Abhigya Fiction -The Turning Point -Completed-epilogue pg28- 12/10 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: smala

Loved the preview.

Very interesting.




aww thank you!!😃
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Originally posted by: AnjumP

I just read all the parts. You are an amazing writer! I looove the story!!

Oh thank you so much!! So sweet of you...😳
Keep reading and let me know what you think...😊
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Thanks can't wait to read the chapter

Thanks!!okay now here you go with the 3rd chapter!!!😆
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Hi guys!!😃 How is it going?

A quick shout out to all those who commented! Your wonderful comments make my day!🤗And I have replied to each of you in the above posts!
And then thank you for all the likes! Means a lot!😳
Okay then... Here comes Chapter 03!
Happy Reading!
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The Turning Point
Chapter 03

"Wake up! Abhi! Come on... Get up!"

"Err... Nahi Chashmish... Sone do na Chashmish!"

Smack!

Did Chashmish just smack me! Abhi wondered as his sleepy eyes tried to adjust into the sudden light. Uski toh...

"You called me Chashmish! ME! Are you out of your mind! From which angle I look like that Behenji! You tell me, seriously! Ha! Tell me!" Tannu stood up and crossed her arms and waited for his reply.

Abhi groaned internally. God! Early morning! What did I do! Now have to butter her up otherwise she will keep eating my head for the whole day...

"Oh I am so sorry Baby! I was just sleeping and I had no idea that you would be coming in... So I just thought... I just thought it is that Chashmish... Irritating me early in the morning! Otherwise look at you and look at her! Do you really think I would mistake you for her! No way! Sorry Baby..."

Please! Let's get it done with already Tannu! Don't irritate me anymore. And where the hell is this Chashmish! Don't know where she went this early in the morning... And she didn't even bring me my coffee... How careless! Uski toh me aaj deklunga...

"Achcha... Okay... I will forgive you! But this is the last time okay! And don't be so happy that I let you off so easily okay? It is just that today I am so happy that I don't want anything to spoil my mood!"

Oh. Thank God. Abhi sent his thanks to the heavens as he got off from the bed.

"Okay Abhi... Now get ready as fast as you can! We have to leave here ASAP before Daadi wakes up... Come on... Jaldi karo na..."

"But where? Where are we going?"

"Well... It is a surprise! Waise you should be the one to give me a surprise... You owe me!"

"I owe you! Nah Tannu... Don't you know! I am Rockstar Abhi Baby! And I.Don't.owe.any.body!" smirked Abhi.


"Haan I know... I know... You are 'The Rockstar Abhi'! But still after yesterday you definitely owe me everything... I mean you should at least be grateful that finally it was me who managed to solve your biggest problem... See for starters, if not for me today also that Chashmish would have woken you up... And then? Then... you would have to start your day after seeing that Behenji's face... Huh see? That got your smirk off your face na! So show some respect... Okay?"

God! What the hell is going on! Chashmish! She must be downstairs right? Any minute now, she will walk through that door, bringing him his coffee! yesterday also she... No! No! NO! She didn't leave! It was a dream right! It must be... Because he knows how hard it is to get rid of this Chashmish... But Abhi she really left! You saw it with your own eyes! And Daadi... Daadi didn't stop her! Oh why Daadi! Why? And Tannu! What the hell was she blabbering? What did she just say! She said she solved my problem! So does that mean? Nah... She wouldn't! How could she! How dare she! Abhi felt hot fury burning through his senses, as he grabbed Tannu from her upper arms.

"What.did.you.do?"

"Abhi! Let go off me! What is wrong with you?"

"I asked what did you do! Tell me! WHAT THE HELL DID YOU DO?"

Tannu pushed him away with all the force she could muster.

" Abhi! What the hell is wrong with you! Here I am telling that I got rid of that Behenji for your sake and you get angry on me for that? For that Behenji?"

"Tannu shut up! Just shut up and tell me! What did you do?"

"I sent an anonymous letter to her home... Okay? Happy!"

"What! What did you say? Why would you do that?"

"I told her folks how their laadli beti is a goal digger who lives in a sham marriage just so she can have all the luxuries in the world... And then I further exposed how she made her sister run away with her own sister-in-law's beau on the day of their wedding..."

"Tannu how could you?"

"Why Abhi! What is wrong? You are the one who kept on telling everyday that you are going to reveal her truth to everyone! Especially her family! And then now you are asking me how could I do it? And please don't say you are feeling sorry for her family rubbish to me okay! One day or the other they would have got to know anyway! However what I don't get is why did her mother slap you? She should have slapped that Behenji! Huh strange! Looks like the whole family has totally lost it... But it doesn't matter anymore! Finally Behenji ki chapter closed! Aur hamara pirse shuru!"

Tannu looked around to see Abhi sitting down on the sofa looking lost in his own thoughts.

"Arrey Abhi! Don't waste time. We will discuss this later... Come on get up... Get ready... Going out remember? And Aaliyah must be ready by now... We will have to take her along Abhi... Otherwise Daadi will doubt again"

"I am not going anywhere!"

"What! Why!"

"I don't want to go! Just leave me alone"

"Abhi! Don't be a child! And stop sulking! Go get ready!"

"I told you! I am not going! Bus!"

"Abhi look at me! Tell me what is wrong!"

"Tell you what is wrong! Don't you see what is wrong! Everything is wrong!" Whatever it is, Abhi flaring up and grabbing her by her upper arms was least what Tannu expected and she stared at him while words failed her.

