FF-Benaam khwaayishein-FINAL CHAPTER-PAGE#78 - Page 8

Originally posted by: swati62

It's a super storyline. Waiting for Monday.

Originally posted by: bawaswift

First of all A BIG Thank you for giving such a wonderful Review...😃

What a starting and the introduction seemed very alluring ! ⭐️⭐️ 👏👏

Isnt it ? 😉

Sai... its a fabulous story with such emotional flow... ! Liked the storyline... with Ashu dreaming abt the fights... reliving the fact that he is away from Nidhi... with his past always haunting him... n he is repenting why he let her go..

Thank you...😃

I dont know how many times , I edited this chapter , I dont know how any days i spent on this chapter ...But I am glad to know all hardwrok paid off and the chapter came out well 😳😃

On the other hand.. Nidhi has a shattered marriage with her son with her n she is all set to learn why he opt marriage with Rohan n why she left Ashu...

A very kind and beautiful narration... ! 👏👏

😃

He is alone... She is with her Arush... He is battling his life with all sweet memories of Nidhi around... And she is mingling her life with she did n what she shud not have...Rohan betrayed her... n she never opted to go back to Ashu...

So nicely you summmarised the whole chapter, 👏👏👏

Very pure but emotional trauma they are living in with ! Ashu cud have Nidhi with her... And while talking to Armaan he clearly stated for his daughter to be tamed with love. Had he done that for Nidhi, Ashu wud be living with her right now.. ! Good you introduced Armaan... Ashu can have sumone to talk to now !

@ Blue:-Do I have to answer this ? 😆😆

you will read more about this Ashu and Nidhi as you go on ...😉😆

So they met ! With lies on their lips and eyes telling so much... Yet they are with their statements.. !

@ Red:- Super liked you line...you have way to put your words to desctibe a scene ...👏👏

Nidhi regrets it... n says it all to him ! But he upon knowing the fact that Rohan is there... He is with a vision of regression... But only said... " Its over ! "

But has it ? Not its not... he has a doubt that Nidhi is not happy in her life... Will this one sentence matter... ??... Will be waiting to know Sai...

You know the answer for this ...this is not the end but it just begun.

Yet there is lot to say , lot to heal and lot of water under the bridge now ...let the water flow and when time comes ...let all peices fall into places 😃

You have a mind blowing start given to the FF... The miles are not to be counted upon the fingers... You have many unlimited miles to go n reach the Highs ! 👏

Keep going !!! 😃

Thank youuu so much...😃

You rock ...👏👏👏

Originally posted by: Diksha_1991

Wonderful !! 👏 👏

Awesome Start to the FF..Liked it 👍🏼

Waiting eagerly for the next update

Originally posted by: Diksha_1991

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Why are you making us cry??? 😭

Originally posted by: aardhan

Hello Sai!

Congratulations on your new FF 👏

I apologize for not being able to read your updates right away. I am really swamped for time right now but hope it will ease by the end of the month. I will pick up your story after that! Please accept my apologies. Thanks 😃

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Hello Sai 😃 Thanks for the Pm dear.. ! Sorry for replying you here... Plzz do take enough time to post the reply... I can understand the probs faced by spamming notices.. 😡😛

Take your time n take care sis ! 😃😃