ma'am has strictly warned not to " Mary responded from the other end.

" please listen. Your ma'am knows me very well " karan spoke.

" I'm really sorry. I can't help you "

The line gets cut.

Karan could not help himself from controlling his frustration. He had finally managed to contact preeta but she was ready to hear anything.

" what did you except Karan luthra that she would forget everything and come running in your arms after all the humiliation you caused her " he felt his conscience mocking him.

His one wrong step caused him to lose his everything. He did not know what to do. It took two years to finally find something about her. Now when he knows where she was. All he needed was to make amends and get her back in his life but the question was how will he do something like that when she simply shut him off the life.


" how much money did sherlyn give you haa? "

" I know middle class gold diggers like you "

" I married you for revenge"


"preeta Ma'am are you ok? " navin snapped her back from her thoughts rather from her nightmares.

She maintained her posture and nodded positively.

" Ma'am we have very good offer from india. All we need is to go and finalize it here "

" fine make a team and finalize it "

" ma'am I was thinking if you would join us. Since You're from India and the communication would very easy if you would... "

" I can't " preeta cut him off.

" do this without involving me or cancel the deal" she firmly stated.

Navin was confused with her words. He had never seen boss hesitant about something. This deal was very profitable for the firm but still she was not keen on it left him confused.


Preeta entered her cabin and locked herself. She had informed Mary to cancel her meeting for today.

" I'm sorry " she could still not forget his voice. Why was he here trying to contact her when he did not try all this years. Why did she even care? This man had almost destroyed her. She was not letting him to do that again. Karan luthra was a closed chapter and will remain so.


"Di we have to head back to India di for head back to India di for maa " shristi convinced her.

" Why? Why back to that hell? " preeta was frustrated.

" di maa is wanting to see pragya di. So we have to " shristi reasoned with her.

" why can't pragya di come here and we leave here happily away from all the drama " preeta says.

" Di... "

" fine. I'm booking the tickets. We will go with maa and see pragya di and come back as soon as possible " preeta instructs and shristi agrees.

There was nothing left in india for them now. Two years ago everything had gotten over. She and her di had taken the first opportunity and left the country with their mother. Now after two years settled in Canada away from all the heartbreaks and pain. Going back to India will only bring all the past but she had to do it for the sister who is here in India and for the mother who yearned to see her first daughter. For herself and preeta di who needed a closure forever from the past a final one.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part one

"The lutra group of industries " preeta glanced at the board. This was the company who wanted to invest in hers for the Indian collaboration. This was ironic, the lutras who had destroyed her are trying to mend things or did they even knew that she was the owner of the company.

" maam we need to go in " Navin broke her out of her thoughts. She nodded her head and entered inside the building. She thought of instantly cancelling the deal and leaving india but then she did not want to be coward. She had not done anything wrong and she was not ashamed.

She entered the conference hall which was ready for the meeting followed by her team and she saw him.

" Preeta ji " Rishabh exclaimed in shock as he never excepted her to be here standing in front of him.

He saw preeta indicating something to the guy who came forward and started speaking.

" Mr Rishabh luthra, we are glad to introduce our CEO to you Miss preeta arora " Navin spoke.

" it's nice to meet you Mr lutra " preeta greeted him formally and sat on the chair as her team represented her terms and conditions in the offer. He could not stop staring at her, she was same girl whom he had fallen in love with and who still held his brother's heart. The girl who was wronged by his family. The meeting had gotten over and deal was finalized. Preeta was leaving the hall when he had approached her for cup of tea and for his surprise she did not refuse.


Preeta settled herself in the chair and sipped her cup of coffee quietly waiting for Rishabh to start a conversation.

" How are you preeta ji? " he begin the conversation.

" I am fine " she replied casually.


" we searched for you everywhere as soon we got to know the truth. Karan and everyone are guilty and papa was very upset with everyone when he came to know how we had treated you "

" it's fine Rishabh ji. I hope uncle is ok now. It does not matter anymore. I have moved on. I'm happy that the truth is out. Good for you people " she said as if she did not care. Maybe she did not care.

" preeta ji if you Can come to the Mansion anytime you're free. The family will be very happy to receive you. Please I request " Rishabh says earnestly, his eyes hopeful.

Preeta looked at Rishabh in disbelief. He was inviting her to the same mansion where his brother had insulted her. The emotions ran through her and she bit her lips to control it.

" it's very kind of you to invite you Rishabh ji but I'm sorry I can't accept it. I'm in India only for few days and I have many other works" preeta refused very politely.

The bill had come by the time. Preeta had paid her part of the bill and was moving when Rishabh stopped her ,

" are you still angry with us? " he had asked her.

" I'm not but you people are nothing to me other than strangers and it's better to keep that way " preeta replied coldly and walked away without sparing another glance at him.

------------------------------------------------------------------------can someone enlighten if the lutra family knows that karan married preeta without letting her know that he was the groom and he left her in middle of the road at night and still kept quite

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: aishwarya12joys

------------------------------------------------------------------------can someone enlighten if the lutra family knows that karan married preeta without letting her know that he was the groom and he left her in middle of the road at night and still kept quite

I LOVED THE FAN FICTION!!!!

However, I highly doubt if Preeta can ever be this 'cold' to anyone. Nevertheless, was the last part that I have quoted above a question or statement?

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Finally! We got some new FF....thankyou otherwise this forum was only meant to be the anti Karan bashing forum....although this FF is also no Preeran....but I like the theme...very much looking forward

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: aisha_aashi

Finally! We got some new FF....thankyou otherwise this forum was only meant to be the anti Karan bashing forum....although this FF is also no Preeran....but I like the theme...very much looking forward

who bashed karan?

everyone just called spade a spade.

IF is no twitter.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: TheM5393

I LOVED THE FAN FICTION!!!!

However, I highly doubt if Preeta can ever be this 'cold' to anyone. Nevertheless, was the last part that I have quoted above a question or statement?

It is a question.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Well, Mahesh Uncle is in coma, Rakhi Aunty slapped Karan but after that she was essentially more concerned about Karan's mental well-being instead of anything else, Sameer apologised to Shrishti. Rishabh after getting to know what Karan did to Preeta had a mild brawl with Karan. Rishabh told Karan that whatever he did was a crime, and now that he has married Preeta he has to give her all the rights of a wife, but got emotionally swayed by Karan's emotional blackmail and also taken aback by Karan accusing him of still harbouring some sort of feelings for Preeta, and when Rishabh tried to explain things to him, he plainly asked Rishabh to NOT but in 'between' him and Preeta. Later in another scene, Rishabh was also shown, looking sad AF and realising how devastated Preeta and his family might be, but when he is about to call Preeta and ask about her well-being he is shown to remember that Karan has 'explicitly' asked Rishabh to not come in 'between' him and Preeta. So he stops.

p.s Kareena bua is trying to get Karan remarried.......

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: brownie119

who bashed karan?

everyone just called spade a spade.

IF is no twitter.

Who's not???

And he clearly deserve all that...but its just a beginning not end...!!!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hey.... Nice story.... update soon

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