FF - Piya ka Ghar - Pt 6 Pg 33 - Page 5

Originally posted by: sshirley

Ummmaaa😃😃🥳

Yes YES YES one of my fave writers is back...m I glad or m I mighty pleased

So happy to see you back Uma.. glad to know your project was completed successfully.,

A BIG BIG thank you for coming back with a new story.. looking forward to another masterpiece from your pen.

A story set in the 70s - cool! I can so relate to that eras thinking coz I m so backward for todas age 😛

Coming to ur chapter 1, I absolutely love the way u write.

It is such a beautiful and realistic portrayal of the (mental n psychological) class divide, esp. the way middle class family regarded high class families with a kind of spite n dint want to mix with them n considered their kids 'a bad influence' on their own children... everything is so relatable. I still remember i was in highschool in mid nineties, and there was this supposedly 'high class' gal in my class. After school, mothers who came up their kids wud whisper to each other, "Look there she goes.. you know she attends those kinda parties.. she wears those shoulder-less gowns and all..", "I know, my daughter wants to be friends with her but i told herr sternly to stay away from her.." etc.. etc.. Me n my mom laugh so much at such overheard barbs.."

sorry to bore you with my school memories but i mean what u have written is so realistic n relatable.

Haaye Uma, why did u make mallika ashu's sis in this?? why this kolavari Umaji? i love mallika as the other woman. but i guess a lot of readers wud be happy with this. But loved her snobbish characterization.

I loved rohan being nidhis bro though. he is too cute to be the 'other man' so to say.

so Ashu n his parents are a typical broadminded family.. loving all their characterizations so far..n they said yes already! cool.!!

really really looking fwd to this story..

will u give frequent updates like last time?

Originally posted by: shobha21

Hello Uma...How are you?? 😃

I'm so happy to see you back here.

Glad to know that your project went well.

Thank you so much for coming back with a new story.

I liked your thought of setting the story in the 70's.

Very good start...loved the update very much.

You have written Nidhi's self thoughts so very well and very realistic.👏

I liked that you made Ashu, Mallika and Nidhi, Rohan are siblings.

Thank you Uma

Waiting for the next...please update soon.

Originally posted by: sss97

Nice to see u back with a dhamaka.
Wonderful update. Was completely in love with your first ff and this one too has wooed me. Waiting for the next. Please update the next one soon as its going very well. Want to see Nidhi's reaction...

Originally posted by: babita68

Welcome back Uma 🤗

Thanks for this fab start dearie. 👏👏 Piya ka ghar it is, That means the marriage will be there, and then the life afterwards, right ??😊

Loved the 70's ambience. Beautifully expressed the inner thoughts of a girl, who is subjected to few and very few liberties. The friend, Anji is as her Idol to look modern and like Neetu singh, this looks so natural and vivid.

Loved the way she did the make up and then started thinking and comparing of her life with all others. The meeting or rather a look at Ashu was mesmerizing. Well written and viewed. ⭐️⭐️

Hmm, so he is more handsome than Rishi. 😉 God.

Liked the way Ashu said why to waste time when all is up to the mark, for him 😳 Loved him saying that.❤️ And more lovable and adorable is how he asked about Nidhi's views, Much much appreciated.👏👏

Nidhi and Rohan siblings. And ----- Mallika and Ashu too 😛 Some are gonna kill U deffo. 😆

But liked the truth behind this first chapter -- How the parents of a daughter and even the girl are so desperate, to make sure that the boy's party approve them. Let's start with a girl's approval first. A challenge to the society !!! 😳

I missed U Uma, how is life with U ?? 🤗

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

wow Uma ji a new FF .will read it tonight and comment .sorry for late was out of station today

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

A journey of a girl from engagement to marriage. Wow!!! Simply enthusiastic indeed!!!😃

Beautiful start and I loved the Title Uma, Kudos 👏

Good start with a 70's background and loved to read Nidhi's mind over middle and high class difference. The classified discussion in her mind states how she misses the other life. But might be she wud later see the real difference in the light of reality. The respectful families are related to the sober and urban life. But things are unlike 😳

Nice description of make up with a new look. Her thoughts are divided and she herself is not sure what is right and not for her. Emotional aspect when her mother realizes how this girl is desiring and getting. She has to instill middle class values into her.

Wonderful lifestyle subjected to the dekhna dikhna of the girl, and of boy too?

Loving Ashu for asking Nidhi's opinion from her father. Unique, but admired. ⭐️

Both the parties have agreed. Or is it only Ashu who has? 😳

Good story in making!!! Thanks dear, for this impeccable FF. ❤️🤗

Originally posted by: Veenaper

Welcome Back Uma Dear. One of my top favorite writers is back with a bang ! Your first foray TMS will always remain close to my heart. That was such a fabulous journey from complete darkness to bright sunshine.

Loving this novel concept of Ashni story set in the seventies. The class divide so evident in those times, have experienced this in my growing up years. Parents of middle class families wary of their progeny mixing up with the rich and well to do. The social strata does not hinder the friendship between Nidhi and Anji though Nidhi's parents are apprehensive about their bonding. So on your readers' demand Mallika has been rechristened as Vidya. Yes a haughty sister in law can create havoc in the life of a young bride.

You have given a very realistic and beautiful portrayal of the first meeting of Ashni and their respective families. The bride's parents naturally considering it an honor that their daughter is getting an alliance from such an affluent and respectable family. The bride and groom unabashedly devouring each other at first sight, and her parents' reaction to this was brilliant. The sister inspecting everything around her with a condescending attitude. The parents accepting the bride wholeheartedly with their warm words.

But the best part of your opening update was Ashu's classy and elegant behavior, his admiring looks at Nidhi sort of sealing a pact between them and his last line took the cake. Now waiting eagerly to read this sweet delectable story in your inimitable style as two strangers move ahead from first glimpse to betrothal to wedded bliss.

Originally posted by: sharadrocks

Tupu, Babita, Tasha ji, Bawa Bro and all others who liked the sister being called Mallika,

I know you will read this story even if the nanad is called Soorpanaka 😆

I had to change the name from Mallika to Vidya in the hope that a few others who would not read the story otherwise might just decide to give it a chance now

Tupu, you were spot on in your analysis. A sister-in-law can certainly be more damaging because she has the ability to influence the mother-in-law too. In the show, Mallika spoke of barah saal ki dosti. Here the relationship started at birth and so, it is that much more qatilana 😆