Kashmakash S2 Th 3 Chap 8 Pg 129 June 26 - Page 102

Originally posted by: vidyasabde

at last i could read ch7 nd 8 ...there was major electricity breakdown for 36 hrs.

😲 oh really?? jeez..that must be tough!! how did you manage??

coming directly to ch8 ...

this is diff...Ashutosh leaving Nidhi instead of terminating her from KGH...pain of separation can be felt very well...story is taking a diff route from K1...but theme appears to be same...right?

correct. same theme..different script.

the chapter is very nicely written as usual...commenting for each chap in different way is becoming very difficult for me...fall short of words. I wonder how do you come up with apt words and sequences to portray all sorts of emotions so beautifully ! ! ! loved it very much...waiting for the next chapter now.

thank you Vidya..

I think this time; I will get late lateef award for sure😆😆 ….My apologies for not commenting, this month bit hectic for me so could not comment on time. But I am free after this Friday so you will get my review on time …..😊

I read everything in one go and liked it very much, to be honest I liked it more than Kashmakash1😳….You changed everything after chapter 5 and more importantly I liked the way you explored inner turmoil of Ashu . He is one deep man ….caught up in his own emotional flaws and ghost of his past. Even though we know that you will not let anything happen to ASHNI but it hurt to see them suffer so much …especially Ashu !I felt bad for him…the weight of his dreadful past is so huge that it separated him from nidhi ….

I liked Chapter 7 and 8. You written it so beautifully, the reader can clearly picture each and every expression of the character and that is the beauty of your writing …I really like it.😃

I am not much aware of old Hindi song but liked your song selection and also the scene When Nidhi sing …it is so apt. and Ashu's reaction after that …. Well I did not expect that Ashu will decide to go away and shut nidhi out of his life …. That was so cruel of him not only towards Nidhi but he was cruel with himself too ….

I like this Nidhi, not only this but all the character you create in your FF …..They are strong and so sure of what they need. Their dreams and ambitions don't get hampered with situation. Mainly, you don't let them slip into self pity which is very natural when something bad happen ….I liked the way Nidhi handled the situation, it shows she is one awesome strong young woman …Even though she shut all her emotions from outside world , she did not crumbled down but instead stayed strong. She did not even left KGH hoping that Ashu will return anytime….Gosh! I liked her so much here.😳

My heart went out for her when she came to Ashu's cabin after his departure. There was so much going on in her head...poor thing!😔

Great way to make Ashu realize that Nidhi still waiting for him and she will never move on without him ….I liked CV and Ashu convo , it show Cv has great respect for Dr Ashuthosh and vice versa . I am wondering what will be Cv's reaction when he realize ASHNI relation and how things will fall into place …..Do they elope?? Even though the thought of eloping is exciting but personally I am bit against it …So eagerly waiting to read how you will take it forward ….😃

So finally Ashu came back ….Abba , thank god!😆😆 Now what is going to be Nidhi's reaction...will she be angry ?? Glad ?? will Ashu is going to ask her out ?? and what will happen when CV come into picture …I am full of questions …..Please give next part soon …

Between my credit card issue is fixed, purchasing yours and doc's book today …😉😃

Thank you for this FF …. loving it ❤️

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Hey guys..where is Sagi?? looks like she is MIA today!! may be she has too much home work..

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Oh great all the very best to him...I know how my comment was ... I was also like this 🤣

Originally posted by: arpitajaan

[Well no I am not married !! Kids naa naa India is developing country still... kids without marriage are still not accepted ...Suku this is so hillarious🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣...I am at work

Originally posted by: saibanu

I think this time; I will get late lateef award for sure😆😆 '.My apologies for not commenting, this month bit hectic for me so could not comment on time. But I am free after this Friday so you will get my review on time '..😊

no problem Sai..i will wait..😃

I read everything in one go and liked it very much, to be honest I liked it more than Kashmakash1😳'.You changed everything after chapter 5 and more importantly I liked the way you explored inner turmoil of Ashu . He is one deep man '.caught up in his own emotional flaws and ghost of his past. Even though we know that you will not let anything happen to ASHNI but it hurt to see them suffer so much 'especially Ashu !I felt bad for him'the weight of his dreadful past is so huge that it separated him from nidhi '.

some times it happens..its very easy to say "Let the past go / don't let it rule you" but all said and done, most of our actions today are based on our experiences in the past.

I liked Chapter 7 and 8. You written it so beautifully, the reader can clearly picture each and every expression of the character and that is the beauty of your writing 'I really like it.😃

thank you Sai..🤗

I am not much aware of old Hindi song but liked your song selection and also the scene When Nidhi sing 'it is so apt. and Ashu's reaction after that '. Well I did not expect that Ashu will decide to go away and shut nidhi out of his life '. That was so cruel of him not only towards Nidhi but he was cruel with himself too '.

this is according to him, being cruel to be kind. he is willing to punish himself in order to make sure she has a better life.

I like this Nidhi, not only this but all the character you create in your FF '..They are strong and so sure of what they need. Their dreams and ambitions don't get hampered with situation. Mainly, you don't let them slip into self pity which is very natural when something bad happen '.I liked the way Nidhi handled the situation, it shows she is one awesome strong young woman 'Even though she shut all her emotions from outside world , she did not crumbled down but instead stayed strong. She did not even left KGH hoping that Ashu will return anytime'.Gosh! I liked her so much here.😳

i don't believe in self pity Sai..at least not the forever self pity mode. i can't connect with that kind of characters.

My heart went out for her when she came to Ashu's cabin after his departure. There was so much going on in her head...poor thing!😔

Great way to make Ashu realize that Nidhi still waiting for him and she will never move on without him '.I liked CV and Ashu convo , it show Cv has great respect for Dr Ashuthosh and vice versa . I am wondering what will be Cv's reaction when he realize ASHNI relation and how things will fall into place '..Do they elope?? Even though the thought of eloping is exciting but personally I am bit against it 'So eagerly waiting to read how you will take it forward '.😃

So finally Ashu came back '.Abba , thank god!😆😆 Now what is going to be Nidhi's reaction...will she be angry ?? Glad ?? will Ashu is going to ask her out ?? and what will happen when CV come into picture 'I am full of questions '..Please give next part soon '

thanks again for the review Sai..

Between my credit card issue is fixed, purchasing yours and doc's book today '😉😃

🤗thank you.

Thank you for this FF '. loving it ❤️ I am glad.

Originally posted by: Ena292

u saw my cmnt???????

Originally posted by: Suvika.

which one?? the one about you awaiting your result?? yes, i did Ena.

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Hey guys..where is Sagi?? looks like she is MIA today!! may be she has too much home work..

Originally posted by: Ena292

nop...abt the chapter!