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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thought would say hello to all of u ,

As the night weaves her spell ,
Dreams start to dwell,
In hearts which are broken beyond repair ,
And one wonders why ,
Dreams are for the living ,
Not for souls , who have stopped seeking ,
Yet they come , some sweet , some sad ,
Some full of joy ,
One wonders why ,
Dreams are make believe a place to escape ,
From the everlasting grief of the mind ,
When sanity does not last ,
One wonders why
Dreams


This is my small attempt at writing poetry , so don't throw stones and tamatars at me
Take care , bye

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Posted: 11 years ago
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me first
wow dr. babs.. such a beautiful beautiful poem... is this really ur first attempt? I don't believe it
very gud post
A Fgreat morning to u
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome poem Docji. 👏 Beautifully written indeed!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Good morning, happy monday and wishing you a great start of week!! 😃 Hope you are doing great.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely post Dr.Babs..very beautiful poem..👏
Loved it 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely poem about the dreams. Nice post Doc Babs 👏 👏 Liked it so much, that dreams take away the grief of mind from this hectic life. Very well written.⭐️
Have a nice day. 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sshirley

me first

wow dr. babs.. such a beautiful beautiful poem... is this really ur first attempt? I don't believe it
very gud post
A Fgreat morning to u



Good afternoon , and thank u for liking it , it's my first effort , so all comments are welcome 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ttrocks

Awesome poem Docji. 👏 Beautifully written indeed!! ⭐️ Good morning, happy monday and wishing you a great start of week!! 😃 Hope you are doing great.


😃 Thank u Tupu u are great for my morale , have a lovely day u too
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: floridadoc

Lovely post Dr.Babs..very beautiful poem..👏

Loved it 👍🏼


Thank u have tried my hand at just writing what came to my mind
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Lovely poem about the dreams. Nice post Doc Babs 👏 👏 Liked it so much, that dreams take away the grief of mind from this hectic life. Very well written.⭐️

Have a nice day. 🤗


Thank u sweetie , for the kind words
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Posted: 11 years ago
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👏YOUR SMALL ATTEMPT ALREADY A SIXER DOC 👏






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