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Posted: 12 years ago
AshNi both have their past haunting them but Ashu is able to get rid of it and ready to enter into new relation...๐Ÿ˜Š
Nidhi is not able to do so...but she likes Ashu his looks and everything about him...
You have a typical style of writing...from one line, we have to understand or guess the past and you leave gaps to be filled by us...Nice..you talk that way or it is just the writing?๐Ÿ˜‰
At this juncture, we are not able to guess what will happen next...
Love the FF...๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

Good update...why isn't Nidhi worthy of him...coz she has been cheated in love or coz she slept with Amar?...but that's all in the past isn't it?


Thank you so much Vidishaa ๐Ÿค—

@Bold-๐Ÿ˜ฒ Lol no nothing like that ๐Ÿ˜†

You need to wait to get the answer ...๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant continuation Sai... Loved AshNi scenes/convo. very much!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bc123456

Fab update , like the way ashu tells her is falling for her ,liked her honesty in all a lovely update ,the beginning of the chapter beautiful๐Ÿ‘but next update Thursday that's miles away , we all will be hounding u then ๐Ÿ˜กvery interesting concept ,enjoying it


Thank you so much ๐Ÿค—

Now I am doubtful whether i can give on Thursday ...not even started writing, my boss pulled me in new project ...my attention needed there so ๐Ÿ˜ณ

But deffo will try to give ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nandinibose

beautiful chapter...

the inner thots- beautifully written
love how ashu comes to meet her n introduces himself as his BF

the way he confesses that he is falling for her is so cute...

Thank you so much ๐Ÿค—


why does nidhi thin that she is unworthy of him?

you will get answer very soon ๐Ÿ˜‰


pl do continue soon n do pm me



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Posted: 12 years ago
hey sai...sorry for the delay,actually i m unwell...
fantastic chap...๐Ÿ‘
loved ashu's self thoughts...so he is in love with nidhi...love at first sight...๐Ÿ˜‰
liked ashu armaan convo..
armaan was right,i liked his linedon't you know the primary rule to be followed when you go out with a girl โ€ฆis that you should not argueโ€ฆunderstand this, you should not ARGUE , but you should accept, even if they are wrong" ๐Ÿ˜†
loved anji nidhi convo...liked nidhi's self thoughts during convo..
i agree with nidhi's pov...one should not pretend himself...
i liked the word ELAPHANT SIZE EGO..truly said boys have elephant size ego..๐Ÿ˜†.
both were waiting for each other to call first...finally ashu took first step...
i liked this scene" but he is my fianc โ€ฆ..umm you know going to be" she replied with underlining note, "Stay away from him" possessiveness๐Ÿ˜‰
i was shocked when nidhi saidbecause you don't get anyone since you are already 33?" nidhi is such a antique piece๐Ÿ˜†
liked ashu's dialogues"listen to me โ€ฆ.." he whispered "love is not about perfection, it is accepting a person with the flaws โ€ฆand I believe I already did that" he smiled nervously "it's not only your beautiful face which bewitched me but also I melted down for your most insensitive form โ€ฆ. You never tried to impress me wearing one of fake smile but instead you surprised me with your honesty, I really liked it โ€ฆ.you allowed me to look at you as you are, without pretence without your mask onโ€ฆyou showed me the real you"
so ashu has moved on but nidhi still needs time...
waiting for next...
when we will get next update??
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Posted: 12 years ago
Its THursday...update please๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gargpoo

hello sai,where r u??


Hi poonam , I am right here ...๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

how are you ?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aryanpp

Its THursday...update please๐Ÿ˜Š


I am trying my best to give next chapter by tonight ...๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank u for the quick update Sai ๐Ÿ˜‰

Lovely chap SAI one of my favourite character in KTLK so cute conversation which rememorize KTLK so cute ๐Ÿ˜ณ

You liked Ashu Arman convo ?? wow thank you so much dear , I am glad you liked it ๐Ÿค—

" oye kal call kyu nahi pick kiya '?" Anjie came inside scowling

"Here comes our own Ms Sherlock Holmes '.." Nidhi mumbled rolling her eyes "Hi Anjie '.how are you?"

" I was worried when you dint picked the call '..I was expecting at least message for my miscalls" Anjie rumbled

" I am sorry '..I came late yesterday and then I was bone tired so slept off '" Nidhi made a small face...

Slumping into chair next to Nidhi's bed 'Anjie asked "So how was it? How is he ?"

"Here you go, MS Solanki's probing "

"He is fine ...ummm, you know all right " Nidhi replied looking away from Anjie's expectant face "is he good looking?" Anjie asked

" Anjie looks are not so important '.."

" he is not good looking ?" Anjie made a face

" No 'No , he is '..I never expected 'you know '."

" what you dint expected '.." Anjie asked totally puzzled

" he is so young 'so handsome I mean '.! I never expected someone like him '.his smile is cute" She smiled

"You like him '." Anjie froze on spot 'in turn Nidhi just gave her hopeless look

" my goodness Nidhi! Finally god created someone our Nidhi like'." Anjie chuckled

"What made you think '.that I like him?"

