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Tasha1994

@Tasha1994

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Such a cute romantic os amreen. Liked ashutosh's way of romancing nidhi.you have written down that part so well .The stool wala scene is so awesome. I really wanted to see this scene in the serial. But u narrated it so well that I could see it happening .Really loved the first really rasoi and the way ashutosh told nidhi she cooks very well .Liked armaan teasing nidhi and ashu .armaan is a really good friend for ashu and a big brother for nidhi

Thanks for the new os

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Tasha1994

@Tasha1994

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Sorry for the delay in reply amreen

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JK79673

@Isha0527

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Lovely os ... Do continue it soon

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ssss97

@ssss97

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Lovely amreen. Loving their romance. Waise waiting to know why anjie n Ashu were smiling??PLease do update soon

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Awesome n very romantic... ⭐️👏

Ashni have just got married.. loved when every one are blessing them.. Very natural family scenes... !

Thanks Amreen for this stupendous start.. ! Anji n Ashu are up to sumthing that can be a surprise for Nidhi,,, this is what makes the next part more interesting.,, will wait for it.. !

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Swati Kapoor

@Swatishubh

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Very beautiful Amreen 👏 Loved this one too dear 🤗

The flawless shot is so immensely graced with love and passion of AshNi. Very cute and lovely scenes from the first day of their marriage! Baba, Armaan happily wishing for their happiness is so wonderfully expressed!

Anji looks good with Ashu planning for something that is waiting for Nidhi as a good time coming! This is gripping for the next chapter, will wait for that sweetie! Thanks for this captivating and stimulating new story. The memories of marriage functions gives a fascinating visual of a lovely marriage taken place.😉

Luv ya ❤️🤗

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Babita

@babita..

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Zara zara behekta hai, mehekta hai aaj toh mera ye mann !

The way U have presented the first chapter, my heart went to the Ashni world and me in the aura of the love they possess 😳

Beautiful start Amreen 👏👏 The sizzling first scene is so loving, that i felt butterflies in myself too. 😛😉 First day of their marriage and no one else at home and suddenly they all came. The scene went so well that with Ashni around ! I loved it sooo much ⭐️

The later scenes are majestically stunning. The family first rasoi with Ashu there, not easy for Nidhi but the shot is so perfect that the flavor is zestful ! ❤️

Armaan's aankhon hi aankhom mein ishara song is so apt na 😉 The way Nidhi blushed and the way U have made the newly wed couple passionately waiting for being together is quite a dream coming true to all of us ! 🤗 This romantic OS is gonna take a lovely platform to make us landing in the Ashni land for years. Thanks a lot for this new cooked dish, very positive approach to watch the couple fully in love and having romance, thoda sa chupke chupke 😉

Waiting, waiting, waiting for the next chapter ! Loves 🤗

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.khaleesi.

@.khaleesi.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Sonu12345
wow so romantic .just loved the ashni bedroom scene .the stool se girna scene was so cute I could literally imagine it .amreen u have such good writing skills
really loved the shy nidhi and bold ashutosh
thanks a lot for this new story

Thanks dear...
sorry for being late...
Love u for loving my writing skills...

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.khaleesi.

@.khaleesi.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Tasha1994
Such a cute romantic os amreen. Liked ashutosh's way of romancing nidhi.you have written down that part so well .The stool wala scene is so awesome. I really wanted to see this scene in the serial. But u narrated it so well that I could see it happening .Really loved the first really rasoi and the way ashutosh told nidhi she cooks very well .Liked armaan teasing nidhi and ashu .armaan is a really good friend for ashu and a big brother for nidhi
Thanks for the new os

Thanks a lot my dear...
Well am so happy that my narration was good enough to make u imagine the scene...
I changed the Rasoi scene from the show... and thanks a lot for loving it...
Ur welcome...
Sorry for being so late... was stuck in something important