FF-Hadsa THE END pg-63 *24.8.08* - Page 6

hi

thanks for this

keep it up

norzar

friendship ho gaye
great
and ya update even 3-4 parts no problem 😆

First of all.
~*~Happy Birthday~*~.the part out standing...I just love it..Now continue the next part soon... 😉

Outstanding Sonu...no other words apart frm this 👏

Chimpanzee but..aww Su 😆 😆

itss reallyyy amazingggggggg plzzz contuiedd nextt partt i loved it soo much

Sumit...Chimpanzee?? 😆 bechara!!

Sonu if u continue writing as fantastically as this,we'll be bugging u to update 10 times a day!!! 😉 👏 👏....waise I hope next mulaaqat jaldi hogi 😛

@ 😉 thanks didi... 😆 ab dekho kya hota hai..

@ Verni di-ok..ok....cutie-1 pie 12345 i lub u u know y.. 😆

@ preeti di-haan haan..aap toh kahoge hi..

@ Norzar-thanks..glad u liked it.. 😳

@ Ambreen Di-ok...as u wish.. 😆

@ Roku-thankQ.. 😉 Isiliye ki tune update kiya.. 😆

@ Reshu di-yup!!!..par ye mera opinion nahin hai.. 😆

@ Shafoo-hi..!! nice to see u here..accha ab jaldi se likhti hun.. 😆

@ Rahila di-oye...aapko hi waqt nahin hai...i meet others everyday.. 😆 ..thanks a lot1!!!

Part-4

Its raining heavily ...Sumit is at his new home, enjoying a cup of coffee and humming a tune ..He semems to be pleased with himself!!!...

On the other hand, Kumkum is rumaging door-to-door in serach of a shelter as her friend has turned her back towards her..!!!

She's soaked in rain-water but is trying to protect only her luggage.. 😳 ..She knocks every single door in her way to find a shelter but finds no one kind enough to let her in..!! 😭
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Sumit is arranging or rather, tucking his luggage inside his wardrobe when he hears the doorbell..

Su-(irritated)..aaj hi pahuncha hun..phir aa gaya koi aur meraa dimag khaane..chal beta sumit..dekh kaun hai.. 😆

He opens the door and finds Kumkum totally wet ....

Su:TUM???...

Kk:TUM???... 😆

Su:Come in!!! 😳

He takes her bags and lets her in...

As she gets in, she starts crying...Sumit makes her sit.. 😳

Su-kya hua?..hey!!..why r u crying?..Mera ghar ganda hai..but its not that bad ki u'll start crying... 😆

Kumkum is simply sobbing with her face burried in her handkerchief.. 😭

He gets a little coffee which was left in the vessel and gives it to her.. 😆

She gulps it down and feels better.. 😳

Su-you'r soaked in rain..go and change your clothes or else you'll fall ill.. 😳

She feels awckward to realise that she's alone with some unknown male...but he puts her to an ease.. 😳

Su-hello?..am i inaudible?..jaao jakar change kar lo phir aaram se baat karenge.. 😳

Kumkum takes out her clothes but finds all of them wet.. 😭 Sumit notices this...

Su-dekho..I am not a hero..abhi toh kapde de raha hun but shaam tak waapis bhi mil jaane chahiye.. 😆

He shows her the way..
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Kk-my friend...(sobs)...she backed out..university mein bhi chutti thi..aur hostel mein koi vacancy nahin hai..(sobs)...main yahaan kisi ko nahin jaanti hun.. 😭

Su-hello?..ro toh aise rahi ho..jaise main hi tumhe ghar se nikal raha hun n main hi is sab ke liye responsible hun.. 😆

Kumkum is still crying... 😭

Sumit-But I have a deal... 😕

Kumkum-deal?..kya?..

Sumit-you can be my tennant.. 😳 ..hmm..dekho..neeche waala floor mera..aur upar waala tumhaara..and about mone..whatever u pay.. 😳

Kumkum-but..ye ghar bahut bada hai..I can't afford to pay much..financially..main 😭

Sumit-uff!!!..you have a problem with everything...toh kitna de sakti ho..ye bata do.. 😆

Kumkum-bas 200$..is se zyaada nahin.. 😆

Sumit-theek hai..chalega..par ek shart hai.. 😕

Kumkum-kya?.. 😕

Sumit-aaj ghar ki saari safai tum karogi...baaki shartein waqt aane par.. 😆

Kumkum-manzoor hai.. 😳

Sumit-ok..bye then..u can shift upstairs.. 😆

Kumkum-thanks.. 😳

Sumit(smiles)-u r most welcome.. 😳
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abb romemates hum nice cont it
by why chota part 😆

Part-5

2 months have passed...

