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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey guys,
I'm not new to this forum but my account got hacked and I couldnt access it! So I made a new account..
this is my new ff based on Kimat Konnection...... hope you guys will like it!😊
Part 1:
Su: enough yaar! this cant happen! i have to get this job!!!
Su's friend: Su have patience! dont worry everything will be fine if you believe in god....
Su: yes I do. but wat will happen now??? that champak bhumia from Bhatinda is that comany's owner Mr. Bharmlal's son's friends' wife's nephews father's friend's son! He has a relation with Mr. Bharmlal.
Su's fri: And..............?? such a long relation you think will work?
Su: It already has!
Su's fri: (gets a call) haan.. theek hai... main aa raha hoon..... haan baba paanch minute mein pooch raha hoon!
Su: Kya hua?
Su fri: nahin yaar kuch nahin.... woh aashima ko bukhar hai isi liyen jaana padega.
Su: tu once and for all aashima ko chod kyun nahi deta???? waise bhi wo tere saat sirf isi liye reh rahi hain kyun ki tu usko shopping ke liye paise deta hain!
Su fri: aur wo mere kapde dhoti hai!
Su: Tu ek number ka badmash hai!
Su fri: mujhe jaane hoga yaar.. see ya!
Su: Bye......
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PS if there are any spelling mistakes I'm really sorry cause I'm not that good at hindi!
I'll write the next part as soon as I can!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Another ff...............nice nice.................i love reading ff's............that 2 about Sukk...............good continue soon.............
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi

Fabulous👏
Awesome👏
Marvelous👏
Awwwwwwwww lovely part👏
Great starting👏
Claping👏
👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice plzzzzzzzz contuied soon i love it
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwwww ek aur ff!!!!😛 i just loveeeeeeeeeee ffs
ab aisa lag raha hai jaisa mera promotion ho gaaya hai😆
btw nice start hope u will cont soon😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#6
so next part:
su: NO WAY!!! YOU CANT DO THIS TO ME!!! I HAVE WORKED HARD FOR IT AND I WILL GET IT NO MATTER WHAT!!!
boss: calm down!! you do not deserve this positon.. i am sorry but your files and qualifications dont match the critereia!!
su: what???!!!
boss: plz i cant waste my time.. will u just plz get out of here.. thanks you
su: (walks out)
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(at home)
mom: sumit..sumit... dahling where are you???
su: main yahan hoon maa...
mom: beta aaj din kaisa raha?? interview main pass hoon aaa??
su: maa kal baat kare plz? main bohot thak gya hoon..
mom: ok betta
Thinks (pata nahi kya hua is ko?)
su is looking thruh post.. he sees a shiny and attractive mail that is sent for him.. he opens it
su: haseena bano jaan??? ye kaun hai maa???
Mom: meri dost hai su..
su. iska address mil sakta hai?
mom. kyun?
su. aap sawal bohot poonch ti ho... bas mil sakta hai kya..
mom.. haan beta.. ost par hi dekh le..
su. udher nahi hai..
mom... nahi hai?
mom... thik hai main hghar pe dekh ti hoon...
(after some timw)
mom.. yeh le beta..
su. thanks mom..
mom.. anytime beta...
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( su goes to the place of the address)
haseena bano jaan- ji?? where are you??
HBJ.. tumhare peeche.. i knew kii tum aaoge
su.. u did??
Hbj: tumhari luck phooti tooti hai.. aur iska hal bhi mere paas hi hai!!!
su: saach??
hbj: ek tavis hai.. aur tumhe use dhoondna hai.. gud luck... bas aaj ke liye main itna hi keh sakti hoon...
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pardon me if i made any mistakes.. i was in a hurry..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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another ff...........wow..............and woh bhi sukk pe............bahut mazah aayega...................i love reading ff's😆

really nice part dear................bechare su ko kkoi naukri he nahiin milti..............so sad
do cont soon dear

afreen
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Posted: 16 years ago
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it is cool 2 part plzz contuied soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Aditi...first of all I am Sahar😃...ok I am SO EXCITED for your ff Hun😃😃😃...you know why kyon ki ap mere do BOHUT FAVORITE subject par likh rahi hain...Kismat Konnection and Kumkum😃😃😃...Yaar I LOVE SHAHID KAPOOR so obviously I love the movie too and I LOVE SUMIT AND KUMKUM so mere liye apka ff is like A MINDBLOWING GIFT👏...THANKS SO MUCH for writing your ff and I am going to be following your ff like a fanatic hehe😆😆😆...Now for your two parts...OMG already two parts post bhi kardiye ap toh bohut taz nikhili hehe...Anyways MY POOR SUMIT usey koi job nahin day raha but I am SURE kay HBJ will make things BETTER😉😉😉...Sorry for my crazy comment par kya karoon Shahid aur Kumkum mujhe thoda pagal kardete hain hehe😆😆😆...PLEASE UPDATE SOON😃😃😃
Luv Alwayz Sahar😳 PS your hindi is GREAT so much better than mine👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey welcome back!!!!!

wow posting anew part after such a long time😛.....
and the part was fabulous!!!....just loved it
poor su...usse kam hi nahin mil raha hai...but im sure after meeting HBJ everything will change😉
cont soon sweety😳

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