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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: surakshita

Naz

what should i say
minblowing muaah muaah
loved all the parts of your ff till now fanaatastic

Thank u so much surakshita...😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
hee guys here is the 5th part of my fanfic of SuKk
Tera Saath Hain Kitna Pyaara
I know im updating after a while..
kya karoon itni busy thi tah..ke ab jaake finish karpaayi ye part..
hope i can send next part wext weel ko..
so enjoy this part..i hope u all waill like this part also....
thank u guys for making time out to read the fanfic

Part 5

Recap: SuKk in same classroom, SuKk friendship

After the lecture Sumit and his gang are gathering their books and stuff and prepare to go to the canteen for lunch break. Now that Sumit and his gang are friends with Kumkum and Ashu, Sumit asks them to join their group to the canteen. While Kk is gathering her books Sumit asks her..

Sumit: Kumkum, chalo tum aur Ashu bhi hamare saath canteen mein, ab to hamari dosti bhi hogayi hain..

Kumkum smiles: theek hain hum bhi chalte hain

Ajay: Yes chalo, chalo..mujhe to bahut bhook laga hain..

Sumit teasing Ajay: Haan tumne to subha se kuch nahi khaaya hain na..?

Ajay gives a bhola look to Sumit. Kumkum and Ashu looking amazed at Ajay.

Ashu: Bhook aur tumhe? Tumne to abhi lecture se pehle wo kumkaran jaisa bhojan kiya tah na?

Ajay: Maine? lecture se pehle..? Nahi toh.?

Ajay thinking and then says: oooohhh wo subha ko, arre baba jo maine khaaya tah wo to mera light meal tah…asli meal to ab hoga…chalo na baba hum baaten karke time kyon waste karrahe hain baaki ke baaten canteen mein hoga..aur haan uske baat kisise dosti to bhi karni hain..

And he looks at Ashu with a smile. Sumit and Kumkum and the others start laughing and shaking their heads and walk towards the canteen. They all go out of the classroom and walk towards the canteen. Just as Ajay walks out of the classroom someone pulls him into the other corner..

Ajay shocked: haila..kaun hain…Arre..yaar tu..?

He looks at Raj who quickly pulls him and takes him to a corner where they can talk alone.

Raj: Haan main..aur kaun hoga..achha ab chalo batao mujhe tujhe meri aur …(Raj looking around if the coast is clear and whispers) Simmie ke baare mein kaise patta chala..?

Ajay smiles: arre ye bhi koi chupane wala baat hain..tumhare chehre pe likha hain..aur jab bhi Simmie saamne aata hain tumhara ye chehra tube light ki tarha chaka chak jhal uttah jo hain..

Raj: chal chal pakhao mat mujhe batana yaar kaise tujhe patta chala..

Ajay: yaad hain usdin main tumhare ghar aaya tah, tumhara wo kitaab wapas karne ko,

Raj: Haan toh..

Ajay: Toh, jab main aaya to aunty ne bataya ke tum apne kamre mein ho aur main jab aaya tumhare kamre mein to tum phone pe baaten karrahe tah..main tumhare peeche kara tah..but yaar u were so busy on the phone na u did not even notice me..maine socha koi important call hoga aur jaise main kitaab rakh kar jaa raha tah, bhagwaan ne meri kadam rokh diya..tab hi tumne kaha Simmie tum to jaante ho na main tumse kitna pyaar karta hoon…aur phir jo baaten huwi maine sunliya tah..

Raj relaxed now looks at Ajay: Thanks yaar tumne kisiko nahi bataaya

Ajay: Haan wo to hain..par yaar mujhe samach mein nahi aata aggar tumdono ek doosre se pyaar karte ho to keh kyon nahi dete..? aur Sumit to tumhara best friend hain na..to usse kyon chupaaya hain..aur dekho uncle to Raichand uncle ke saath business bhi karta hain..

Raj: Mujhe patta hain yaar. Simmie aur maine decide kiya hain ke jaise ye saal college ka khatam hojaayega hum dono parents ko batadenge..aur main dad ki business join karlunga aur phir Simmie ka haath uske dad se maang lunga..lekin haan mujhe bhi achha nahi lakta Sumit se ye baat chupaana par Simmie se wada kiya hain maine, lekin haan time aane pe main sabse pehle Sumit ko hi batawunga..bas kuch time aur… aur haan tum jo Indiatimes ki tarha news pehlate ho na..ye khabar abhi nahi chaapna..