"Look at your face in mirror 'you blushing, looking like tomato all red over your face '.his smile is cute! You never say something like that 'you never told something like that from a long time nidhi" Anjie gave her shocked yet pleased look.

" so tell me more ' what was his first reaction, when he saw you '.?" Anjie asked sitting next to Nidhi

"First reaction '..I don't know! I don't remember '..Beside why are you asking these silly questions huh?" Nidhi scowled

"Don't you know first reaction is the most candid one 'it tell you how he looked at you" Anjie explain

"Well I don't know ...I don't remember " Nidhi replied

" Nidhi! You are pathetic...how can you miss out on such important detail, anyways '.was he glad, happy , joyous , horrified 'did he smiled , scowled , made a face .." Anjie asked

" Anjie , you are insulting me '..What do you mean by horrified and making a face '" Nidhi grumbled which in turn made Anjie chuckle "but yeah 'he called me judgmental over Hitler ...Can you believe that?" Nidhi grimaced

Sitting up straight Anjie stared at Nidhi " Ohh don't worry , I gave back nicely '." She smirked

"You did what '?" Anjie asked uneasily

" I told him whoever nominated that Hitler for world peace is a crack head ..And I am not judgmental" Nidhi replied

" Ohh god nidhi! What should I do with you '..You fought with him for someone who died like what 60-70 years back" Anjie grumbled

"We dint fought '." Nidhi replied

"Yes but argued '." Anjie added

"It was healthy debate '..Anjie " Nidhi tried to convince her "Nidhi don't you know about men and their elephant sized ego ''they don't like to feel they are wrong , they don't like someone who argue 'when will you grow up "

"But I don't believe in what he said '.that's why I argued!" Nidhi tried to justify

" yes but it is not necessary to voice it in front of him 'nothing would have snatched out of your hand by just agreeing to his points "

"But then it is like pretence '..I am agreeing something, which I don't believe" Nidhi replied

"Yes 'everyone do that, it's not wrong to pretend sometime '."Anjie replied

"Then he sees only my pretence isn't it'?"Nidhi mumbled suddenly unsure

Anjie did not replied for a long time "but Hitler seriously...koyi aur nahi mila tujhe" Anjie chuckled

This time u are too good u know why i told lke that sai ๐Ÿค—


๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† thank you Thank you ...๐Ÿ˜ณ


"Did he changed his mind, he doesn't want to meet me, and he dint liked me? Or he is in thinking mode just like me huh" She wondered uneasily just then her intercom buzzed showing call from reception "Nidhi '.someone is waiting for you here, he is telling ...He is your boyfriend 'you did not told us that you are seeing someone" her friend from reception desk asked her in hushed voice

" My boy friend ? huh ... " She replied quizzily , then as if she is enlightened " my goodness Ashuthosh ?!!'." She gave joyous squeal

"You are seeing him. '?" her friend asked "Whats with women and probing?" She scowled

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

" he is not my boy friend " she replied stiffly

" he is not 'ohh he is so handsome" her friend replied

" but he is my fianc '..umm you know going to be" she replied with underlining note, "Stay away from him" which her friend did not missed to catch .

Wa Sai what a description , i am in a dream land sai

.she saw him standing with his dazzling smile wearing khaki trouser and crisp and clear white shirt with sleeves folded till his elbow 'the front first 2 button of shirt is undone slightly revealing his broad chest..His hair is neatly combed and he is wearing glasses which in turn giving him matured look "jeez, he look even hotter with specs on ..."

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" Nidhi ' will you come out with me?" he asked anxiously Unsure what to do , she looked up at him "Will you give me 15 minutes time , I need to send some report urgently'.if I don't send ,my boss will fry me alive "

He chuckled "sure '.I will be here, waiting for you and don't worry ...Take your time 'I am ready to wait" he replied with broad smile '.



Awww this is so cute ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Driving through familiar locality Nidhi stared at his face, he looked happy and his eyes staring back at her every now and then "I expected your call, but you dint called" he mentioned in mock anger

She gave him angry look "don't you know a girl should not make a first move 'world will think otherwise" she muttered and flushed realizing what she blurted out.

He chuckled "well I don't mind and I don't give a hoot what world thinks '."

Superb Sai

His eyes blazed with unhidden love and faith simmered brighter than his self... Sitting there as she stared at his full form, his handsome face and that anxious looks all over his face, her inside squirmed, deepest of deepest core of her heart clenched exhibiting familiar but long forgotten, forbidden emotions'she felt it erupting in her like butterfly fluttering its wings '.like ripples over the water...but somewhere in darkest corner of her heart a voice hissed "you are not worthy for him...you ...you ...just not worthy for him" like a resentment filled with ugliness and her own despair ...she heard that voice until it intensified and that's all she could hear ...that's all.


next chapter , i will try to give by thursday ,Please do comment and let me know how it came out ...Thank you ๐Ÿ˜Š


Thank you so much Ariya ..I am really glad you liked it ...๐Ÿค—

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