KTLK FF:[TH:1] Mere Jeewan Saathi- Chp-6 Pg-117 - Page 39

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Posted: 12 years ago

please forgive give me dear , not commented for 2 updates

After reading the ff i thought that my simple ff writer became a Romantic writer not bad

Love ashu and Nidhi's Dio so much really cute and romantic

But love the following Dio so much , as you only got these types of ideas 😉

She was sitting in front of the television, with remote in her hand, with Sony Channel on... How he had asked her bewildered- "Tum... Tum Tv dekhogi?" "Ji... meri favourite serial aayegi... 8 o'clock wala maine miss kar diya tha na..." "Kaun si serial hai...?" "Kuch toh log kahenge...", she had said all excited... "Achha... Wo Doctors wali?" "Yeah! Usmein leads ki shadi hone wali thi... Apni shadi ke chakkar mein, unki shadi miss kar di..."... Few days later, when on 15th May, when the leads in the serial were leaving for their Honeymoon to the National Park, Ashutosh had looked at Nidhi with uncertain eyes- "Kahin aapka bhi plan toh nahin hai na, Jungle mein Honeymoon manaane ka...?", Hearing this, Nidhi gave a huge laugh to him... "Nahin-nahin... Hum kahin aur chalte hain... Lekin India mein... Abroad toh jaate rehte hain..."...

Love ur ff so much , surely AZEEN i will comment at the right time 😛awaiting see ur Next update

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Posted: 12 years ago
Only the most magnificent mind, carved from hours of deep introspection and intellectual fine-tuning, could offer up such stimulating chapter for our simple minds. And the way that you phrased it…Your eloquent and articulate manner only reinforces our need for more of your endearing story!

The chap is about how the day-in-and-day-out ordinary stuff of life can sometimes add to the essence of our being. All the relationships in the chap Ashni , dewar bhabhi , doting n caring in laws , r all handled with care!

The KTLk episode was hilarious n aptly used! U hv given us a peek into the humorous aspect of the Ashni relationship!

The Ranga Anji banter n Nidhi intervening was again nicely drawn !

The usual roothna maana , understanding b/w Ashni shows there are different sides to a relationship, and this is based on arguments and understanding : the b'day n the lunch extracts clearly show what they share!

Neeti n Rohan's pairing up...wow all sisters to b married in the same family😆

After, putting the phone off, Nidhi, got off the bed to get ready...
Abrupt ending ya cliffhanger...I hope not😲
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Suvika.

A very nice chapter Aazeen. You have indeed come a long way as a writer. I know the effort that goes into thinking and typing each chapter. Being able to visualize a scene in your head is one thing but being able to put that scene into words takes talent and effort. From your JHUB, you have climbed quite a few steps. Congratulations..and well done.



what is full form of JHUB???recently started reading ff's,want to read old ones too

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bluesk

what is full form of JHUB???recently started reading ff's,want to read old ones too

Hello bluesk...

Jhubj is Jo hua usey bhool jaa...

To read all my writings, plz open the last thread of Media Gallery thread... I've given links to all of them...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice chap aazeen...Luved it... U write very well... Keep it up... Now coming to the chap...The first fight was gud...Birthday gift was nice...The devar bhabhi nokh jokh was too gud... Overall a beautiful chap...Waiting for next one...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Hello bluesk...

Jhubj is Jo hua usey bhool jaa...

To read all my writings, plz open the last thread of Media Gallery thread... I've given links to all of them...

ok,had already read this one,so will go through the link for others

by d way jhujb is nice one,different from others FF's that i had read

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Posted: 12 years ago
Aazeen,three years leap in fourth chap?amazing and suddenly story changed in good manner.Ashni are happily merried and nidhi was expecting 4 months.Their understanding was amazing.Nidhi is too quick in cooking yaar.I love Nidhi's emotional attachment with her in laws.I am glad that there is full family drama included in your ff.I was enjoying Rangu Anji's cute fight.Ashutosh is too bhulakkad here.That he forgot[really not forgot,but didn't wish her].Aurate aisee baten puri zindagi nahi bhulti.And another love stroy is taking place,,that's too Neetu and Rohan's[may be] so will wait for your next chap for the further answers.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Poonam, its probably a chair, a folding one, jisse usne tumko maara... These types of chairs are used in WWE fights...😆😆😆

Ok to mujhe chair se maara...😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Poonam, tum kab se update-update chilla rahi thi... Ab de diya toh tum review hi nahi de rahi ho... Main kabse wait kar rahi hu...
Tumko 1.5 weeks se tumko tadpa rahi hoon...
Ab padho na...
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Posted: 12 years ago

so unexpected thing is leap & preggy nidhi.teri is unexpected thing k baare me soch soch k mere dimaag ki dahi ho gayi thi

clean romance is nice. nidhi ka raat ko uska favourite show 'KUCH TO LOG KAHENGE' dekhna is so adorable.i feel like bechara Ashu...🤣.
HM destination is so nice.u know mai bhi apni school trip pe golden temple&dalhousie gayi thi.both places r so beatiful.
nidhi's madness abt pineapple is so cute.
devar-bhabhi convo was good.
Rohan-niti k beech kuch chal raha hai..😉.niti rohan ka wait kar rahi hai&gift bhi le rahi hai.yaar mujhe in dono ki love story dekhni hai.
nidhi-ashu convo 4 shopping&lunch was so cute.liked ashu ka nidhi ko tease karna.
i loved their first fight&i agree with nidhi.shaadi k baad first b'day bhoolna is so bad.liked the gift.
loved the lunch scene,ek dusre ki pasand ka khayal rakhna...😊
yaar abhi tak story simple hai,so i m sure u have something "unexpected" in ur mind.i want 2 know...
aese scene pe khatam karti hai k guess karna mushkil ho jata hai.
itne long review k baad return gift me next chap...😉😆 next time PM me..😊

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