Ajay: arre don't worry..aisa kuch nahi hoga..par yaar I love this chupke se pyaar..tumdono na ek dum dilwale dhulanya ke Raj aur Simran jaise ho..aur yaaar kya dialogue tune phone pe kaha tah Simmie ko..

Raj confused: Dialogue..?

Ajay acting in a in love mood: haan wohi dialogue.. mohabbat se zyada mohabbat hain tumse meri jaan…wah wah..mann karta hain main bhi mohabbat karne lagoon kisise aur yehi dialogue kehdunga..

Raj laughing: tu tujhe meri mohabbat dialogue lakta hain..

Ajay: Nahi baba aisa nahi hain..main to bahut khush hoon ke tujhe tera pyaar milgaya..ab chale warna Sumit ko aaj hi pata chal jaayega..

Both smile and leave for the canteen before anyone notices that they are missing

All arrive in the canteen and takes a seat. Renuka also comes.

Renuka: hey guys,

Sumit: arre Renuka, tum kahaan chali gayi thi lecture ke baat..

Renuka with a sad face: wo main bas..

Raj: Kya hua Renuka, why are you sad.?

Kumkum and Ashu and the rest look at Renuka a bit worried..

Renuka sadly: Nahi aisa kuch nahi hua wo bas main..

Sumit: Bolo Renuka..

Renuka: Sumit wo main..

And she turns to Kumkum and says

Renuka: Kumkum main tumse maafi maangti hoon..? Please mujhe maaf kardo..?

Kumkum confused: Maaf kardoon..? tumhe..par kisliye?

Ashu also watches Renuka..with a doubtful face..still not trusting her and asks Renuka..

Ashu: Kumkum tumhe kisliye maaf karen?

All the friends watches confused at Renuka

Renuka: Wo subha ke liyee maine tumhe sad kardiya tah na..wo ..jab maine tumhara, tumhara last name poochi thi…im really sorry..please mujhe maaf kardo.

Kumkum smiles: Renuka..tum maafi kyon maang rahi ho..dekho im ok..aur tum to sirf..

Kumkum getting sad again, Ashu notices and quickly says

Ashu: Renuka chalo bhool jao uss baat ko..topic ko change karte hain..

Kumkum looks at Ashu and smiles. Ashu smiles back at Kumkum..

Kumkum: Haan Renuka, jo hogaya so hogaya..aur main tumse naraaz nahi thi

Renuka smiling: Sach..? im so happy tum sad nahi ho..dekha Sumit, kumkum sad nahi hain aur tumne mujhe kahmakaah daat diya tah..

Sumit embarrased looks at kumkum while kumkum looks amazed at him..thinking that he got angry with his friend for her.

Sumit: wo..wo kya hain na..

Kumkum: its ok guys..im totally fine..

Ajay: uffo tum sab baaten itne karte ho na…yaar kahin mere stomach mein jo chuha daud rahe hain..bhook se unke dead na hojaaye..ab to order karo..

Raksha: haan tum sab order karo main jaa ke dekhti hoon Simmie kahaan rehgayi..

Ajay: theek hain, lekin Raksha, mera matlab hain my sweet bhabi, dekho tum jaldi se wapas aajana warna ye jo Ravi hai na..tumhare bina apna sandwich kaise khaaye ga..

Ravi: uffo phir shuru hogaya tu.. ab tujhe apni stomach ki chuhoon ki phikar nahi hain..

Everyone laughs..Sumit explains to Kumkum and Ashu

Sumit laughin: Kumkum ye sach baat hain, ye apna Ravi to Raksha ke bina kabhie lunch nahi karta, aur jab Raksha nahi aapati hain na lunch ke liyee to bharkurdaar bhi lunch nahi karta

Ravi getting embarrassed: Yaar Su kyon meri pol kholraha hain tu..

Sumit laughs,

Kumkum: Ravi its ok, tumhe embarrassed hone ki zaroorat nahi hain. Ye sab baaten hum ladkiyon ko bahut sweet lakta hain..jab uski pyaar uske liyee ye sab karta hain..

When Kumkum is saying this Sumit is looking at her with an amazed look and having such a great feeling in his heart..her words touching his soul..

Ravi: Thanks Kumkum koi to meri baat samdji hain..aur jisdin Sumit ka ye haal hojaaye ga tab main bhi dekhunga ye kya kya karta hain apne pyaar ke liyee..

