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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepali.rock

very nice continuation..and suku and me..superb🤣..must say the humour was rib tickling..1st time felt that we all got our due as ashu deewani's😆

waiting for next part..


haina...i fell off my chair laughing when i read about Dr Anjani..🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: jayasree.rao

Suvika,


A sensitive story skilfully handled by the author. The first part aptly portrays the feelings of a husband who is missing his dear wife.

His attachment to the patients of the children's ward.

The second part is really humourous with various members of forum appearing in different roles best being Anjani.

So Ashu found his Nidhi in the school playing with the children.

Waiting for the next part. Love to the young writer.


yes Jayasreeji...i loved both the pain and the humour...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Suvika.


haina...i fell off my chair laughing when i read about Dr Anjani..🤣

seriously..CFQ at work😆..the moment I read her name..i was like bewareROFL
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Finally my angel Nidhi is found... hale and hearty!! So happy to see the chapter ended on that note... Good take... hilarious!!

Now, my angel Nidhi is back and so is the life of Dr. Ashutosh!! 🥳 Is part-3 coming SujathaDi?? When, if yes??

And loads of love and best wishes to the cutie who has given this OS.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Suja, This is super hilarious update.. In complete contrast to the part 1..
Is the writer of the part 1 and part 2 the same??? .. I doubt..

All these lucky ladies must be having a blast.. to be at service to Ashuji...
And Deepa ,the maid must have got the shock of her life...

Thank God, Nidhi has appeared.. I was praying for her to come back...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
The writer sure knows a balanced use of tenderness n humour n with proficiency. Even if your subject is a serious one, the subtle use of humor can both ease tension and provide a respite from difficult moments.

You may think that when it comes to writing, humor is best used only in fiction or satire. But while we think of comedy in terms of exaggeration or fabrication, effective humor can be just as much about creative misdirection—engaging readers by taking them someplace they don't expect to go—and subtly choosing metaphors and words that make readers giggle without even knowing why. And a smiling reader is one who's paying attention and eager to read on. One chapter left us whimpering n the second one giggling!

The ending was so angelic ...Ashu found his Titli! A very endearing chapter!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: ttrocks

Finally my angel Nidhi is found... hale and hearty!! So happy to see the chapter ended on that note... Good take... hilarious!!

Now, my angel Nidhi is back and so is the life of Dr. Ashutosh!! 🥳 Is part-3 coming SujathaDi?? When, if yes??

And loads of love and best wishes to the cutie who has given this OS.


yes part 3 will be here tomorrow...its a short one but you will like it i think
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: neelimapn4

Suja, This is super hilarious update.. In complete contrast to the part 1..

Is the writer of the part 1 and part 2 the same??? .. I doubt..

All these lucky ladies must be having a blast.. to be at service to Ashuji...
And Deepa ,the maid must have got the shock of her life...

Thank God, Nidhi has appeared.. I was praying for her to come back...


The writer of part 1 and 2 is the same Neelima...

and i wouldn't call what Deepa got as "shock" she was all but drooling...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Very nice story and very brilliantly written ...👏👏

Liked the way , all forum members been used in this story ...especially Dr Anjani 🤣
The story had touch of sadness but the ending of this chapter is just too Amazing ⭐️..So Dr Ashuthosh finally found his titli .Very nice 😃

Will be waiting for next part ...Hats off to the young writer , she is doing great job 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Suvika.


yes part 3 will be here tomorrow...its a short one but you will like it i think

Okay. Will wait.

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