Aaliyah entered through the ajar door to find her Bhai and best friend engaged in a heated argument.

" Bhai! What is going on?"

"What is going on? You are asking me what is going on? Ask from her! You have no idea what she has done Aaliyah!"

"Bhai! Relax! I know what she has done Bhai..."

"You? You knew?"

"Tannu told me yesterday when I called her to give her the good news! And I am sorry I didn't tell you anything... She told me that she would surprise you and that she would break the news to you... That's why Bhai... I am sorry!"

"Ha! Surprise! Well, you REALLY did surprise me Tannu!" Mocked Abhi.

Aaliyah knew Abhi's anger well and decided to intervene soon. But why is he this angry? Surely, not because that Behenji left. Then? Oh, Daadi!

"Bhai!" Aaliyah went and took his hands in hers. "Bhai! Listen to me! Calm down! Please relax! I am so sorry! I know why you are reacting like this... You got all worked up thinking what would happen if Daadi got to know anything right? But Bhai... Nothing happened! The plan worked so well! Behenji out. Daadi all sad for you. On your side! All is well Bhai! You see? And don't worry Daadi will never get to know anything about your love Bhai... Tannu hasn't mention anything about you two in the letter! So no worries... Okay? Now go and get ready! We have to leave fast before Daadi wakes up... Otherwise you will have to continue your Bechara act today as well...okay? Now go!"

Abhi, Aaliyah is right! Although you hate Tannu's plan, it has got them what they wanted. Right? Chashmish out! And Daadi also okay... So then why I feel so restless? Why do I have this feeling to smash everything in this bloody room! Get a grip Abhi! Stop overreacting! Now take a deep breath and go get ready... Maybe going out with Aaliyah and Tannu would help him to calm down...

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"Di!"

Pragya heard Purvi calling out to her softly.

But she decided against responding to her and pretended to sleep. She has been waiting whole night for sleep to come to her so that she could close all her overworking senses to peace at last. And she thought who knows maybe... Just maybe when she falls asleep and wakes up the next day all this would be a dream... But fate failed her again... Hours went by but sleep didn't come... But then fate never was her friend...

She knew everyone is up and around, and they must be waiting for her... But what to do once she goes out from this room? Her safe haven... Hmm... She has missed her small cozy room so much... Of course Abhishek's room was so comfortable! But it lacked this familiar warmth... He must have slept well last night! No Chashmish to bother him... No border... On his favorite pillow... Huh! He and his obsession with his pillow! Seriously! People should come and see their Rockstar pouting like a 5 year old for his pillow! But you can't deny he looks so cute when he pouted like that! Just like a child... God, his antics I could go on for days... I just hope Daadi got him his coffee on time... Otherwise he will keep on sulking whole day... His clothes? Breakfast?

"Di!" Bulbul's voice brought Pragya out of her reverie. Was I just going over Abhishek's routine! You have got to stop thinking about him Pragya. It all ended yesterday... Remember? Huh... As if she would ever be able to forget that day...

"Di! I have known you forever! And I can tell when you are fake sleeping!" Pragya remained motionless.

"Oh come on Di! Get up! Please open your eyes!" Sighing Pragya opened her eyes to find Bulbul inches away from her face.

"Ha! Very good! Now will you tell me why you are doing this? Or shall I go call Ma?"

"Nahi... Nahi... I will come out..."

"Di... I am not here to force you! I just came to see whether you are okay? You come out whenever you want... You don't have to feel so pressurized! We are your family Di... You know how much we all love you..."

"Haan bulbul... I know... It's just that..."

"I know how you feel Di...you don't know what to do right? You know you have to go out of this room at some point but still your body refuse to budge... Arrey! You don't have to be so surprised! It was exactly how I felt when that whole Purab wala fiasco happened... Okay! And I just forbid you to look so guilty because it was not your fault! It is not your fault Di... Okay now get up... Today we will go out... Just you and me... Just like old times... We can just roam around the city full day and come home in the evening okay? And I already got Ma's permission! Okay so go get ready..."

Her bulbul was so right! She knew exactly how she felt... Well, fate might not be so bad after all... After all fate has given her the best sister in the world... And she can clearly see how Bulbul has matured in her absence... Circumstances have not left her any other choice, really... And to think she went through this overwhelming feeling all on her own... She will talk to her today... Today they will go out and talk and share everything! Just like old times! Haan... Going out would be good for her to relieve her mind...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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sweet chapter...I like it 👍🏼 , very nice 👏...pls update soon
Edited by sara7iris - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very interested to know what is Abhi thinking. Will he be happy that Pragya left his house & his life. Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Send me PM for ur next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update so I'm guessing they might meet again when they are both out can't wait to read the next chapter it will be great
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it very much, Diahh.
Both of them missing are each other.
Tannu is like a monkey on somebody's back.
Pragya
"Missing someone isn't about how long it has been since you've seen them or the amount of time since you've talked. It's about that very moment when you find yourself doing something and wishing they were right there by your side."
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Abhi
"People say you don't know what you've got until it's gone. Truth is, you knew what you had, and you just never thought you'd lose it."
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Abhigya
"Missing someone is a part of loving them, if you are never apart, you'll never know how strong you love is for them"
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Wonder how they will meet.Please do update.
Grizzly bear hug for you.
Edited by smala - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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VERY INTERESTING! LOVED THE TABHI IRRITABILITY !
THANKS !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Just loved all the three chappys dear... ❤️
Keep writing..

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