Sumit looking at Kumkum and in his amazement answers: Aise pyaar ke liyee to kuch bhi karne ko tayyaar hoon main..

Kumkum looks amazed at Sumit when he says this and she gets a bit uncomfortable..Sumit notices this and comes back to earth and tries to cover up what he said..

Sumit: hhmmm mera matlab jab mujhe pyaar hojaayega to main bhi apne pyaar ke liyee kuch bhi karunga..

And everyone starts laughing..Renuka also smiling fake and thinks

Renuka thinking: Haan Sumit aur wo pyaar main hi hoon, bahut jald ye baat tum bhi samach jaawo ge aur nahi hua to main tumhari madat kardungi samachne mein..aur ye Kumkum..ye kya samachti hain maine sorry kahaa to sab kuch theek hogaya..? mmh kehte hain keep ur friends close and ur enemies closer..to maine to wohi kiya hain..Kumkum tum kitna bhi chupao par main bhi Renuka hoon, tumhari raaz to main jaan kar hi rahungi chahe mujhe iskeliye kuch bhi karna parega..

And she smiles getting khush by her evil thoughts…

Sumit: Ravi chalo hum food ke order dee kar aate hain tab tak Raksha aur Simmie bhi aajayenge

Kumkum: Simmie?..Simmie kaun hain..?

Ajay teasing Raj: Raj tu bata na..Simmie kaun hain..

Raj all shocked and nervously gives Ajay a kick under the table while Ajay is laughing..

Raj: Tum apne khaane ka socho na..sab ka introduction baat mein dedena..

Sumit: wo Simmie meri behen hain, she is my little sister..

Kumkum: o..ok

Right at that moment Simmie along with Raksha arrives..

Simmie: Meri baaten horahi hain?

She goes and gives Sumit a hug and Su touches her head..

Sumit: Haan meri behen tumhari hi baaten horahi hain..aao main hamare naye doston se milwaata hoon..Kumkum, Ashu yeh hain my little sister Simran aur pyaar se Simmie, aur Simmie yeh hain Kumkum and Ashu..

Simmie smiling: Hi

Kumkum & Ashu: Hi..

Simmie: waw Kumkum tum kitni khoobsurat ho, very gorgeous

Kumkum: thanks lekin Gorgeous to tum khud bhi ho..

Sumit: Meri behen jo hain..

All start laughing and the guys goes to get the food while the girls sit at the table and talk..

The guys are ordering the food and waiting for it to come. While waiting Ajay, Ravi and Raj are discussing something but Sumit is not paying attention he is looking at the table. He can't stop looking at Kumkum how gorgeous she is and how sweet her smile is.

Sumit to himself: Simmie ne sach kaha Kumkum, tum bahut khoobsurat hoon, bilkhul ek pari ki tarha

And he keeps looking at her, how the breeze of wind in the canteen makes her hair blow gently from her face, how adorably she adjusts her dupatta on her shoulder. The twinkle in her eyes whenever she laughs is like stars in a black sky, her look is so caring and filled with love, makin Sumit drown into this beautiful lake filled with love. But Sumit doesn't understands yet why he feels like this as if he is floating, when walking, beneath his feet he can't feel the ground as if he is walking on a bed of rozes..

While Sumit is lost in his thoughts, Ravi notices this and comes near him he puts his arm around Sumits shoulder and follows Sumits eyes and then says,

Ravi: Sumit..kya hua, tum aise kyon dekh rahe ho..

Sumit coming to his senses: Kuch nahi yaar, patta nahi kya horaha hain..

The other two guys also come

Raj: kyon kya hua..tumhara tabiyat theek hain na..?

Sumit: tabiyat to theek hain..par

Ajay: Par kya..?

Sumit thinking: arre mujhe khud malung nahi hain to main tum sab ko kaise batawoon.

Sumit: Nahi kuch nahi yaar…

Just at that moment the food comes..just in time for Sumit to change the topic..

Sumit: Dekho food aagaya, chalo hum lekar chalte hain.

Ravi smiling and get the food. Ravi still doubting and looks concern at Sumit

Sumit:..kya hua..aise kyon dekh rahe ho mujhe..?

Ravi: Kuch nahi aise hi, Sumit koi problem to nahi hain na tujhe..koi problem hai to kaho na

Sumit: arre koi problem nahi hain..mujhe kya problem hoga..?

