Abhigya OS: Jealousy - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks so much dear so glad you liked it😊
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thanks so much!
so glad you liked it😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks so much! so glad you liked it😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: indi

Loved that jealous Abhi!!!! Hope we get to see such scenes!!!



thanks so much!😊
so glad you liked it😳

and yes def wanna see jealous abhi in the show tired of abhi being all 'i want revenge' types 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks so so so much😳
very glad you liked it😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ratitheangel

@shakti_arsha u wrote it sooo well love it


thanks so much!
so glad you liked it😊😳

btw i love all the siggies you make on abhigya 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: smala

❤️ ed it.So liking the the jealous side of Abhi you were spot on how his reaction would be 👍🏼 , would love to read the possessive side of him which will be hilarious to read and watch 🤣


aww thanks so much!😊
so glad you liked it😳

😆 i feel like it'd be hilarious to watch abhi getting jealous of any guy (doesn't have to be suresh) and prags
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks so much dear😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -mina-

Oooh just loved it! Sigh, just reading it over and over

Cute detail at the beginning, that Pragya is slowly becoming inextricable from Abhi's life - great suggestion of the classic 'where is my watch where is my chai' Hindi serial husband/wife dynamic. 👍🏼

Sooo funny that when he sees her with Suresh Abhi automatically thinks his chasmish instead of the chashmish or that chasmish, he's fallen and he doesn't even know it 😃. And then all his thoughts that she looks better with him, kitni ajeeb jodi etc!! 😆 And on top of that his acting for Suresh, so petulant and instinctive and fits very well with how I think of Abhi. "Hey sweet heart" and "I'm here to fulfill all her demands" indeed!! 🤣

Pragya cutting him off about the jacket taunt, just perfect! She's not even bothered and he's just that predictable 😆

The vada pav moment was very cute and also reflects the AbhiGya dynamic. Not nice Abhi, you should buy her a new one...and probably split that one too 😛

LOL at Suresh turning up to offer his clothes, what even Just when we thought we were done with him too. Even Abhi would prefer Mamaji's clothes to sharing with Suresh I guess!

Interesting to have all the Aroras continue to be so vocally anti-Suresh. You think he'd get a clue that he's not welcome without them having to say it! But loved the way it set up the last line, perfect little moment, beyond AbhiGya and just Abhi starting to belong in his new life: "he felt content and grateful that his family liked him more than they liked Suresh." Awww ❤️

Great story, really loved it! 👏 Write more jealous Abhi pleeease???? 😳


thanks so much mina!😳
i'm very very very glad you liked it esp the small details of how prags was infiltrating herself into abhi's life
thanks so much for your detailed feedback😳
so so so glad you liked it😳😊
and will def write more jealous abhi OS's😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolgirl3

Loved reading about jealous abhi

Plz update soon


thanks so much😳
so glad you liked it😊

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