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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ankuhujulover

hey hiba i usd 2 read ur story bt i thnk beech mein culdnt read....read the latest part....must say it ws awesummmmmmm

keep it up 😃

wish su accepts kk soon....cont soon 😛

thanx 4 giving time to my FF anku & thanx 4 lovely comments keep reading & su accpts kk very soon 😃

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Posted: 18 years ago

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GR8 suprb part yar 👏 fAB part cont soon hiba

thanx sona 4 Gr8 comments KEEP reading 😃

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Posted: 18 years ago

thanx priyanka 4 lovely comments KEEP reading

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MORNING

sare raat kese beet jate kk ko kuch pata nhi chalta

its 8:00 AM Now

sumit jag jaaata hai

see kk ,,,,, kk is still in shok

su see kk & fell sad

Su (himself)ye kya keeya maine kk ki zindagi barbad kar dee... ye maien thek nhi keeya

su fresh hoone jata hai & kk sumit ko deekh rahe hooti hai

su fresh hoo k aata hai

KK hold her hand

kk - kya itna haq hai mujhe k main pochoo kuch

S- agar pochne se dil ka boogh & dard kaam hoota hai aap poch sakte hai

kk - ye dard aisa hia jo kabhi bhi kaam nhi hooga

S - per ???

KK - per kya

tabhi koie door ko knock karta hai

su open the door

its preeti

P - aare acha hooia aap uthgaie hoo

S - tum ko koie kaam tha ?

P - hi bhabhi ..& mujhe nhi papa ko kaam tha aap se

S - mai abhi aata hoo

P seedhe under chalii jate hai kk k pass

P - hi bhabhi kese hoo ?ye kyu poch rahoo main pata aap to theek hi honge

S kk looking each other

su leave

Su (think)kya kahi na chite the kk mujh se ?per kya kro main bhi ab kuch bhi karne k liye der hoo chuki hai

kul see sumit & su k pass aata hai

K - aare kya sooch rahe hoo chaloo mere saath

S- kuch nhi papa chaliiye

kul sumit ko apne room mainleke jata hai

& kul lock the door

S heeraan hoojata hai

S - papa aisa kya hia jo aap ye door lock kar rahe hoo

K - mujhe tum se baat karne hia or nhi chita k kise or ko is bare main pata chalee

S- kahiye ?

K - kk k bare main kuch kahina ... janta ho k tumhe kk ko samj main ne main waqt lagega or simram ko bhulane main bhi is beech main tum agar kk ko kushiya nhi dee sakte to na do per ghum deene ka haq bhi nhi tumhe bas ye koshish karoo k jab tak kk ko samjh nhi lete use koie bhi dhuk nhi deena tum

S - papa main koshish karooga k kk ko koie bhi ghum ya dhuk na doo main

Su leave

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IN VH

mihir kk k room main sare raat bethe guzare

M - aaj is room main mere pari nhi hai...ahhhh kese beethige ab ye mere zindagi pari k bina

T come

T - abhi tak yahi hoo aap ... kk kush rahege waha aap fiqer na kree agar itni hi yaad aarahe hai to ja k mill aaie us se ta ke aap k dil ko aaram mile

M - aare nhi nhi abhi to sirf 8 baje hai sooie hooie hooge ab tak

tabhi karan bhi pari ke room main aajata hai

K see M & T is also in pari room

K - aare papa aap yaha kya kar rahe hai

T - wahi jo tum karne aaie hoo

K - maa pari kese hoo waha theek to hooge pata nhi waha us se kese baat ki ja rahe hooge pata nahi k waha who kese rahi rahe hooge pata nhi

T - kuch pata bhi hia ya nhi ...sab kuch pata nhi

M - theek hi to kahi raha hai

T - ha jee aap dono baat to aise kar rahe hoo k jese mujhe us ki koie fiqer nhi

M - hooge kon kahita hai nhi hai per

T - per wer kuch nhi wese bhi kk kal aane wale hai na yaha pukphere k liye

K & M = kya kal aaiege

T ab chloo aap dono fresh hoo jaio nashta tayar hai chal k kha loo aap

M - tulsi

T put both hand on her waist say Mihirrrrr

karan to baag jata hai & mhir pari's room also

tulsi smilee

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WH

sumit room main jata hai

kk _ preeti main change kar k abhi aaie

kk see sumit & looking to preeti

P - kuch chiye kya aap ko?

