Tum itna jo muskura rahe ho

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Tum itna jo muskura rahe ho
kya gham hai jisko chhupa rahe ho //

how is it so that you are smiling so much,
what is the sorrow that you are hiding..



aankhon mein nami, hansi labon par
kya haal hai kya dikha rahe ho

there is wetness in your eyes n smile on the lips,
what's your condition n what are you trying to show it as..
[as in, why are you trying to hide your sadness]



ban jaayenge zeher peete peete
Yeh ashq jo peete ja rahe ho

if you keep drinking, they'll become poison for you,
these tears that you are keeping on drinking..



jin zakhmon ko waqt bhar chala hai
tum kyon Unhe chhedhe ja rahe ho

those wounds that the time has almost healed,
why are you keeping on disturbing them..



rekhaon ka khel hai muqaddar
rekhaon se maat kha rahe ho..

fate is a game of lines
You are just getting defeated by lines..



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Me first yahoo
Ariya fab work dear

Premrog yeh lagaya hai jaise
Badan pe rog lagaya jaise
Dil ko jalke khaak bana lenge
In jajbato ko humara aaina bana lenge


Tum se duri yeh kaisee ya rab?
Un zalakti aakhoki kasam ya rab
Un aankhoke aasoo pine de
Jo dard paas hai unke thodi hawa idhar bhi dede


Unse najare mili dil khamosh ho gaya
Pyaar ke sagar me madhosh ho gaya
Chand na sitaro ki tammanaa hai
Bus unke cheherme apne do jahaa hai


Unka khila chehera dekhkar hum jee uthe
Bus humara ful aisa khila ki hum jee uthe
Aisee chandni bakshi hume
Ki hum dhalati raat ko bhul gaye

Unhe bahome bharke sara jahaa dekhenge
Saath hai unka toh sara jamana dekhenge
Hume tanhai se ab lagta hai dar
Yeh khubsurat aalam dobara dekhenge
Edited by parmarA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
Alka write ur shayari in ur first reply

Edited by ariyadasa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Ariya lovely .. One of my fave songs
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepa17

Ariya lovely .. One of my fave songs



Thanks dear got a free time today so i am here in my sweet home IF 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful thread... n lovely song chosen.. Great work Ariya 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Premrog yeh lagaya hai jaise
Badan pe rog lagaya jaise
Dil ko jalke khaak bana lenge
In jajbato ko humara aaina bana lenge


Tum se duri yeh kaisee ya rab?
Un zalakti aakhoki kasam ya rab
Un aankhoke aasoo pine de
Jo dard paas hai unke thodi hawa idhar bhi dede


Unse najare mili dil khamosh ho gaya
Pyaar ke sagar me madhosh ho gaya
Chand na sitaro ki tammanaa hai
Bus unke cheherme apne do jahaa hai


Unka khila chehera dekhkar hum jee uthe
Bus humara ful aisa khila ki hum jee uthe
Aisee chandni bakshi hume
Ki hum dhalati raat ko bhul gaye

Unhe bahome bharke sara jahaa dekhenge
Saath hai unka toh sara jamana dekhenge
Hume tanhai se ab lagta hai dar
Yeh khubsurat aalam dobara dekhenge





Edited by parmarA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: parmarA

Premrog yeh lagaya hai jaise

Badan pe rog lagaya jaise
Dil ko jalke khaak bana lenge
In jajbato ko humara aaina bana lenge


Tum se duri yeh kaisee ya rab?
Un zalakti aakhoki kasam ya rab
Un aankhoke aasoo pine de
Jo dard paas hai unke thodi hawa idhar bhi dede


Unse najare mili dil khamosh ho gaya
Pyaar ke sagar me madhosh ho gaya
Chand na sitaro ki tammanaa hai
Bus unke cheherme apne do jahaa hai


Unka khila chehera dekhkar hum jee uthe
Bus humara ful aisa khila ki hum jee uthe
Aisee chandni bakshi hume
Ki hum dhalati raat ko bhul gaye

Unhe bahome bharke sara jahaa dekhenge
Saath hai unka toh sara jamana dekhenge
Hume tanhai se ab lagta hai dar
Yeh khubsurat aalam dobara dekhenge





Very nice poetry Alka di... 👏
The words gives a feeling of determined in love and to get it ! ⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9
lovely sony selection Ariya..👏 one of the Best ghazal of Jagjit singh.
Very nice work...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
Loved these three the most..❤️ thank u Ariya..

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