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Posted: 17 years ago
hey i am new to read your ff janu and commant on your ff i love it your all partss really plzz janu contuied soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Sorry,Sorry,Sorry,Sorry,Sorry,Sorry,Sorry,Sorry,Sorry,Sorry, Sorry,Sorry,Sorry,Sorry,Sorry,Sorry,Sorry,Sorry,Sorry....... ...............................................

Actully friends I was in hostel but now I'm at home so, I'll updaye regularly. I know its too late but forgive me. Actually Raokaiya,Sumitwadhwa unho ne muje pm kiya hai magar yahan woh site blocked ho rahi hai to aap jo bhi kehna chaho woh yahn keh sakte ho. Here is the next part.................................................


Thandi hawao ke bich dono ek doosre ki aagosh me hote hai, dono aaspaas ki duniya bhoolkar apne me hi doob jaate hai aur us haseen raat ke baad jab subah hoti hai to har roz ki tarah Kumkum Sumit se pehle uth jaati hai, aura ankh khoolte hi usse agli raat yaad aati hai aur uske bare me sochkar who apni aap muskurakar sharma jaati hai aur bed se utarne ki koshish karti hai magar who Sumit par wapas jaa girti hai kyonki uska doosra hath jat se Sumit pakad leta hai aur tabhi……………………………….

Sumit: Mat jaao naa.

Kumkum: Sumit subah ho chuki hai. Ab to jaana padega naa, vaise bhi aaj Lori hai to sari taiyaari karni hai, please, jaane do.

Sumit: Naa, tum kahin nahi jaa rahi ho.

Kumkum: Sumit, baat ko samajo.

Sumit: Thik hai jaa sakti ho to jaao.

Kumkum Sumit ke hath se apna hath chudakar jaati hai magar vapas Sumit uska hath pakd leta hai.
Kumkum: Sumit, ab kya hai?

Sumit: Kuch kami hai.

Kumkum: Kya? Tum bahane mat banao.

Sumit: Nahi nahi thehro. Ye tumhari…..

Aisa bolkar Sumit apne hath par lagi Kumkum ki bindiya uske mathe par vapas lagata hai aur muskurakar

Sumit: Iske bina Kumkum adhoori hai.

Kumkum: Nahi, Kumkum apne Sumit ke bagair adhoori hai.

Aisa kehkar Kumkum Sumit ko hug karti hai.

Sumit: Aha, kya baat hai, kash aise hi aapki bindiya roz hamare hath par chhot jaaye.

Kumkum muskurakar Sumit ko marti hai aur phir se ekbaar hug karke jaane ki koshish karti hai aur phir Sumit uska hath pakad leta hai.

Kumkum: Sumit, ab kya huva? Muje der ho rahi hai jaane do.

Sumit: Abhi bhi kuch baki hai. Jo aap bhool rahi hai aur uske bagair to aap jaa nahi paoge kyonki uske bagir hamare din ki shuruaat nahi hoti.

Kumkum Sumit ka ishara samaj jaati hai aur Sumit ke paas aakar uske gaal par ekdum pyar se ek good morning kiss deti hai aur

Kumkum; Sumit, ab mat rook aur tum bhi chalo.

Aisa kehkar Kumkum uthne jaati hai magar who vapas Sumit ke upar gir jaati hai aur

Kumkum: Sumit, ab bahot ho gaya main late ho rahi hoon, please, chhodo mera hath.

Sumit: Magar maine to hath pakda hi nahi.

Tab uska dhyan jaata hai ki Kumkum ka mangalsutra Sumit ki chain me atak jaata hai aur who nikalne ki koshish karti hai tab

Sumit: Sumit: Itni suhani raat ke baad itna zulm hum pe mat uthaiye, hum aapke bagair ek pal nahi reh paate isliye hume yun chhodke mat jaaiye, ye aap bhi janti hai aur hamara dil bhi dekhiye isliye to ye chize bhi hai aapko rokne lagi.

Kumkum: Aapko chhodkar to yun hum bhi nahi jaana chahte magar ye hai hamari majboori, thoda sa hume samajiye janab kyonki yahin rit hai duniya ki.

