|| AbhiGya OS - Tu Hi Mera|| - Page 4

Originally posted by: BeingIyeristic

<font color="#666666">And Partner's finally here!!!!!</font>

<font color="#666666">I wasn't really very satisfied with the original.. When i re read it today, i found my writing very silly and amateur.. So i thought why not remodel it and make it what it would have been had I written it today.. So basically, I rewrote the whole thing, keeping the plot in mind...</font>

<font color="#666666">Changed the Tanu lunch scene completely coz what i had earlier written was outright stupid :p yay! Thanks for the support.. I really wasn't sure about this.. So its only because of you this one is here..</font>

<font color="#666666">And so so glad you liked it🤗🤗</font>

<font color="#666666">-Partner</font>

Haha always when we read the first few stories we have written it will be funny..I am so glad you decided to change parts of it that was so lovely ❤️ 🤗 you have a Way with words :)

priya this story i like it so much a cute fresh start of their life fabulous.
really perfect writing

Originally posted by: quirky_senorita

Superb update.

Originally posted by: Guruvishva

Wonderful yaar😉
Still I'm in dreamland yaar 😉

Its just awesome! I loved the way you wrote & described scene short & sweet! Loved it 😛😊😉

Originally posted by: .Zoya.

Beautiful OS

Originally posted by: monaCReation

Its just awesome! I loved the way you wrote & described scene short & sweet! Loved it 😛😊😉

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

very cute loved it

I am half way through priya! 😉 Wah superbly written..! Keep it up 😃