Life part 3

Page

Next Last

bc123456

@bc123456

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Have I bored you enough ,

Life , a delight, beautiful and light ,

Sounds of laughter

Flying of kites ,

Dancing in the sand ,

Studying with all our might ,

Thinking the world is ours to delight ,

When did it change ?

Tears became a part of the game ,

Ravages of time ,

Spell a story beyond the frame

Sadness became a part of the same

But from the ashes the spirit rises,

To fight the souls crisis ,

And the dark night gives way

To the dawn of calmness

And a sense of quiet achievements prevails ,

Sorrows , struggles are a part of veil

Life is incomplete without the trail.

Good morning friends , hope u like my new effort😃

Edited by bc123456 - 11 years ago

Quote

Frequent Posters

rayafan17

@rayafan17

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

Nice continuation..

Yes Life is full of trials but marching forward is the name of the game..

Please continue these musings..

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

deepaligupta197

@deepaligupta197

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

GM doc😛

Yet another superb piece of art. Simplicity, patience, compassion are your greatest treasures. Simple in actions and thoughts, your thots help us return to the source of being. Patient with whatever life has to offer , you accord with the way things are. Compassionate toward everyone you reconcile all beings in the world

Loved these lines to d core ...

But from the ashes the spirit rises,

To fight the souls crisis ,

And the dark night gives way

To the dawn of calmness

And a sense of quiet achievements prevails ,

Sorrows , struggles are a part of veil

Life is incomplete without the trail.

Very true...One of the most tragic things about human nature is that all of us tend to put off life. We are all dreaming of some magical rose garden over the horizon-instead of enjoying the roses blooming outside our windows today n we forget that roses n thorns go hand in hand.

Ur thots r very inspiring...thank u for reminding us every morning that life is a beautiful journey!!!

Have a splendid day😛

Quote

Veenaper

@Veenaper

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Hey Doc spellbinding lines yet again. Your poetry is as fresh as a daisy. It is extremely refreshing and rejuvenating to read your poems early in the morning.

Life is full of trials and tribulations, struggles and upheavals, sickness and pain, but we overcome all this with vigour and fortitude and hope for a new sunlit dawn. There is certainly a pot of gold at the end of a rainbow.

Your lines reminded me of this hymn -

Lord I place into your hands the things that I can do

Lord I place into your hands the times I have been through

Lord I place into your hands the way that I should go

For I know I always can trust you

Quote

bc123456

@bc123456

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deepa17
Nice continuation..

Yes Life is full of trials but marching forward is the name of the game..

Please continue these musings..

Glad u liked it 😳

Quote

bc123456

@bc123456

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deepaligupta197
GM doc😛
Yet another superb piece of art. Simplicity, patience, compassion are your greatest treasures. Simple in actions and thoughts, your thots help us return to the source of being. Patient with whatever life has to offer , you accord with the way things are. Compassionate toward everyone you reconcile all beings in the world

Loved these lines to d core ...

But from the ashes the spirit rises,
To fight the souls crisis ,
And the dark night gives way
To the dawn of calmness
And a sense of quiet achievements prevails ,
Sorrows , struggles are a part of veil
Life is incomplete without the trail.

Very true...One of the most tragic things about human nature is that all of us tend to put off life. We are all dreaming of some magical rose garden over the horizon-instead of enjoying the roses blooming outside our windows today n we forget that roses n thorns go hand in hand.
Ur thots r very inspiring...thank u for reminding us every morning that life is a beautiful journey!!!

Have a splendid day😛

Thank u Deepali your reviews a piece of art , thank u for liking what I am writing ,

Just write has I feel ,and where my mind takes me😃

Quote

bc123456

@bc123456

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Veenaper
Hey Doc spellbinding lines yet again. Your poetry is as fresh as a daisy. It is extremely refreshing and rejuvenating to read your poems early in the morning.

Life is full of trials and tribulations, struggles and upheavals, sickness and pain, but we overcome all this with vigour and fortitude and hope for a new sunlit dawn. There is certainly a pot of gold at the end of a rainbow.

Your lines reminded me of this hymn -

Lord I place into your hands the things that I can do
Lord I place into your hands the times I have been through
Lord I place into your hands the way that I should go
For I know I always can trust you

Thank u Veena , 🤗 And for the lovely hymn

Quote

pansy123

@pansy123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Life , a delight, beautiful and light ,

Sounds of laughter

Flying of kites ,

Dancing in the sand ,

Studying with all our might ,

Thinking the world is ours to delight ,

When did it change ?

Tears became a part of the game ,

Ravages of time ,

Spell a story beyond the frame

Sadness became a part of the same

But from the ashes the spirit rises,

To fight the souls crisis ,

And the dark night gives way

To the dawn of calmness

And a sense of quiet achievements prevails ,

Sorrows , struggles are a part of veil

Life is incomplete without the trail.

You've captured all shades and woven them in one bead...one feels like saying a rosary. 👏 keep writing dear...who'll feel bored passing through the dawn of calmness.

Quote

menaka

@ariyadasa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

I am late today 😭, get used to read ur poem early morning , to tied up work schedule 😡

Sorry for the late reply Doc 😭

LOVE IT DOC👏

Well written u are master in poet Doc 👏

The way u gathered words to the poem , WOW , Doc 👏

Love this sentence a lot i feel , u describe a lot from this one sentence Doc 👍🏼

Keep it up Doc 👏

Quote

Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#10

How true an aspect of Life ! Very true Doc 👏👏

This is the life... Full of laughs n tears,, Full of dark n light,, Sorrow n struggle is the part of life which is full of trials every minute.. ! The spirit of strength, courage n determination to grab the happiness makes us rise once again n move on !

Beautiful lines as always.. 👏

Quote

1 2 3

Life part 3

Related Topics

Explore Topics