Phir dono eksath ghar vapas jaate hai aur dono taiyaar ho jaate hai baad me Sumit taiyar ho chukka hota hai aur Kumkum taiyaar hoti hai tab Sumit uske paas aakar uski madad karta hai aur sath me kehta hai,

Sumit: Ye shadi ke baad hamari pehli lori hai, to kya aap janti hai ki lori main kya karte hai?

Kumkum: Thoda thoda maloom hai magar kya aap jante hai?

Sumit: Haan, muje pata hai.

Kumkum: To bataiye, kya karna hota hai?

Sumit: Usme subah sab log patang udate hai, Gujarat me yahan Lori ko uttrayan kehte hai, doosri aur music bajate hai, Sab patangbazi ke dauran ekdoosre ke patang ko katte hai aur har patni apne patni ki firkin yaa chakri pakdti hai, raat ko lakdiyo ko jaalakar lori banayi jaati hai aur uski pooja hoti hai.

Kumkum: Matlab aaj aapki chakri hume pakdni hogi.

Sumit: Yes. Aur muje poora yakin hai kit um mere sath hogi to main patangbazi me bhi jeet jaoonga.

Kumkum: Main to har safar me aapke sath hoon.

Dono ekdoosre ko pyar se gale lagate hai,Kumkum taiyar ho chuki hoti hai tabhi

Veenaji: Sumit, Sumit…………………..

Sumit: Ye gharwale bhi muje thodi der tumhare karib rehne nahi denge.

Kumkum hasti hai aur dono bahar jaate hai.

To be continued………………………….


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Posted: 17 years ago
great part preety plzzzzzzzzz contuied next part i love it
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thankx a lot 4 updateing at last............loved the romantic morning.......
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey janu after long long time welcome back..thanx for updatng..bahut raat ke baad subah hui so nice part..and write now soon ..kahin bhaag mat jana..
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Posted: 17 years ago
good to see uback janu
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Posted: 17 years ago
Bahar pooja ke room me sab ikkatha hote hai aur wahan Sumit-Kumkum pahonch jaate hai.

Veenaji: Are, Kumkum,Sumit. Aa gaye dono. Chalo ab aarti karlo baad me sab lori ki taiyari bhi karni hai.

Kumkum: Ji mummyji.

Kul: Are, beta Kumkum, dhyan rakhna ki Veena sirf tumse hi kaam naa karvaye kyonki usse to kaam karne ki aadat nahi hai naa. ( Aur hansne lagta hai)

Ye sunkar sab hasne lagte hai aur

Veenaji: Aji, aap bas kijiye, aaj tak hamari shadi ke baad maine hi sab kiya hai. Kyon maaji?

Dadima: Ab haan to bolna hi padega.

Ye sunkar Veena chid jaati hai aur
Kumkum: Kyon aap sab aisa keh rahe hai, mummyji sahi keh rahi hai ki unh one hi sab sambhala hai.

Veeenaji: Par muje ab koi fikr nahi hai kyonki tumhare aane ke baad sab tumne aise acche se sambhal liya hai ki koi problem nahi hai.

Sumit: After all biwi I mean pasand kiski hai.

Dadaji: Dekha Kumkum, sara kaam tum kar rahi ho aur credit ye le jaa raha hai.

Kumkum: Nahi, dadaji ab Sumit akela nahi hai Sumit main hi Kumkum shamil ho jaati hai to ye credit usika hai.

Kul: Chalo, ab bahot baate ho gayi aarti bhi kare?

Kumkum: Ji, daddyji.

Aarti shuru hoti hai aur aarti Sumit-Kumkum ek sath karte hai, aur aarti khatm hone ke baad kumkum sab ko Prasad deti hai aur sab prarthna karte hai, baad me prarthna ke kaksha me sirf Sumit-Kumkum hi hote hai aur dono prarthna karte hai tab Sumit bhagvaan ki tarf nahi balke Kumkum ki or dekhta hai aur Kumkum ki aankh band hoti hai phir bhi

Kumkum: Sumit, meri taraf nahi par bhagvaan ki or dekho.

