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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: parmarA

Thank you suku.Kashmir and Ashni.combination sochke khun badh jata hai


So true 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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A beautiful story against the backdrop of kashmir
beautiful Red Graphic
Will come back with a review to such an endearing story❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Alka ji ye sab kab likha. Great. will read all of them now.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepaligupta197

A beautiful story against the backdrop of kashmir
beautiful Red Graphic
Will come back with a review to such an endearing story❤️

Thank you deepali and will wait for your review
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: rajanigandha26

Alka ji ye sab kab likha. Great. will read all of them now.

Jab mallika mentle damage stage me Nidhi aur Ashu pe julam dha rahi thi tab maine yeh likha tha.
I will wait for your review Rajani
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😲 is this Alka 's os ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ariyadasa

😲 is this Alka 's os ?

Why Shocked Ariya?i wrote this os when mallika was here to torture us
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very beautiful OS Alka Di.. Loved the journey to Kashmir ! Its like we are living a life with Ashni in the Paradise of Earth ! Thanks for reposting ! ⭐️👏


Ashn u n Nidhi are getting ready to leave for their HM.. n packing is fully done.. with heater 😛😉
Lovely room in the hotel and our shy Ashu is vso romantic here and making Nidhi know how he loves her.. ! Beautifully picturised 👏
I am loving your two liners in the end of every chapter.. They go like telling us the theme and the story how it will move ahead.. ⭐️

Bahome Bhar ke tumhe sara jahaa dikhana hai, Mera pyaar kaisa hai,tumhe bhi to samazana hai...

Pure romance inside and snowfall out. Really an appealing lovely OS this is.. !
Nice Ashni moments.. n Ashu's words.. mere liye toh tumhara pyaar bhi jannat se zyada hai..

Tere pyaar ki kashish hai,jo jiye jaa raha hoo
Apne gum bhoolakar,pyaar tumhe kiye jaa rahaa hoo
Ashni attending the Seminaar and then back to hotel,, again some lovely Ashni moments..

And loved her words..

are,main aapki biwi hoo?ab to humari shaadi ho chuki hai aur waise bhi muze saree achhi lagti hai,aur sindoor aur mangalsutra to muze aapki yaad dilata hai.mangalsutra dil ke kareeb hota hai,jo aapne muze pahenaya tha,matlab aap humesha mere dil me rahenge.

Very kind and perfect words if every bride to her hubby.. Hats off to your narration and hold on the story

Zindagi ke rang saare aasman me hote hai. Par khusnaseeb hu main ke mere paas chaand hai

Again good romantic scenes ., and i liked that dressing up scene a lot.. Ashni cares for each other n their love is blossoming !


Tumhari rehematoke talabgaar hum.
aap hai madadgaar,to paanewale hai hum..

Beautiful chapter in the Valley of Kashmir ! Loved Nidhi dressing up in Kashmiri outfit n Ashu clicked her photos.
Lovely n most romantic scene on the shikara



Jism woh nahi,jo pyaar me tadapna na jaane. pyaar woh nahi,jo behekna na jaane




The loving journey is full on.. I am liking it 😛

Pyaar wohi jo dil me hulchul jagae. Aur saathi wohi jo hulchul buzaye...


Physically tired Ashni are too tired in the Seminar hall .. Our very brave Nidhi saved Dr. William's life..
Nidhi who is standing by the window saw a man shooting and gunpoint Dr. Williams.. Her shout made him lean down but she herself fell n get her head injured.. O poor Nidhi ..
But later i felt happy to see her regaining consciousness and telling Ashu.. main itni jaldi aapka peecha nahi chhodne wali 😃

Got scared by Ashu's dream,, but thanks that it was only a dream ,, and Nidhi is safe !
Ashu is with his sweet heart n Ashni moments are playing magic !
Very lovely story with an awesome feeling of Ashni together in Kashmir with a purpose of attending Seminar... where Nidhi saved Dean's life !
Ashni's pure n beautiful love.. Loved every part of it.. though i have not written much abt the scenes.. but i have enjoyed the fully.. !
Thanks for this gift Alka Di.. I have taken a ride to kashmir. And now wants to go there with my family !

