FF- Tere Mere Sapne - Story thread complete pg 3 onwards - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Uma dear,

I'm sorry for coming here so late. Congratulations and thank you for writing such a beautiful story. Superb narrative, lucent characters and euphonious to read- a treat par excellence! Stirred up our every emotion, absorbed us into its fondness and awakened in us a reverence for the natural world. Yes, that was it a natural world, beautiful and enchanting that kindles back hope in Life' or should I say in words of Richard wright a hunger for life that gnaws us in all'

I'm quoting his words to express myself better:

"I would hurl words into this darkness and wait for an echo, and if an echo sounded, no matter how faintly, I would send other words to tell, to march, to fight, to create a sense of hunger for life that gnaws in us all."

What can I say and how can I review a beautiful piece written by a student of literature 😳 . I am only trying to send an echo of that glee your words whispered in our ears and I hope this echo succeeds in swaying you to keep this joy resonating again and again.


Love you 🤗



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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
☺️ Thank you Uma...
Only Anjani...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: pansy123

Hi Uma dear,

I'm sorry for coming here so late. Congratulations and thank you for writing such a beautiful story. Superb narrative, lucent characters and euphonious to read- a treat par excellence! Stirred up our every emotion, absorbed us into its fondness and awakened in us a reverence for the natural world. Yes, that was it a natural world, beautiful and enchanting that kindles back hope in Life' or should I say in words of Richard wright a hunger for life that gnaws us in all'

I'm quoting his words to express myself better:

"I would hurl words into this darkness and wait for an echo, and if an echo sounded, no matter how faintly, I would send other words to tell, to march, to fight, to create a sense of hunger for life that gnaws in us all."

What can I say and how can I review a beautiful piece written by a student of literature 😳 . I am only trying to send an echo of that glee your words whispered in our ears and I hope this echo succeeds in swaying you to keep this joy resonating again and again.


Love you 🤗




Hi Pansyji,


I an well and truly overwhelmed 😃

Thank you so much for thus absolutely beautifully worded testimonial and for the Richard Wright quote. Yes, amidst all the gloom and despair, a solitary ray of sunlight offers us the hope of impending brightness and cheer. It rekindles our hopes and and our sense of hunger for life. So true indeed! Hope springs eternal and life seems worth living and fighting for all over again.

God bless, Pansyji 😃.

Love you loads 🤗


Edited by sharadrocks - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
Friends, this song that lent the title to this FF had to be featured here. Each and every line of the song is so apt for Ashutosh and Nidhi. Thank you Shobha ji for quoting the Lines in the earlier thread. I do it once again here.


Tere mere sapne abb ek rang hain
Jaha bhee le jaye rahe ham sang hain

Mere tere dil kaa tay tha ek din milana
Jaise bahar aane par tay hain phul kaa khilana
O mere jivan sathee...

Tere dukh abb mere, mere sukh abb tere
Tere yeh do naina, chand aur suraj mere
O mere jivan sathee...

Lakh mana le duniya, sath naa yeh chhutega
Aake mere hatho me, hath naa yeh chhutega
O mere jivan sathee...

Edited by sharadrocks - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Uma, Lovely FF and it added lot of activity to the Forum when it needed most...Thank you from all regular members who are worried about low activity...👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Totally agree with Anjani .. Many have written great stories here...
What makes Uma's special is that it came at time when the forum was really going thru a very lean patch ... It was like offering water to a man in the desert who had miles to quench his thirst
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Suvika.

on the new thread Uma...

Read the epilogue just now. Fell on the floor laughing. 4 kids!! My God!! My house becomes a mad house with 2 boys. And this AshNi has 2 boys and 2 girls!!

Expected Ashi to counter Ashu and ask why can't we be with you when you are doing the project. We never know what pops out of kids these days!!

All in all, had a huge huge smile on my face by the end of it.

And you asked a question... Didn't wait for my answer... The continuation of the chapter was the first thing I noticed. Not in chapter 5 though. But in 14 most definitely.

Once again, it was great interacting with you and hope to get a chance to do so again. Take care and good luck.

Keep in touch.

Love,

Suvika.

ps: A big big thank you for bringing in Anupama.

Very well said Suvi di 👏👏 Loved your review. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Congrats for finishing this beautiful FF in this stupendous way Uma, Loved it 👏👏
U asked two questions --- I wish i was also there at that time, I have been in the aura of your FF and have every scene and chapter by heart. But i missed it.🥱 It's Okay. Never got any credit in my life ever.
Loved U dedicating the epilogue to Deepali, Anjani, Vidisha. ⭐️⭐️
How i wish i was here too. 😳 Good luck for other projects my dearie 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I had a glance that Armaan will get a wife in your FF surely. Loved Anupama entering his life and giving the full happiness to the household. 😃
Nidhi on her part, managed to make Mrs. Trehan a nani at the end of the day. She has been a lady of ice and salt --- Now she has begin becoming a mother, MIL, Grandma and every other name a motherly figure has.⭐️⭐️
The two awesome cute kids in AshNi's life --- Amit and Aarav ! Wow!!! The family is complete and the picture is so perfect.👍🏼 Beautiful and very exquisite part of this FF. Uma U took my hear away dear, love you loads. ❤️
Ashi and Ri have managed to know what their kid brothers are all about. This is so cute.
Thanks a lot Dearie for this special treatment U have given to us. Being with U everyday meant a lovely feeling and a bond increasing. I am one among the people who have seen every chapter Live here. 😳😃

Thanks Uma for your fab efforts and dedication, Will miss you. Please do come whenever U get time.

🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjani9

☺️ Thank you Uma...

Only Anjani...



No No we should call her Anjaniji only... respect her age 😉😆

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