Sumit: Are, tumhari aankhe band thi phir bhi tumhe pata chal gaya?

Kumkum: Haan.

Sumit: Kaise?

Kumkum: Meri man ki aankhe harh waqt tum kya kar rahe ho who dekh sakti hai Sumit.

Sumit: To ye batao ki maine kya manga bhagvaan se?

Kumkum: Shayad ye ki kal raat ke baad ab jald se jald aap papa aur main mummy ban jaoon. Kyonki janam janam ka sath to humne mang hi liya hai aur who to hamari harek prarthna me shamil hai.

Ye sunkar Sumit kuch keh nahi pata aur

Sumit:(Apne aap se) Kumkum shayad ab ye sapna sapna hi rahega magar main tumhe ye kaise batao.

Baad me sab dinnig table par breakfast lete hai, uske baad sab terrace par jaate hai magar Sumit apne kamre me jaata hai aur yahan Kumkum kitchen me jaati hai.

Sumit apne kamre me Doctor ko phone karta hai.

Sumit: Dr. Aarti?

Dr.: Yes, who's there?

Sumit: Aartiji main Sumit, Sumit Wadhwa.

Dr.: Haan Sumit. Kaho. Kaise yaad kiya?

Sumit: Haan, who reports aapne bheje?

Dr.: Haan, Sumit who maine bhej diye hai aur tumne apne farm house ka jo address diya tha usi par bheje hai. Shayad aaj tumhe mil jaayenge.

Sumit: Thanks you Doctor. Aapke hisab se koi chance hai Kumkum ki pregnenacy ke liye?

Dr.: Sumit, maine jaise kaha ab koi chamtkar hi kuch kar sakta hai, phir bhi tum apne gynac se baat kar lena. Thik hai?

Sumit: Thik hai Dr. Thanks. Bye.

Sumit phone rakhta hai aur darvaze ki or uska dhyan jaata hai tab who wahan dekh chonk jaata hai kyonki who wahan Kumkum ko dekhta hai aur Kumkum usiki or dekh rahi hoti hai aur tab who

Sumit: Kumkum, who who who main main…………………………………

Kumkum: Kya huva atak atak ke kyon baat kar rahe ho? Tum to aise react kar rahe ho jaise tum mujse kuch chhupa rahe ho.

Sumit:(apne man me) Thanks god, Kumkum ne kuch nahi suna. Kumkum sorry main tumhe abhi kuch nahi bata sakta.

Kumkum baad me dheere se uske paas jaakar uske gaal par kiss karti hai aur tab Sumit kadhyan vapas uski aur jaata hai

Sumit: Who office se phone tha to,

Kumkum: Maine tumse kuch poochha?

Sumit: Nahi.

Kumkum: To phir explaination kyon de rahe ho? Muje apne aap se zyada tum par yakin hai,tum mujse kuch chhoopaoge nahi aur agar tum aisa karoge bhi to usme meri hi kuch bhalayi hogi. Main actually mera kaam khatm ho gaya tha to maine socha ab hum dono bhi teraace par chale?

Tab Sumit Kumkum ko apni banho me khinchkar

Sumit: Who main kya keh raha tha ki………….
Kumkum: Kya?

Sumit: Yahi ki ghar ke sab log yahan nahi hai, sare kaam karnewale bhi niche nahi hai, yahan sirf hum dono hi hai,to………..

Kumkum samaj jaati hai magar natak karti hai,

Kumkum: To?

Sumit: To samjo naa, you know what?

Kumkum: What?

Sumit: Kyon naa mauke ka faida uthaya jaaye?

Kumkum: Nahi.

Aisa kehkar Kumkum Sumit ko khinchaklar teraace par le jaati hai.

To be continued……………………………

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Posted: 17 years ago
Aweeeeesome Janu di..waiting for a long emotional part...i hope kkk sab jaldi jaan jaye..
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Posted: 17 years ago
Great part ...........just waiting 2 c what happens in the future.......
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Posted: 17 years ago
great update
terrace par kuch suprise hai kya
continue soon

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