Thank you for this loveliest treat. ! 👏



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you Bawa for your awsome feedback
Just loved yur review.

I wrote this os when we were facing mentle damage Mallika's pagalpanti ki psunami.

I will recomment your comment later.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: bawaswift

Very beautiful OS Alka Di.. Loved the journey to Kashmir ! Its like we are living a life with Ashni in the Paradise of Earth ! Thanks for reposting ! ⭐️👏Welocme Bawa.Yes Kashmir in backdrop and Ashni fab combination



Ashn u n Nidhi are getting ready to leave for their HM.. n packing is fully done.. with heater 😛😉Their love is each others heater.
Lovely room in the hotel and our shy Ashu is vso romantic here and making Nidhi know how he loves her.. ! Beautifully picturised 👏Thank you once again Bawa.
I am loving your two liners in the end of every chapter.. They go like telling us the theme and the story how it will move ahead.. ⭐️That is my style to complete the os with beautiful sher or two liners.

Bahome Bhar ke tumhe sara jahaa dikhana hai, Mera pyaar kaisa hai,tumhe bhi to samazana hai...

Pure romance inside and snowfall out. Really an appealing lovely OS this is.. !
Nice Ashni moments.. n Ashu's words.. mere liye toh tumhara pyaar bhi jannat se zyada hai..True love bro

Tere pyaar ki kashish hai,jo jiye jaa raha hoo
Apne gum bhoolakar,pyaar tumhe kiye jaa rahaa hoo
Ashni attending the Seminaar and then back to hotel,, again some lovely Ashni moments..

And loved her words..So true

are,main aapki biwi hoo?ab to humari shaadi ho chuki hai aur waise bhi muze saree achhi lagti hai,aur sindoor aur mangalsutra to muze aapki yaad dilata hai.mangalsutra dil ke kareeb hota hai,jo aapne muze pahenaya tha,matlab aap humesha mere dil me rahenge.

Very kind and perfect words if every bride to her hubby.. Hats off to your narration and hold on the story Thank you Bawa

Zindagi ke rang saare aasman me hote hai. Par khusnaseeb hu main ke mere paas chaand hai

Again good romantic scenes ., and i liked that dressing up scene a lot.. Ashni cares for each other n their love is blossoming !so like perfect couple


Tumhari rehematoke talabgaar hum.
aap hai madadgaar,to paanewale hai hum..

Beautiful chapter in the Valley of Kashmir ! Loved Nidhi dressing up in Kashmiri outfit n Ashu clicked her photos.
Lovely n most romantic scene on the shikara Me too love to imagine it



Jism woh nahi,jo pyaar me tadapna na jaane. pyaar woh nahi,jo behekna na jaane




The loving journey is full on.. I am liking it 😛

Pyaar wohi jo dil me hulchul jagae. Aur saathi wohi jo hulchul buzaye...


Physically tired Ashni are too tired in the Seminar hall .. Our very brave Nidhi saved Dr. William's life.. She is brave aur sudden thoughts me mahir.
Nidhi who is standing by the window saw a man shooting and gunpoint Dr. Williams.. Her shout made him lean down but she herself fell n get her head injured.. O poor Nidhi ..
But later i felt happy to see her regaining consciousness and telling Ashu.. main itni jaldi aapka peecha nahi chhodne wali 😃 can imagine these scene Bawa.She is totally lovable and cute.

Got scared by Ashu's dream,, but thanks that it was only a dream ,, and Nidhi is safe !
Ashu is with his sweet heart n Ashni moments are playing magic !
Very lovely story with an awesome feeling of Ashni together in Kashmir with a purpose of attending Seminar... where Nidhi saved Dean's life !
Ashni's pure n beautiful love.. Loved every part of it.. though i have not written much abt the scenes.. but i have enjoyed the fully.. !Thank you Bawa for your each and every word.
Thanks for this gift Alka Di.. I have taken a ride to kashmir. And now wants to go there with my family !That;s great Bawa.Enjoy the ride.Though i didn't visit the jannat of india.But want to go there

Thank you for this loveliest treat. ! 👏Welcome Bawa.



Thank you Bawa for your lovely feedback.

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