Ravi smiles: Theek hain tu kehta hain to maan leta hoon...

Raj: Kya maante ho tum..kya hua..?

Sumit: Lo ab ye bhi aagaya.arre guys kuch nahi hua..par aggar hum kuch aur dheer yahaan pe yehi sawaal ek duuje ko poochte rahenge na...to food dobaara order karna parega..wo dekho

And the guys look in front of them Ajay already eating from the tray..while they are discussing..Sumit gently slaps on Ajay's head

Ajay: arre..tum sab discuss karrahe teh na to main check karraha tah ke fries kahin cold na hogaye honge…

Sumit smiles along with the other guys and they all go to the table and all start eating. While eating Ravi mentions about a picnic..

Ravi: Arre guys tum sab ko patta hain na wo next week mein jo picnic plan kiya hain..?

Sumit: haan yaar patta hain…wo kaise bhool sakte hain..

Ashu: Picnic..? Kaisa picnic..

Ajay with his mouth full: woh phhhnic nuhet whjej koj hai..

Ashu confused: Kya…? Ufffo pehle apne moo ke andar to khaali karon..words samach mein nahi aati hain..

The gang starts laughing…meanwhile Suraj has also entered the canteen with his gang and sits at a table and looks at Sumit and his group and specially Renuka..

Sumit: Wait main explain karta hoon..ye bhooka ko araam se khaane dete hain

Ajay smiles and shows Sumit a thumbs up.. Ashu and Kumkum smiling and shaking their heads..

Sumit: Wo kya hain na next week hum sab ke liyee ek picnic organize kiya gaya hain.. ..this is our last year na to saare students ne milke ek picnic arrange kiya hain ke exams se pehle hum last time mauj masti karle..uske baat to jo graduate hojaayenge toh patta nahi mulaqaat hogi bi ke nahi..to issiliye..

Ashu: WAW great picnic…humdono ko bahut pasand hain picnic…we always go when we have holiday..then we go with my fam..

Raj: To tumdono bhi chalo na hamare saath bahut mazaa aayega..

Sumit: Haan kumkum tumdono bhi chalrahe ho…

Kumkum: haan lekin humein to kisine nahi kahata..to kaise..

Raksha: Arre to ab kehte hain na…please kumkum tumdono bhi chalo na..it will be so much fun..warna sirf main aur Simmie wahaan pe honge.

Simmie: Haan Kumkum tumdono chalo ge na to bahut mazaa aayega..

Kumkum looking at Ashu who is all excited. Kumkum smiles

Kumkum: theek hain to humbhi chalte hain..when is this picnic..

Sumit: Next friday ko jaayenge aur sunday ko wapas aayenge..

Kumkum: ok hum ghar pe inform kardenge aur tumhe phone kardungi..

Sumit: theek hain

They exchange numbers..while Renuka is watching and thinkin something and says

Renuka: haan guys main bhi chalrahi hoon…picnic pe

Raksha: Tum bhi? Par jab announce hua tah to tum to nahi jaarahi thi..? Tumne to kaha tah tumko pasand nahi hain..aur tum to next week mumbai se bahar jaane wali thi na..kisi friend ki birthday party mein..?

Renuka quickly thinks of a bahaana

Renuka: haan wo wo..birthday party cancel hogayi..to maine soch ghar pe bore hongi to picnic pe hi chali jawungi..

Sumit: Theek hain baba..tum chalna waise saara college jaa raha hain…

Ajay who was finished with his lunch: Yes chalo ab plan hogay..next week hum sab challenge bahut mazaa aayega…

He turns to Ashu and says

Ajay: ye picnic to main kabhie nahi bhoolunga

Ashu looks at him and tries not to smile and looks the other way..All friends smile and finish their lunch

At the table of Suraj something is going on in Suraj his mind after he heard about that Renuka wants to go the picnic..he is thinking while he is looking at Renuka who keeps looking at kumkum.

Suraj thinking: achha to aisi baat hain madam..to ab main bhi picnic pe jaawunga..main bhi to dekhoon tum kab tak mujhse bhaagti rahoge..

And he smiles evily..

