FF- Destiny's Play Chap 4 Pg 127 June 16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Fine then stay but be

Me and ...you must be kidding 🤣

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: deepali.rock
and do we have dr. vampire also 😡

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: ruchshah
Hi Sujatha di!!!
Hi Ruchira..how are you??

Looks like a hit a jackpot...a Nishi-Ashu story...n that too by my fav. writer...👏

Who is Nishi?? 😕

Totally hooked n looking fwd. to this one!!!

Great 😃
Thanks a ton...for writing a new story...for parched souls like us😳

No thanks required. I'm a parched soul too. For all your reviews. 😃

Also...interesting concept...Ashu n Nidhi going separate ways n Nidhi not sacrificing her career...

Tell me something...why should she sacrifice her career? because she is heart broken? I think women should be stronger than that. And thats how i want this Nidhi to be. 👍🏼

Please update soon...can't wait!

Lets see. Will let you know. Thanks again Ruchira.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: deepali.rock
I wanna see a talli Nidhi and Ashu here..in one frame 😆

A tough one to fulfull.. 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: Tinku14
Great Work.👏.. Lovely going.⭐️...waiting for the coming update...very very refreshing😛

Thank you. If you want, I can send you a PM as soon as I update. Do let me know. 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: meena_kannan
well written as always, Sujatha! Looking forward to the next chap...this chap was small by yr standards 😊

Thank you Meena. And yes, my std update is 10 pages in word doc. this one is 8 pages. 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: vidyasabde
Suvika it was a pleasant surprise to say the least...
love your writing as always...beginning was very well written .👏

missing this forum...and all of you !!

Hi Vidya... it was not a surprise. this has been on the works for the past few weeks. I guess since you have not been regular, you missed the announcement. But thats OK. Glad to have you back.. at least for a while.

Do keep in touch.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: Suvika.

A tough one to fulfull..😆

This is a rock solid scene.. super hit scene..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: oaz30
Suvi dearest,
You taking over the story was the right thing, what started as a dabble in story writing , you have taken it to a larger than life level and for that I am super grateful. Just the way you have presented the first chapter is fantastic, you have started delving in deep in the psyche of the characters. As a reader I feel for both of the characters each carrying an emotional burden of his own. One must be heartless not to feel for them .Looking forward to see how you present them as we go along.

That was a superb opening scene.

Shari 😊
PS: I need to add am reading that in class , am trying my best not to drool :P as I re read the story

Hi Shari,

Phew...I have been waiting for your comments. Feel better now actually. And really really glad that you are happy with the way the chapter has come out. 😃

And yes, both have been hurt in the past. So have to see how they heal and move forward.

You are sitting and reading this in the class?? 😲😆 I think I need to have a chat with your students.

And I like the way the opening scene came out too.