Abhi-Pragya fiction: Like Daadaji (Karva Chauth special) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really nice os Tia I hope something like this happens in the show
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rbb1

Really nice os Tia I hope something like this happens in the show

Thanks Ray.. as long as Tannu doesn't butt in, I want this in the show..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh twin twin twin that ending !!!
But my fav was

"Ohohoho, Chashmish is keeping fast" Abhi started with his usual tease as he saw Pragya sitting in the room with a book.

"Don't make fun of traditions." Pragya said sternly.

"Hungry Chashmish, angry Chashmish. By the way, you must be making a deal with your God that you will keep fast and he will make you stick to me forever" Abhi taunted.

"I am not foolish to forget that we are temporary" Pragya looked away.

"Then, why do you need to keep fast? Come let's eat. I am so hungry. Want some chocolate?" Abhi invited as he took out a bar of chocolate from the fridge.

"I am not eating it" stated Pragya.

"Only hot girls eat chocolate" murmured Abhi.

"I love to eat chocolate. Especially the dark variety" answered back Pragya.

Abhi suddenly turned to her to say "What do you want to say? You are hot?"

"I am not talking non-sense with you" Pragya folded her hands and looked away.

"If you do like chocolate, eat it. I won't tell Daadi" Abhi enticed.

"Whatever I do, I do it sincerely. I have told Daadi I will keep fast, and I will" said Pragya firmly.

"Whatever, I am gonna ask Robin to order my favorite butter chicken from my favorite restaurant for lunch. You stay hungry" mocked Abhi.

"People don't eat non-veg at least on festival days. But why am I telling you?" saying so, Pragya walked out of the room.

"I will enjoy my meal," screamed Abhi making sure she hears.



TOTALLY POSSIBLE MAN!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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aww Tia thank you so much for writing this!! enjoyed it very much. loved the abhigya banter - some very good lines! and aww "she had "his bride" written all over her", awesome moment!! love him discovering that particular feeling! ❤️ and uff, "she could not find a trace of the taunting, hating husband in his face," what a powerful and affirmative image. 👍🏼 aieee loved it all very much, sweet and fun with that deeper emotion running below the surface, exactly that particular touch i was hoping you would bring to this concept. thank you again! beautiful story 😊 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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'Hungry Chashmiash...Angry Chashmish'...Cracker of a dialogue 🤣 Loved it. And sending Aaliyah & Tanu off to Australia...😆 I like this angle.

And good you made the man fast too...😆 Why women suffer all alone while they spend the day having delicacies.

Another interesting read...😃. I enjoyed reading it. 👏

Now i wish we have a KC sequence on the show...😳


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -mina-

aww Tia thank you so much for writing this!! enjoyed it very much. loved the abhigya banter - some very good lines! and aww "she had "his bride" written all over her", awesome moment!! love him discovering that particular feeling! ❤️ and uff, "she could not find a trace of the taunting, hating husband in his face," what a powerful and affirmative image. 👍🏼 aieee loved it all very much, sweet and fun with that deeper emotion running below the surface, exactly that particular touch i was hoping you would bring to this concept. thank you again! beautiful story 😊 👏


Thank you so much, Mina. This fic wrote itself literally. Guess the convos we had on the AT helped.
Thanks for noticing those two lines. I guess that was my point that they gotta see the real deal of each other at some point.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SaaraDON

'Hungry Chashmiash...Angry Chashmish'...Cracker of a dialogue 🤣 Loved it. And sending Aaliyah & Tanu off to Australia...😆 I like this angle.

And good you made the man fast too...😆 Why women suffer all alone while they spend the day having delicacies.

Another interesting read...😃. I enjoyed reading it. 👏

Now i wish we have a KC sequence on the show...😳



Hey Saara, I wish I could send Taaliyah forever. How about they both find hot Australian men and decide not to come back.😆
Yeah, Karva Chauth is cute that a spouse fasts and prays.. but how can the other spouse eat, right? That's why I even made Daadaji fast as well.
Thank you.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is such a cute OS!!!! Literallly sooo cuuute.. made me smile.. very, very sweet!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you Tiah!!! So beautiful ... tenderness so fitting the occasion!!!! Loved it!! Abhi, the great pretender 😉 !!!


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -JollyJabeen-

This is such a cute OS!!!! Literallly sooo cuuute.. made me smile.. very, very sweet!!!!


Heheee.. so many thanks.😃

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