Abhigya FF-Pyaar ka Rasta part 1 updated

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi guys this is crazyabttisha - Vaishali I got this idea recently so here is the intro. Seeing ur comments I will decide whether to continue or not. i always love to abhigya as parents so this ff is about abhigya as parents i just want to know whether u guys love it or not so pls leave ur views so that i can continue.

here is the character sketch,


Abhishek prem mehra- owner of mehra groups also a rockstar loves his wife a lot but doesn't know her true intentions and his life has been blessed with the birth of his two children recently.

Neerja mehra- wife of abhi a big lover of money married abhi fr the sale of his company and brand name coz abhi had told her that his properties will come to his heir only. Aunt' s daughter of abhi so married in the name of relation

Pragya raichand- an orphan struggles to prove herself in front of her relations. Loves children a lot

Pragya will be introduced in later episodes abhi doesn't know the dark side of neerja loves her a lot. Neerja waits fr her baby's birth to get the property named to her and in the plan of leaving abhi and her children and marrying nikhil khanna a leading business man till that decides to keep abhi as a puppet to her in the name of children abhi first marries her fr his dadi but later loved her as she acted like taking care of dadi but one day dadi came to know. Of neerjas truth she tells it to Abhi but abhi denies as she was pregnant that time so dadi went to punjab.
so how was the intro pls leave ur comments below so that I decide to continue or no..


P.S: i am a fan of many of the ffs here i love all i dont know how many times i have read all ur ff so only i feel scared that whether mine will be upto ur level or not..😊 and i am a tamilian so i dont know much hindi i learnt hindi just by seeing kumkum bhagya and i am a jabra fan of shabbir i love him a lot lot lot...😆

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Maggie11

Love ie pls continue


thank u sis it means a lot to me my fav writer gvng me review thank u so much😊❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SaraPriya

Do continue Dear, all the best


thank u so much sis it means a lot😊😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thank u so much sis😊😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank u so much guys fr ur comments so here is the first part,

Part 1:

Abhi was sitting in his couch it seems that he is in his room sitting alone thinking something deeply and crying thinking that. Here neerja was sleeping in their bed facing back from their children yes abhi s children his life was born they were two days old. Abhi was wondering he culd a mom can face away from children when he was thinking that some words were echoing in his mind. Yes the same words which were the reason ft his tears

Flashback:

Neerja was pacing in the balcony as it was her nineth month and her date was also given a sudden strike of pain in her stomach ABHIII she shouted abhi rushed to her and immediately arranged the car. In the car neerja blurted out some unexpected words" just because of ur property I am bearing this pain because of ur dumb father who has written his will on behalf of his grandchildren who love u my love ft ur money has making me to face the utmost pain just get the hell out of this children from my belly" she cried abhi was dumbstruck he was like " what the hell is happening here she loves my money why this always happens to me?" Again her screams took him out of his trance.

She was taken into it. Abhi was pacing Here and there and those words filled his mind a lone tear escaped from his eys. That time he saw a chashme wala girl running Here and there playing with the children giving chocolates to them there was a wide smile over her face but an unexplained sadness covered her eyes only abhi could recognise them she has worn a white kurta and blue jeans she was simple but she looked like angel to his eyes. Yes that was our pragya. Seeing abhi she came towards him that time nurse came and congratulated abhi fr the birth of his son and his daughter then abhi confirmed abt neerjas health nothing but with a blank mind. Nurse went in and came out with two bundles of joy his reason fr living his happiness. Abhi had a mixed type of emotions she handed the babies to him. Abhi was scared to take them.

That time pragya reached when abhi was saying to nurse no sister I am scared what if I put them down?' Pragya came with saying " yes u can put them down but a father cannot" she said by gvng the babies to them abhi was so happy he don't know why. Either by pragya speaking to him or helping him or his children he don't know. Pragya said to him " today is birthday of both my parents yes they were born in same date and died in same date too they died in an accident but I don't know why I see my parents in ur children thank u so much God to make me meet them" pragya turned back to look fr nurse she confirmed that nurse was not there she took a bit of honey and put them in both of their mouths and in abhis mouth too and said " kush raho beta my ashirvaad and my prayers will be always fr u people" she turned by wiping her tears
Abhi said " one minute ur name?"

Pragya " pragya pragya raichand"... And left from there.

Precap: abhi naming his daughter as PRAGYA and son as ABHIMANYU.

Thanks for ur support I don't know how this chapter pls drop ur views so that I can continue..

Edited by crazyabttisha - 8 years ago
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So you were able to change the header?? Good!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Tia-

So you were able to change the header?? Good!!


yes dii thanks for ur help indeed😊

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