Abhigya & Rabul OS : Unbreakable Souls

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Posted: 10 years ago
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The OS takes place at the scene during the Roka ceremony when Bulbul and Pragya nearly gets drown but are saved by Abhi and Purab. Taken at hospital both of them get into critical condition specially Pragya.Both Abhi and Purab are devastated looking at the condition of both sisters.


Scene starts when Purab calls Bulbul at the pool side. Tanu informs Alia about the meeting and finds it a great opportunity to get rid of Bulbul .


Sarla : Pragya, where did Bulbul go? I can't see her anywhere

Pragya : Maa, don't worry she will around here, I will go check, you relax

Pragya goes to room and does not find Bulbul which makes her worried and starts to search for her. Bulbul goes near poolside and wait for Purab who is surrounded by his friends

Purab : how should I go, there Bulbul's face will be turning into red, wonder what punishment she will be planning for me

Bulbul : This Purab always makes me wait, let him come I will teach him good lesson

Abhi : Aye fuggy, who are you looking with your big fat eyes

Pragya stares at him angrily

Abhi : Oh rockstar Abhi is scared from chasmish

Pragya : I don't have time to fight with you

Abhi : really, now I am arranging your sister's marriage and you are busy not bad

Pragya leaves ignoring him to find Bulbul.

Bulbul who is waiting near the pool is irritated when Purab does not reach. She hears a sound behind the pillar and thinking its Purab

Bulbul : Look Purab, enough of your hide and seek, now I don't like this type of game, please come out now

Pragya gets worried when she does not find in the venue and walks towards the pool

Bulbul while walking near the pool when suddenly a person wearing a black hood pushes her in the pool. A voice echoes in the pool area which Pragya hears. She realizes Bulbul is in trouble and sees Bulbul is drowning

Pragya : BULBUL (screamed loudly) runs to save her sister in the pool though not knowing to swim.

She sees one tube and take it with her in the pool.

Everybody notices both sister missing and hears the scream.

Purab : Abhi, that was di's voice na

Abhi : You are right, but where did the noise come from

Purab : I think it is from the poolside

All rushes towards the pool

Pragya manages to save Bulbul with the tube but cannot go further as not knowing to swim

Pragya : Bulbul, please wake up

Bulbul does not respond due to unconsciousness. Abhi and Purab rushes to pool and find both sister struggling.

Purab : Bulbul (shouts with pain)

Pragya nearly drowns which in unnoticed by Abhi, but he finds her bracelet and sees her from far.

Abhi getting anxious seeing Pragya struggling with life and death

Purab and Abhi jumps in and manges to take Pragya and Bulbul out. Purab both tries to wake Bulbul but she does not respond. Purab hears sees Bulbul's heartbeat . He gives to give pump to her but still does not respond. While Abhi also tries to blow air in Pragya's mouth but realizes she is not breathing.

Abhi is shocked to see his Fuggy in this state

Sarla : what happened

Dadi : Pragya, my child please open your eyes

Sarla : Bulbul, Pragya what happened to my children

Everybody rushes the duo sister to hospital. All of them are tensed when both of them are taken into ICU except Tanu and Alia

Tanu ; i can't believe this, i think god wants us to both unite with our love

Alia : Target was only one but they both need to suffer after what they did to us

Doctor informs the family about the condition of Bulbul and Pragya

Sarla : My daughters are okay na

Doctor : Both of them are still critical right now, specially Pragya, as she was under water for lot of time and water is flown through her lungs.

Abhi in his mind talks to god by putting hand on his headLast line broke Abhi totally and sat down with showing no emotion. His heart broke into million of pieces and cannot think of anything except his Fuggy, He cursed himself for not saving Pragya at the nick of time and making an innocent girl suffer for a mistake she never did. All he could think was Pragya's cute childishness, her pranks, fights with her, smiley face and her care for his family.

Abhi : why are you doing this to her, what harm she did to anybody, you can punish me whatever you want because I broke the hope her desires and hopes to live a happy married life. You snatched my parents during childhood but I never complained about it, but today you have to save Pragya because she is my life and you cannot take it away from me.

Purab near the temple begs for Bulbul's life

Purab : I never asked you for anything till now because I never felt the need to, please save my Bulbul, I cannot live without her, after many years I found somebody whom I can call my own. But after meeting Bulbul I know nobody can love me unconditionally like her. She is my world, if she is not there how will I live without her. My parents left me but I never complained about it now please don't take my Bulbul away from me, I don't have strength to lose anymore relations in my life

Purvi consoles Sarla and Dadi. Purab remembers Bulbul's beautiful face, her cute pranks, getting angry with him, her care and affection for him.

