Kashmakash S2 Ch 16 Pg 80 Deepa SSHOW 89, 104 - Page 2

Originally posted by: vidyasabde

Suvika it was a complete chapter...all the flavours of love life and happiness.

" baharo phool ..." sms exchange was too good...i imagined it on KK and SK...MAJA AA GAYA..

Vidya..you are the only one who noticed and mentioned those sms so far..thank you. 😳

I liked Nidhi mimicking Ashu and the Ashni romance following it. how can Ashu resist such a lovely and naughty wife? he did exactly as he should hve ...you penned it very nicely maintaining the flavor of naughtiness.

yeah..if i don't want to get repetitive, i have to think of new things, right?? 😉😛😆

Anji and cs are doing their best to patao DB and CV...

WAS THIS THE LAST BUT ONE CHAP ? pl no ! can you not make it longer ?pl...pl...pl.

😲arre no. this FF has 20 chapters + epilogue. 😃

Originally posted by: suku_07

I am busy...and you are not allowed to even think on this topic anymore 😡

Originally posted by: deepa17

I am here . So you will complete the FF or not??

Originally posted by: Suvika.

point is not about completing..i will complete it. but should i post it here or start thinking of publishing is the question. what do you suggest?? is this one worth publishing in the first place??

Originally posted by: pansy123

Very Nice chapter! Liked the build up of Baba- Nidhi bond, Loved the way you made him temptingly to turn his way to his home.

awww..you caught that naughty sms?? thank you Pansy..🤗

Dadi Bua's arousal of curiosity to know about Nidhi and then the way she changed and managed her expression when Anji was narrating Nidhi's honeymoon story, demanded empathy . Felt bad for Col. Verma and Dadi Bua...

true. they are hurting in a bad way.

dadi bua's speculation about how society must be talking about their relationship...her concern for her grand daughter...and Ashutosh's care... the whole Mandir episode was too good. And the canteen scene was... 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏... well written and well thought-out...highlight of this chap.

Thank you for this lovely update...waiting for the next.

Originally posted by: deepa17

That is my question.. Are you going to complete it here or stop and publish it??

It is an archived forum.. So the response is going to get even slower..

Originally posted by: deepa17

Yes the reviews are dwindling.. Lack of even the few who were regular .. And the spamming gets in the way my pov..

Ok I have my slide show on Ashni ready..

I am so excited ..