To be continued

-Naz-

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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG NAZ DI har baar ap itna ACHA part likhte ho kay kya batoon...I LOVE YOUR FF yaara😃😃😃...Especially because you manage to successfully write not just one but many lovestories at a time👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼...yaara main toh abhi tak eik love story nahin likh payi hehe I keep adding twists...YOU ARE THE MASTER OF ROMANCE👏👏👏...when you started I knew it kay ap acha likho gaye but yaara this is just plain AMAZING...OMG Sumit is SO ADORABLE...He is FALLING IN LOVE WITH KUMKUM...
Aise pyaar ke liye kuch bhi karne ko tayaar hoon main😃😃😃...I am SO HAPPY and I LOVE THAT LINE...You portray his feelings in such a real manner...I mean the description of the feeling of floating in the air was just WOW😍😍😍...Aur phir apki comedy is lajawab too🤣🤣🤣...Aww Ajab pulling Raj's leg...They are so CUTE...OH MY GOD I loved Sumit's answer when he said Meri behen jo hain😆😆😆...to Kumkum's compliment to Simmie...That's SO CUTE...Arre yeh kya PICNIC aur woh bhi for 2 DAYS😃😃😃...BOHUT MAAZA AYE GA...lekin what are Renuka and Suraj up to yaara...Agar inho ne kuch kharab kiya yah SuKk ko tang kiya I swear I am GOING TO BE SO MAD😡😡😡...Lekin I know kay Romantic Daddi Amma😊😊😊 (That's my name for you) will add some CUTE parts in the picnic...Once again SUPERB JOB and please UPDATE SOON Luv Alwayz Sahar😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
i can imagine every scence
waiting to read more cont
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey i have started reading your FF its wonderful please keep continuing
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Posted: 16 years ago

OMG thank u soooo much for posting the new part Di😃.....kab se wait kar rahi thi😳

MINDBLOWING FANTASTIC AWESOME!!!!!!!!

hehe lunch time pe sab se zida bhook Ajay ko hai😆😆!!!....aur usse yaad bhi nahin hai ke voh subha bhi kha chuka hai😆.....and when su tease him he gave a bhola look jaise sach mein kuch khaya nahin hai🤣🤣.....
loved Ajay and Raj convo......and when Raj pull him to the corner loved Ajay's reaction specialy the "haila kaun hai"🤣🤣....
and omg when he says Raj's romantic line omg has has ke mera bura haal ho gaaya😆😆...and just bcoz of that romantic line he wants to fall in love😆...i just love him😛...
haila yeh Renuka kitni dramebaz hai......ufff su ko impress karne ke liye kk se maafi😡....typical Renuka uss waqt tho mujhe sach mein Rennuka hi nazaar aayi....but kahin naa kahin usse ek acha kam kiya....kyunki kk ko pata chala ke su ne uska side liya tha😳...and she was amazed😃
and awwww how cute Ravi Raksha ke bina lunch nahin karta😳😳...yaar kk is right aisi baatein ladkyon ko bohut sweet lagti hai...mujhe bhi laga😛😉.....aur su uska mazar urata hai😆......cant wait to see su like that tab ravi bhi badla lega😉
OMG just LOVED su's line when he said "aise pyaar ke liye kuch bhi karne ko tayaar hoon main"...omg such a romantic line😳😍...
OMG yeh Ajay naa bechare raj ko chodega nahin😆😆...kitna pareshan karta hai usse...uff laughed sooo much when he said to raj to introduce Simmie😆😆 and raj gave him a kick😆
and finaly simmie met her futur bhabhi😉..aur usse khubsurat bhi kaha😛
mmmm i think Ravi will be the first to know about su's feeling for kk...kyunki usse already doubt ho raha hai....and omg Ajay!!!😆😆.....khare khare khaan kha raha hai🤣🤣....bechare ko bohut zor ke bhook lagi hai naa😆😆...ufff has has ke naa sofe se ghirne vaali thi main😆
haila picnic!!!!!😃😃.....matlab vahan kuch ho sakta hai kya😛...maybe a sweet sukk moment😉
agar Renuka beech mein naa aaye tho🤢.....and 😆...Ajay talking about the picnic with his mouth full😆😆....yaar tum keh rahi ho ke main comedy mein good hoon lekin yahan meri kitni buri haal ho gaayi hai pata hai tumhe😆🤣.....ufff yeh comedy naa kahtam mat karna tum apne ff se just love it....i love sukk but i have to say that i LOVE AJAY!!! he is sooooooooooooo funny and like me.....specialy voh kahane ke mamle mein😆😆😉
the part was FANTASTIC Di
keep it up u are tooo good i just love your writting its soooo real😉...aur haan cont soon yaar😳😉
Love u🤗🤗
Edited by mdtafan - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: preethi

i can imagine every scence
waiting to read more cont

Thank u so much Preethi..
I will try to update soon..
Love
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Irika

hey i have started reading your FF its wonderful please keep continuing

hee thanks yaara..im glad u also read my FF...
will update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: mdtafan

