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Syaza

@syazaibrahim

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Woww just woww! Please update soon, you can't leave this hanging :) it was superb and quite an emotional update :) btw, I really liked pragya's attitude or rather nature here! Please continue! :)

Edited by syazaibrahim - 10 years ago

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Anjum.

@Anjum.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

YES TO EVERYTHING! I love love love this! Please could you continue the story?

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Miss.M

@Miss.M

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

I'm going to mention what everyone else has already said...Can we please have more!!!

It was fabulous!! All the things that have gone wrong in his life all together, really making him think!! Want to know what happens!!

Please do change this to a short story!

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@rbb1

Elite

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Really good story inliked Pragyas reaction and how she spoke it's good to see her questioning him about time, hope we get to read more of this story

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Simmi

@--simmi--

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Such an emotional OS! So many feelings expressed, you writing was so sharp and I felt so bad for Pragya! Loved how you ended it with Abhi questioning himself, more please? Curious to know what happens after! <3