Sarla : Biji, today my daughter's are playing between life and death and I cannot do anything to save them

Mrs Mehra ; Beta, I know our daughters are not weak they will fight with death and come back to us. Both Purab and Abhi are thinking how both of the sisters came to their life with a cool breeze and became their life with time. The duo sisters loved them unconditionally. Purab found a sister in Pragya which he always craved for in his life. Abhi though has Alia but also saw a younger sister in Bulbul who is exactly like him and gave him the position of elder brother in his life.

Doctor informs Bulbul is out of danger as she did not drown due to the tube which Pragya put on her but Pragya is still under critical condition. All rushed towards Bulbul and sees the movement in her hands. she slowly opens her eyes making everybody relived specially Purab and Sarla.

Purab goes and hugs her when he got his life back. Bulbul found comfort when Sarla also hugs her with sign of relief. Bulbul realizes that her di is missing and asks about her.

Sarla : Dear, you need to rest now, she will come back soon

Bulbul ; No, I want to see her right now

Not wanting to tell bitter truth to Bulbul when Purab is about to tell her, Abhi hears nurse calling doctor as Pragya's condition worsens and runs towards the room. Bulbul gets to know about her sister's condition who saved her by risking her life.

Doctor : If she does not regain consciousness then I fear she might slip into coma

Hearing it, Abhi 's world is fully shattered and goes inside the ICU room.

Abhi : Pragya, wake up you cannot leave us like this

Bulbul : Di, please open your eyes (cries soberly) ma tell di that she cannot do this to us

Sarla gives no reaction and sits on the floor

Abhi : Purab, why don't you tell her to wake up, you consider her your sister na. tell her (grabs his shoulder)

Purab : Pragya di, you cannot go away after saving Bulbul. after many years I got a sister's love and you cannot take that away from me

Abhi : Fuggy, I promise you I will never fight with you and give you all happiness but you cannot take my life and go, (puts his head down near her hand)

Slowly the machine shows Pragya's heartbeat

Abhi : Okay i will never tease you , not call you fuggy

"Really" heard a voice

Abhi looked up with shock when he sees Pragya gives a small smile. Both Bulbul and Abhi hugs her lightly with a sign of relief. Pragya sees her mother who is overjoyed to see her daughter back to her and rushes to give comfort to her.

Pragya starts crying when she hugs her mother.

Sarla : take your pain out how much you want

Later all of them leaves both couples in the room and Abhi sends all elder to home

Purab tries to console Bulbul who is still in fear

Bulbul : Purab, what I was not alive..

Purab does not let her complete and shout at her for saying that sentence

Purab : Don't ever say that again, do you even realize how much scared I was seeing you like this

Bulbul : I promise you I will never leave you again

Purab : you don't even realise what I went through seeing you like this

Bulbul : Purab, do you know I might be the luckiest the girl in this world to have you with me

Abhi gets angry at Pragya when she smiles after torturing him like this. Pragya makes a pout face and tries to pacify him

Pragya : you said you will never tease me

Abhi : you were deliberately torturing me and heard everything I said

Pragya : No, I never meant to do it

Abhi ; do you even realize what I went through seeing your condition

Pragya : Really? I did not know that

Abhi : You are still joking, I will leave you alone (starts to leave)

When a soft hands holds his hand to not let go

Pragya : Don't ever say that again that you will leave me

Abhi : Now you got know what was my condition when you are sleeping like lazy

Pragya : you called me lazy?

Abhi : I did, because you were enjoying your sleep

Both of them fights for a while and hugs each other finding solace in their arms,

Edited by ashpat3 - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww really nice Ash! I liked Abhi's and Purab's different ways of appealing to God. And the ending with AbhiGya's argument is too cute. Thank you!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ash 👏 awsome ..
Loved it 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Both Purab and abhi lost parents, so sad
Gaining of love in both sisters nice
I liked this update
Abhi promises are good,
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for a great read Ash! So dramatic and Abhi's and Purabs feelings were understandable in the conditions. The end was just too cute, Abhi's promise lasted long didn't it! <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ohh so sweet and heart touching story... awesome..👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks guys for your lovely comments
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Unbreakable souls, truly they are 😳😳
I loved how those two confessions were shown by Abhi and Purab regarding what the sisters mean in their lives.
The way you included things that first one comes into conscious, RaBul hug on bed, then everyone trying to wake up Pragya, Abhi getting restless, finally all the calls, prayers strikes and she wakes up!
Loved the cute moments in the end, these type of things are always needed to bring back the smile, though these cvs...they edit the things in worst matter..., nevermind!


Loved the story, wish something as heart touching would have been shown in the show too, awesome foursome in one frame are always a treat to watch 😳

Thanks for this!



PS: And yaa ,Thanks a ton for the reminder, I completely forgot about it, but it was really nice to read 😊
Edited by ritzee967 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautifully written. Loved it. ❤️ awesome...

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