OMG thank u soooo much for posting the new part Di😃.....kab se wait kar rahi thi😳

MINDBLOWING FANTASTIC AWESOME!!!!!!!!

hehe lunch time pe sab se zida bhook Ajay ko hai😆😆!!!....aur usse yaad bhi nahin hai ke voh subha bhi kha chuka hai😆.....and when su tease him he gave a bhola look jaise sach mein kuch khaya nahin hai🤣🤣.....

loved Ajay and Raj convo......and when Raj pull him to the corner loved Ajay's reaction specialy the "haila kaun hai"🤣🤣....
and omg when he says Raj's romantic line omg has has ke mera bura haal ho gaaya😆😆...and just bcoz of that romantic line he wants to fall in love😆...i just love him😛...

haila yeh Renuka kitni dramebaz hai......ufff su ko impress karne ke liye kk se maafi😡....typical Renuka uss waqt tho mujhe sach mein Rennuka hi nazaar aayi....but kahin naa kahin usse ek acha kam kiya....kyunki kk ko pata chala ke su ne uska side liya tha😳...and she was amazed😃

and awwww how cute Ravi Raksha ke bina lunch nahin karta😳😳...yaar kk is right aisi baatein ladkyon ko bohut sweet lagti hai...mujhe bhi laga😛😉.....aur su uska mazar urata hai😆......cant wait to see su like that tab ravi bhi badla lega😉
OMG just LOVED su's line when he said "aise pyaar ke liye kuch bhi karne ko tayaar hoon main"...omg such a romantic line😳😍...

OMG yeh Ajay naa bechare raj ko chodega nahin😆😆...kitna pareshan karta hai usse...uff laughed sooo much when he said to raj to introduce Simmie😆😆 and raj gave him a kick😆
and finaly simmie met her futur bhabhi😉..aur usse khubsurat bhi kaha😛

mmmm i think Ravi will be the first to know about su's feeling for kk...kyunki usse already doubt ho raha hai....and omg Ajay!!!😆😆.....khare khare khaan kha raha hai🤣🤣....bechare ko bohut zor ke bhook lagi hai naa😆😆...ufff has has ke naa sofe se ghirne vaali thi main😆

haila picnic!!!!!😃😃.....matlab vahan kuch ho sakta hai kya😛...maybe a sweet sukk moment😉
agar Renuka beech mein naa aaye tho🤢.....and 😆...Ajay talking about the picnic with his mouth full😆😆....yaar tum keh rahi ho ke main comedy mein good hoon lekin yahan meri kitni buri haal ho gaayi hai pata hai tumhe😆🤣.....ufff yeh comedy naa kahtam mat karna tum apne ff se just love it....i love sukk but i have to say that i LOVE AJAY!!! he is sooooooooooooo funny and like me.....specialy voh kahane ke mamle mein😆😆😉

the part was FANTASTIC Di
keep it up u are tooo good i just love your writting its soooo real😉...aur haan cont soon yaar😳😉
Love u🤗🤗




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awww thank u so much meri jaan
im so glad u lovee all the characters..
and ya me also love Ajay..
and OMG thanks for lvoing the comedy
i was thinkin about it if anyone would like it or not
im soooo glad u loved it yaara...
and ya picnic mein to kuch hoga...😆
par uske liyee ull have to read the next part..
aur shayad picnic part will be two parts
abhii to nahi patta mujhe...
but ill do my best and make sure ull love thos parts...
thanks again sweetie for ur fabulous comment..
Love u lots
-Naz-
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Posted: 16 years ago
Picnic...What fun......i'm sooooo excited 2 hear about the picnic...........Sukk 2gether for 3 days...........surely there will be something which Renuka will do 2 spoil the whole fun but I'm sure Suraj will handle her ..........but really love the feelings that Su has started 2 have for kk............the way he's already thinking about her all the time is just sooooooo beautiful.................waiting 2 read what happens at the picnic.........continue soooooonnnnnnn..........................

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