Kumkum is no longer the shy girl... 😆 She has become her own self again..As a reult, the entire house has been divided into two parts...

Even the kitchen has been divided by the means of a rope.. 😆 One side belonging to Kumkum and another belonging to Sumit.. 😳 As expected,Kumkum's area is always neat and clean and well-managed..On the other side, sumit lives in a complete mess... 😆

One day,

Kumkum and sumit are totally engrossed in their studies..Kumkum's room, though not so decorative due to lack of funds, is nicely kept as compared to sumit's. 😳

The doorbell rings...Both, Sumit and Kumkum are irritated..

Kumkum-padhne bhi nahin dete hain log.. 😆

Sumit-idiots.. 😆 pata nahin kaun aaya hai ab..KUMKUM!!!..KUMKUM...!!!..DARWAAZA KHOLO...

Kumkum-KHUD KHOLO..MAIN NEECHE NAHIN AA SAKTI ABHI..

Sumit-KUMKUM...I SAID..OPEN THE DOOR..

Both go to the door furiously...Its the milkman..He keeps the milk bottles and goes away.. 😆 as he does everyday..

Kumkum-kabhie toh manners yaad rakha karo..

Sumit-tum?..tum toh bahut badi mahaarani ho na?..tum toh darwaaza khol hi nahin sakti thi?.. 😆

Kumkum-Sumit main bhi exams de rahi hun..samjhe?.. 😆

Sumit-toh main kya karun?..

Kumkum-sumit ...tum neeche theey..I had to leave my studies and come downstairs.. 😆

Sumit-haan..haan..tum toh maharaani ho na..kyun uthogi?...yumhaari shaan ke khilaaf ho jayega.. 😆

Kumkum-give me a break from this all sumit... 😆

Sumit-ye mat bhoola karo ki ye ghar mera hai.. 😆

Kumkum-Hello?...tumhaara nahin hai..main tumhe ab 250$ pay kar rahi hun samjhe tum?..aur waise bhi tumhaare jaise sarfire paagal ke saath toh koi 10$ mein bhi nahin rehna chahega.. 😆

Sumit-jao..jao..kaam karo apna.. 😆

Both leave after throwing some cushions on each other..
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Next morning, Sumit and Kumkum are in the kitchen..Kumkum in her portion and sumit in his area.. 😆

Sumit is singing-NEAR OR FAR...WHEREVER YOU ARE...
😆

Kumkum throws an egg on him...His hair get drenched in yolk.. 😆

He crosses the rope and enters her territory..He takes a handful of flour and rubs it roughly on her face...

Kumkum-SAMAJHTE KYA HO TUM KHUD KO?..

Sumit-jo tum samajhti ho...

Kumkum throws a glass on him which accdently hits his hand and it starts to bleed...Kumkum rushes to himand sucks his finger to stop the blood flow.. 😳

Sumit too, seems lost in her face, though white with flour... 😳

Su-erm..Kumkum?..theek hai..wo..apne aap theek ho jayega..its just a minor cut.. 😳

Kumkum moves back in embarassment.. 😳

Kk-sorry..wo..

Su-its ok..ho jaata hai kabhie kabhie....(like shahid said in Jab We Met)
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Sumit takes out his Lancer to get to the examination center when Kumkum comes out after locking the house.....

She goes to sumit..

Kk-sumit?..tumhaari chaabhi.. 😳

Su-tumhaare paas hai tumhaari key?.. 😳

Kk-haan..bye and all the best.. 😳

Su-bye kyun?..mere saath hi chalo..aaj first day hai..center bhi door pad raha hai.. 😳 kaise jaogi?..We can go together.. 😳

Kk-nahin..I can travel by myself.. 😳

Su-are you sure?..you'll save you money..if

Kk-main bataana bhool gayi..maine part-time job bhi le liya hai...bacchon ko tution dena hai...I'll be back late..fees bhi acchi hai..so.. 😳

Su-oh!!..but I'll still ask..chalo..jaldi pahunch jaayenge..

Kk-arrey tum jao na.. 😳 maine bus se aa rahi hun..

Su-ok..bye.. 😳
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