New FF : O Saathi Re: SuKk 1st meeting pg 3

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vernika

@verni

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Hey Annie... thanks... wud continue soonn... the next part is coming soon...

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vernika

@verni

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Kumkum standing in the bridal dress and a few friends...

A girl : Sumit , hum aur kitna intezaar karenge?... aur kiska?

Sumit : Bas do minute...

Another : Sumit tum dono ki shaadi ho chuki hai.. ab tum ise ghar le jao naa...

Sumit looks at Kumkum, who was also confused...

Sumit : haan bas...

Then a decorated car comes,..

A guy comes out and goes to Sumit..

Guy : sorry yaar... traffic jam mein phans gaya tha... Namaste bhabhi... main Sumit ka dost hun.. wo shaadi ke baad Sumit aapko ek saji hui gaadi mein le jaana chahta tha to usne mujhse kaha tha... par mujhe hi der ho gayi...

Kumkum looks at Sumit...

A girl : Ohhh.. Sumit tumhe to bada khyaal hai apni Kumkum ka... chalo ab le bhi jao ise...

They sit in the car... Sumit was to drive the car...

Kumkum : Is sab ki kya zarurat thi?..

Sumit : Kumkum, main jaanta hun.. ki bohut zyaada nahi kar sakta main.. par jitna haath mein hai... utne ki koshish to zarur karunga...

Kumkum smiles...

Kumkum : tum naa paagal ho....

Sumit (comes closer) : Tumhare pyaar mein...

Kumkum : Ab gaadi start kar ke chalenge bhi...

Sumit : Sure ma'am...

The car starts...

There is smoke and dust as Kumkum leaves in the taxi...

Sumit was watching this from the window... when she goes, he draws the curtain...

He sits on the bed... quietly... opens the drawer... takes out a photo frame of Kumkum and looks at it...

There are voices of Kumkum, which he hears...

"Hume koi alag nahi kar sakta"---- "Hume alag ho jana chahiye..." ----" Main tumse bohuttttttttt zyaada pyaar karti hun" ---- " Tum chaho to divorce papers main banwa dungi..."

The door-bell rings... and he keeps the frame inside the drawer, closes it and goes...

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The door opens... a girl is standing in salwar suit...

Girl : Kaun?...

The person turns around...

Girl : Tu....

And she hugs the person... we see it's Kumkum...

Girl : Kumkum... itne din baad... I mean... main.. mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha ... m so happy... par tujhe kaise pata chala ki main wapas aa gayi... abhi 1 hafta hi hua.. aur arey yeh saaman...?... ohh main bhi kitni paagal hun... andar aa.. phir baatein karte hain...

They move in... and close the door...

"Hmm ghar kaafi achcha hai..." says the guy...(Raj)

Sumit smiles...

Guy : For sure teri pasand se to nahi hui hogi yeh decoration... m sure.. bhabhi ne kiya hoga.. waise wo hain kahan?... kam se kam mujhe milwa to unse... sirf suna hi hai unke baare mein... ghar pe nahi hain kya?...

Sumit (hesitating) : Tu baith to.... aate hi apni bak-bak shuru kar di...

Kumkum sits down... and luks around the house...

Kumkum : Hmm ghar kaafi achcha decorate kiya hai tune...

Sudha (comes with water) : Thanku... ab US se course kiya hai.. to itna to kar hi sakti hun...

Kumkum( smiles and takes water) : Par ek hafte mein?...

Sudha : Nahi yeh designs maine pehle hi yahan ...wo Mahesh Uncle hain naa... arey wahi jinki firm hai..

Kumkum : Ohh haan haan...

Sudha : Unhe hi mail kar diye the... kyunki course khatam hone waala tha and waapas aana hi tha... to koi rehne ki jagah to honi hi chahiye...bas isiliye... Par tujhe mera pata kaise mila?...

Kumkum : Mary aunty se... unhone bataya ki tune apna address unke pass likhvaya tha... taaki wo mujhe de sake...

Sudha : Ohh haan main bhi naa kitni bhullakad hun... Hmm gayi thi main unke pass.. par unke pass tera address tha hi nahi.. to maine socha tu jab bhi unse contact karegi... to mera address at least tujhe mil jaaye...Khair yeh chod aur bata... Sumit kaisa hai?... Dekh naa... tum dono ke pyaar ke baare mein sabse zyaada mujhe hi pata tha... aakhir teri room-mate jo thi... par kabhi us se mil nahi paayi... aur chance ki baat jis din teri shaadi thi us ke ek din pehle mujhe US jaana pada... Par ab aa gayi hun naa... ab zarur milungi...

Saying this she laughs... then her eyes fall on her luggage...

Sudha : Achcha Kumkum... yeh saaman... Sumit se ladai ho gayi kya? (she says teasingly)

"We are divorced now..." Says Sumit...

Raj : What????????....

"Abhi apne divorce papers sign karke aa rahi hun..." Says Kumkum... standing near the window...luking outside..

Sudha goes near her and stands quietly for some time...

Sudha : Aa tujhe tera room dikha dun...

Kumkum luks at her and then follows her...

Raj sits on the bed...

Raj : Sumit par tune kaha tha teri love-marriage hai... fir yeh sab???..

Sumit stays quiet...

Raj : Kuch to bol... tu are Kumkum kaise mile... kab... mujhe to kuch pata bhi nahi hai.. Aur aisa kya hua jo tum dono.... achanak aise alag ho gaye...

"Achanak kuch nahi hua Sudha"... Says Kumkum... and comes and sits on the bed...

Sudha was listening quietly to her...

Kumkum continues...

" Hamara alag hona taiy tha... usi tarah... jis tarah hamara milna taiy tha..."

