The Perfect Plot: A Finite Series - Episode 3 on Page 42

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Vidisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#281

I know that you won't write something as banal as pichle janam ka pyaar...but it was difficult to imagine Nidz asking Ashu for forgiveness...esp when he will be responsible for instilling bitterness in Nihan relationship

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sshirley

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Posted: 10 years ago

#282

Originally posted by: Vidishaa
I know that you won't write something as banal as pichle janam ka pyaar...but it was difficult to imagine Nidz asking Ashu for forgiveness...esp when he will be responsible for instilling bitterness in Nihan relationship

hmmm... I c

I just wrote that asking forgiveness as a joke... was just teasing u,... aisa koi scene nahi hai

Tasha, thanks for review - I will reply soon... by tonight

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Vidisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: sshirley

hmmm... I c

I just wrote that asking forgiveness as a joke... was just teasing u,... aisa koi scene nahi hai

Tasha, thanks for review - I will reply soon... by tonight

Or maybe Ashu/Rohan/ some other guy may make Nidz beg for mercy
(in the sack ie)😆

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Ana

@..oneOone..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#284

hey shirley,
Very very well written 2nd epi
Nidhi's character is defined beautifuy...she is so not a tantrum quee...though she is famous but still attached to earth...
on the other hand, ashu on purpose made her wait...
but then they met as usual colleagues and passed smiles...
and then ashu caught her mobile and rejected rohan's call...
seems like he will create many more hurdles for them... :(
Ashu is now scaring idhi and now me too...I so don't like such possessive ppl...
looking forward to know what storm is coming up in her life...

tc...
hugs

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sshirley

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Posted: 10 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

bass ho gaya Shirleyji..Ashu se mohbhang😃... my tinted eyeglasses are off...I am judging characters more fairly now

All I can is poor Ashu!

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sshirley

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Posted: 10 years ago

#286

Originally posted by: Tasha1994
wonderful update shriley
liked it a lot.
ashu loves nidhi.
But nidhi loves rohan .
i liked all the the adds .
waiting for the update

thank u Tasha

I am glad u liked the update