FF-TohseNainalaage piya Sa-Chapter 9-Pg 55 - Page 36

Fabulous Updates Sai. 👏👏👏

Part 1

Nidhi's past is so well-written. Amar's character and Nidhi's journey from elation to depression is portrayed nicely. I felt her pain in every word.

Her fear was so palpable the very first moment he came in her life

"Is he committed?"She wanted to ask, the words sat inside her mouth, she gulped and swallowed ...

and

Tears sprang in her eyes, clutching his finger "Can you live without me ... I mean nothing to you"

"I can Nidhi , I am used to heart breaks ...I lived through it once , I can live once again " he mentioned in ice cold voice

This is what scared her , the insecurity which he inflict inside her every time , every moment with his words , with his actions , confusing her ...leaving her in dilemma what she should do

Alas at the end her fears came true and she got trapped in such a mess.

The color of defeat choked her, even though her nod and smile indicated she is not broken down yet. Smile stubborn, fake plastic smile, licking her wounds sitting in darkest corner. Her heart is broken but still she had to function ...buttoning up her dress shirt over it, she hoped it doesn't show much... "I told you so ..." her conscience hissed at her for every 2 seconds, as she laid down staring glowing moon, even when she sat staring at burning sun , it came back to her , all those words of anjie ...all those cautions like a weed her thoughts popped up leaving her clumsy and full of bitterness

Liked the lines:

"Past" is something not to be dragged, not be dwelled but to keep it as reminder, like a lesson, like a history carefully recorded in our memory and nothing else ..."just a piece of us not totally us"

Part-2

Ashutosh's care and love for her oozed from every word and the way his love reflected on her was quite evident and well expressed.

Loved the way she made her to share the toast.

Her pain and helplessness was so blatant in these lines:

"Whatever happens in the end blame comes to me...you people are not helping me, but making me even more miserable...maybe I deserve this hell, may be this is what I deserve for filling my head with junk..." she stopped as sob caught in her chest, it raised from within until it dripped from her eyes like pieces of her agony...

and

Ashu gave sarcastic laugh "and one day he left you when he had enough of this game..."

Nidhi bowed her head "is it wrong to love someone like that? "

"I find it very self destructive nidhi..." he grumbled

Part 3

Nice way to make Nidhi win over her fears. Dr. A's interactive sessions are very well crafted. And the use of sky diving to make her triumphant conquering her fears was fabulous. And the end was so dreamy

Originally posted by: deepa17

Thanks sai .. Take your time .. Hope you are feeling well.

Originally posted by: ariyadasa

Sai superb

i 'll come back soon 😳

Originally posted by: Diksha_1991

Fantastic Update Sai...👏 👏

Thanks for the update.😛

Will give you reviews at once part 2 is posted...😳

Originally posted by: gargpoo

fantastic update sai..so emotional..👏..waiting for 2nd part..