Hi Uma dear,
I'm sorry for coming here so late. Congratulations and thank you for writing such a beautiful story. Superb narrative, lucent characters and euphonious to read- a treat par excellence! Stirred up our every emotion, absorbed us into its fondness and awakened in us a reverence for the natural world. Yes, that was it a natural world, beautiful and enchanting that kindles back hope in Life' or should I say in words of Richard wright a hunger for life that gnaws us in all'
I'm quoting his words to express myself better:
"I would hurl words into this darkness and wait for an echo, and if an echo sounded, no matter how faintly, I would send other words to tell, to march, to fight, to create a sense of hunger for life that gnaws in us all."
What can I say and how can I review a beautiful piece written by a student of literature 😳 . I am only trying to send an echo of that glee your words whispered in our ears and I hope this echo succeeds in swaying you to keep this joy resonating again and again.