KK - nhi

preeti look back

P - acha bhaiya main chalti hoo aap dono nashte k liye aajana

S - ha thek hai

P leave

su almarii k taraf jata hai apna suit nikalne k liey

per kk phele hi nikal chuki the su ka suit

kk change kar k aate hai & she see

jo suit us k sumit k liye nikala tha wahi sumit pahine ja raha hai

kk taray hone jate hai

sindoor lagate hai& mangalsutar ko deekhti hia &

peehin lete hai

sumit kk ko deeta hia

Su- KUMKUM

kk trun her face toward sumit

S- mujhe se ye jo galti hooie hai is k liey soory & ab aap kush rahoo aap ko kush rakhne k liye main koshaish karooga & kuch bhi kahina hooto mujh se kahiyega ya abhi kuch aise baat hia to ,,,,

KK - kush kal k baad mere kushiya to lagat hia mujh se door chaligaie rooth k or ab shayd mere zindagi main wapsa kabhi na aaie

su -per aap ...

kk trun her face other side

&

su leave the room

kk sad hoojate hai

she also leave room & go to hall

V- dono aagaie aaio nashta tayar hai

kk sumit se door jake 2nd side per beethti hai preeti k saath

V - aare kk tum waha kyu beethi hoo yaha aaio sumit k saath beetho

Kk sumit looking each other

V – aajaio yaha chaloo jaldi karoo

Kk aa k sumit k saath beethti hai

Kk nashata kar k chali jate hai room main

IN ROOM

Jese kk enter hooti hai

Wahi Mihir ka phone aajata hai

K- heloo

M – parii

K – papa

Kk start cry

M – kya hooie hai

Sumit stand near to door

Kk – aap sab ki yaad aarahe hai mujhe yaha kuch acha bhi nhi lag raha hai

M - parii phele mujhe tumhare bohat fiqer hai agar aise baate karooge to aaj ka din kese guzrega mere ta k main tumhe kal deekh sakoo

Kk – kal main sara din aap k yaha rahoooge

M – ha bikul rahina ab roona choro ek smile dedoo papa ko

KK smile

Karan mihir se phone cheen leta hai

K- pariii kese hai tu ???theek to hai tum mujhe tere bohat yaad aarahe hai kya tum miss kar rahe hai humie

Kk laugh

Kk – bahi ab aap bolna band karooge to mai booolooo

Karan smile

K - oo ha bolt u bool main sun raha hoo

KK – hmmm main bikul theek nh hoo aap sab ki bohat yaad aarahe hai

k- tum theek kyu nhi hoo ?aise dara mat such bata kush to hai na tu

Kk – ha ha main to bohat (close her eyes ) bohat bohat kush hoo yaha sumit to mere itna khayal rakh rahe hai kya bataio

K – sumit se yahi umeed the mujhe wese sumit hai kaha ?

K – who who

Kk apne beeche deekh ti hai

Kk – yahi na sumit mere pass main hi

K – acha baat to karana usse

Kk sumit ko phone ka ishara karte hai sumit kk k pass aata hai

Kk – bahiya ka phone hai

S- heloo karan kese hoo ?

K – main to kese theek hoo sakta hoot um mere pyare behin ko jo legaie hoo & thanx us ki itni care karne k liye

S – aare nhi nhi is main thnx ki kya baat hai ab ye ye to mera hi kaam hai

K smile

K – ok by kal milte hai

Sumit phone rakhte hai room se bahir chala jata hai

Sumit to veena room

S- maa mujhe aap ki jazat chiye

V - kis baat k liye

S - kk apne ghar waloo ko miss kar rahe hai to main sooch raha hoo k us ko kuch der k liye le jaio

v - aare is main pooch ne wale kya baat hai leja tum bhi jaio us k saath ab us k saath saath rahoo use acha lagega

S - hmmmm

S leave

& GO room

S - suniye aap ready hoojaie hum bahir chal rahe hai

kk heeran hoo jate hia suddnly sumit ko kya hoogaya

KK tayar hoone chali jate hai

sumit kk ka car k pass w8 kar raha hai

S see kk open door 4 her

kk - hum ja kaha rahe hai

sumit did not answer kk

they reach Vh

KK k face per smile aajate hai ghar ko deekh k

VH

kk seedha under chali jate hai

Mihir office jane k liye nikal raha tha

M - acha tulsi main ja raha hoo phele l8 hoogaya hoo 11 baj gaie hai

tabhi M ka kk se taker hoo jata hai

M - PAriiiiiiiiii

M hug KK

KK = papa aap sab ki bohat yaad aarahe the

kuch der baad

M - aqle aaie hoo ?

