T Exposure drabble after fake proposal

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Abhi scolding Pragya for coming on stage instead of Tanu.
Pragya doesn't utter a word.

A: I am not continuing the concert. I will not perform now.

P phone rings. Purab tells that they have got the baby daddy inside the van and ask her to come. P says she will come and leaves.

Abhi thinks why is she not reacting. I said I won't perform and she just leavess the place for a phone call. Why is she not tensed about the concert?

A calls T but she doesn't pick up. A thinks I will call Daadi. Daadi attends A call. A asks about T and tells what happened. Daadi says that she doesn't know where T is. A puts a shawl on his face and goes to search T. He finds Tayaji and family and wonders why Daadi is not with them.

Alia comes in Burqa and is on the way to control room. Akash passes by. So she escapes the place and goes to monitor room by mistake and is shocked to see Daadi and Sarla ma there. She thinks is the Blackmailer thing a trap for Tanu. They must have brought Sarla ma to identify who attacked her.

A sees someone in Burqa leaving the room and follows. Alia in Burqa calls T but T doesn't attend. She thinks even if I try to help her, her fate is not letting. A tries to catch the person in Burqa but Alia runs. A chases her

Purab and Ronnie are waiting at the van door. They stop banging the door. Suddenly the door opens and N in burqa pushes them and runs away. Purab, Ronnie and Security Guards chase him. Both burqas cross by.

Somebody pulls the person in Burqa by hand. Everyone comes there. The veil is lifted and it is N. Abhi is shocked.

The End
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nive, you can do it all! Make such beautiful edits and then write such great drabbles! I wish CVs copy this off of you 😆 And I love that the writing was very KKB-style. Like I could see all of this happening and if we get lucky, this could very much happen.
Great job!!
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Thanks Naina!!

But CVS are better in creating dramatic intensive exposures. Its just that they take time (or shall I say they tend to forget that they need to expose ). 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Couldn't you send this to the studio?! 🤔...

Nice piece of drabble, Niive <3...
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