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Hope u all like it...

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soundsofcedar

@soundsofcedar

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#13

OMG thanks so much for updating so fast re and the part was FANTABULOUS...Simply wonderful...I love the scene transitions and the flashback...I can picture it all...WOW you are very talented and I am so glad I am reading this amazing ff...Please do continue soon so I can find out yeh SuKk alag kyon hogaaye haii Luv Alwayz Sahar😳

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vernika

@verni

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#14

^^ thanku..... ya wud cont soon...

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Jasmine

@Jasmine...

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#15

ws very well written!!keep up the good work di!!

m so eager to know hw did they got seperated??

loving the ff...very interesting!! :D

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Rupa

@nirmola

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Di, its Really suparb !!!!

You wrote so gracefully.
Specially i liked the way you combined the past & present.

Desperetly waiting for next track.

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vernika

@verni

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#17

@ jassu : thanku bchchaaaa...

@ nirmola : thnks... hope I keep up ur expectations..

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surakshita

@surakshita

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

#18

another nice part thanks for a lovely update

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vernika

@verni

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#19

"Nahi nahi bilkul nahi... main kisi college vollege mein nahi jaa raha... mujhe koi competition mein participate nahi karna..."

Saying this a handsome guy starts moving towards his bike.... and sits... It's Sumit...

"Sumit plzz yaar ab itna bhi bhav mat khaa..."

Sumit stares the other guy...

Guy : I mean.. I know... us principal ne apne relative ko bhejne ke liye tera naam competition se katvaya tha... par dekh naa shaayad bhagwaan khud chahte the ki tum hi is competition ke liye jao.. tabhi to kal hi us ladke ka accident ho gaya... aur finally tujhe jaane ka mauka mil raha hai... ::

Sumit takes out his goggles and puts them.. :B-):

Sumit (smiles): Thanks... : (stops smiling) but no thanks... mujhe nahi chahiye koi mauka... I am not going.. please get it very clearly from me... :8-|:

Saying this he starts his bike and moves on...

His friends keep calling him... but he doesn't stop...

A girl : Manav tum jaante ho Sumit kitna ziddi hai... mujhe nahi lagta wo jaayega.. :-/:

A guy : Haan.. par wo ziddi hone ke saath saath moody bhi hai... agar uska mood badal gaya to wo zarur jaayega... I just hope aisa ho jaaye...

He is riding the bike.... when at a signal he has to stop... he was luking around when his eyes fall on something in his rear view mirror... he luked closely... they were... a girl's eyes.. he tilted his mirror a little to see the face.. but the mirror being loose, got tilt at a wide angle... showing him , her smile... he smiled with her... then turned to see her but as she was sitting in the auto... and there was traffic so he couldn't... he again turned towards his mirror to tilt again... but the signal opened and he had to move... he stopped on one side... after a distance... but had lost her... he then moved to his house... ::

Sumit reaches his house and throws his jacket... and lies down on the bed... he closes his eyes... and he sees that smile and eyes... he smiles still closing his eyes... He picks up his guitar and starts playing it... then his mobile rings... he picks up... ::

On the other side : Sumit... to kya decide kiya tune? Tu kal competition mein aayega...?

Sumit (being in a gud mood) : Haan... of course... :

Saying this he disconnects...

The guy : Thank God... uska mood badal gaya... jis cheez ne bhi uska mood badla... thanks to it... hunhhhh.. chalo ab tension khatm... Now kal ka prize to pakka...

Next day...

Sumit and his friends are sitting together... and they are sitting.. in the auditorium where the music competition is to be held..His friends are busy talking while he is simply playing guitar softly... then he keeps his guitar aside and turns towards his friends...

Then he hears a noise , he turns quickly, there were some cardboard boxes, with some sketches and paints, colors, fallen on the ground... a girl sitting next to it... facing other side.... and he sees his guitar fallen beside her.. Actually she had dashed with his guitar.. and fallen on the ground with the stuff...

Sumit gets up angrily... (:

Sumit : What the hell... Tumhe dikhai nahi deta.. Tumne mera guitar... (:

He stops as the girl turns towards him removing frills of her hair from the above of her eyes....

Sumit keeps luking at her... actually her eyes... yes... they were the same... which he saw... yesterday.. the same lips... ::

The girl tries getting up but slips again... when she falls again then Sumit snaps out.. and gives out his hand to her... She luks at him... then slowly holds his hand and gets up but due to the slippery area.. she gets a little disbalanced but Sumit holds her by waist... they are eye-locked... :

"Sumit..."

They snap out and leave each other...

The girl: M.. m really sorry... wo yahan ka area itna slippery tha ki... I got disbalanced... itne saare saaman ke saath... m really sorry... (she luks at the guitar) ohh aapka guitar... :

She bends and picks up,

Girl : Yeh lijiye... dekh lijiye kuch kharaab to nahi hua...

But Sumit was unable to take his eyes off her... :

Gir l : Dekhiye I know meri galti hai... par m really sorry.. kuch bhi jaanbujh ke nahi kiya... main bas...

Sumit's friend : It's okk... idhar dijiye...

He says a lil rudely, then Kumkum quietly starts picking up things... her colors, paints and everything... Sumit sits beside her and helps her...

She luks at him and he smiles... They are again eye-locked... ::

"Kumkum..."

The girl turns... A few girls , standing at a distance... were calling her... she luks at Sumit...

Kumkum : Thanks... :

She takes her things and leaves... Sumit still didn't take his eyes off.. Kumkum reached the gate of auditorium but before getting, turns around and luks at Sumit... ::

Then her friends pull her out....

Sumit's friends call him and take him away...

Hope u all like it...