KK - nhi to sumit

she trun her face sumit ko deekh ne k liye

Kk - sumit to bahir hi hai main seedhe under aagaie

M - parii

M bahir jata hai sumit ko lene per sumit us door per hi mil jata hai

KK tulsi k saath kahri hooie the

Sumit take aashirwaad frm M & T

M - sumit who parii tum is tarha

S smile _its Ok uncle

kuch der sumit waha sab k saath beeth k chala jata hai

T - aare abhi to aaie hoo aap dono

S - aunty main abhi office ja raha hoo kucch paaper per sin karne hai us k baad aake kk ko leke jaioge ,,theek hai kk

Kk - ha theek hai

S leave

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Its Night NOW

kk still In Vh

& sumit ek parahi per chala jata hia office k baad

V call sumit

V - helloo sumit kaha ho tu dono jaldi ghar aajaio

S- maaa theek hai aarahe hai

V - jaldi aajaio

veena phone rakh deeti hai

sumit uth k Vh jata hai

Kk ko lene

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IN VH

Sab haal main bethe hooie hai

Karan - aaj mere pari bohat hi pyare lag rahe hai lagta hai ye sab sumit k pyar ka asar hai

ku- ha bahi bool to theek rahe hoo aap

KK= ab aap dono pher shuroo mat hojana

T come

T chalo chaloo dinner is readyy

tabhi T see Sumit stand near door

T - aare beta sumit aaio sahi waqt per aaie hoo

S - sorry aunty who meeting ki wajha se l8 hoogaya kk kaha hai

T - kk sumit bula raha hai

kk samjh nhi pata hai k aaj hooia kya hai sumit ko

kk sumit k pass jate hai

S- chalee

kk - haaa haa chaliye

Kk jate hai Tulsi kahine

T - sumit beta phele bar ghar aaie hoo aise kese jane deenge aajaio dinner kar k chale jana

S - Per waha maaa w8 kar rahe hai kk ka

T - kuch der or aajaio

Sumit dinner k liye ruk jata hai

AFTER DINNER

S looking kk

S - kk ....

Kk sumit ko deekhti hai

S- chaleee?

KK - chaliye

dono sab se mil k chali jate hai

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WH

VEENa is w8ing 4 sukk

its 9:30 Pm

su kk enter inside

V - aagaie tum dono

kk take aashiwaad frm veena

su kk saath karhe hooie hia

V - kise ki nazar na lage tum dono ko

kk su looking each other

sumit room main chala jata hai

dada dadi kk se baate karne beeth jate hai

Dadi - kk ab ja k aaram karoo thak gaie hooge jaio chaloo sumit intizar kar raha hoo tumhara

KK waha se chali jate hai

dada- kitne pyare bachee hai or humara sumit kitna kush naseeb hia k kk jesa jeevan saathi use k saath hai

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IN ROOM

sumit bed per beeth k files cheak kar raha hai

kk Samne se sumit ko deekh rahe hoote hai & kuch der k baad room ka door lock kar k change k liye chali jate hai

change kar k aate hai & kuch saaman lekar almari main rakhne jate hai wahi kk ki nazar us gift per jate hai jo us ne kushi k haathoo beejh vaya tha & who abhi tak sumit ne open nhi keeya hooia tha who deekh k kk thodi mayoos hoo jate hai kuch der k baad

kk looking sumit

kk has tear in her eyes

when sumit see kk

kk trun her face other side & clean her teras

su ye deekh k samjta hai k shayd kk soona chitye hai & bed per main (sumit = main)beetha hoo

sumit waha se uth jata hai

sofe per jane k liye uth ta hai

Kk hold HIs HAND

END OF THIS PART

juhi_hussain thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hope u like it So ssory 4 posting l8 next part 😊 hope u enjoy during reading
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Posted: 18 years ago
AWSOME Suprb part hiba very gud going keep its up this GR8 work yar 👏 now plzzz cont soon yar cnt w8 to know ab kya hooga 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
just aws 👏 .
bhachari kk 😭 😭 .
cont soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
waoh 👏 awesum 👏 super yaar
continue soon 😊 it's very interesting to know k su-kk ka pyaar ab kaise aage badega 😉
jaldi likhna ok
this part was just tooo good n awesum
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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 gr8 going



Rajeev Rox
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: juhi_hussain_lo

AWSOME Suprb part hiba very gud going keep its up this GR8 work yar 👏 now plzzz cont soon yar cnt w8 to know ab kya hooga 😉

thanx a lot sona 4 lovely comments yar jaldi hi karooge cont &jo bhi hooga ab jaldi acha hooga 😳

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