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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mithalee

Ok mera dimaak thikaane par aachuka hain...Beta ye Ashu aur Nidhi aapke har ff se bohot alag hain,pata hain bolne ki baat nahi ye sabko pata hain!! Par really completely different characters...every ff of ur's i was always mad and concerned about Ashu par iss ff main i am also thinking about Nidhi...this chap was also fantastic and again fell in love with ur writing...Happy Nidhi loves Ashu:) par bechari apne har feeling ko apne aakhon main chupa kar rakhti hain:'( loved the way u described Nidhi's feeling and Awww yaar she has Ashu's t-shirt aajtak!!!! Kyu sujaji kyu bechari ko itna dard kyu:'( ...Ashu 😭 rona bhi aaraha hain mujhe par woh kyu aisa behave kar raha hain samajh sakti hoon...dekhte hain aage kya hota hain...


thank you Mithalee..yes, in this FF every character is etched differently...i keep experimenting and don't like monotony either in my characters or their behaviour patterns...

yes, i like that Ashu T shirt wala scene...that was an impulsive addition while i was typing the scene...hadn't preplanned it...but kind of liked it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
THIS ASHU IS A TYPICAL HARDSTONE.
This one is an awesome update you have time and again proved that sabar ka fal meetha hota hai.
Seriously kyaa chapter hai I surely need time 2 recover. Please post the next chap as soon as possible as I probably may not be able to wait for too long.
Review and questionnaire will be tomorrow so be prepared on the hot seat 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aur ek baat Sujaji this ff i feel like i am reading some bestseller novel...u r too good...the only difference is novel haath main ho toh main jab tak puri khatam na kardu,tabtak chodti nahi...but yaha aapke update ka intezaar karna padta:'( Mudraji ka idea sach main acha tha,hume aapke ghar chori karna padega next part ke liye
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wil gv the outburst 2mrw for the tme being this is for u

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

Bachche Log!!! Sab log jald aajao...

for the "Next chapter tomorrow" ...campaign!!!!


I join my hands for the campaign😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
okay so Nidhi had been in love with Ashu.. it mite have been crazy infatuation intitially bt this decade long seperation had acted as a strengthening cement and blossomed it completely into something very substantial! So inwardly she still hopes and dreams! Bt outwardly, she is hesitant, unsure, and afraid of Ashu!
Her feelings for Ashu comes out strongly and is also conveyed to Ashu in right measure.. bt he is hell bent on ignoring it and wants to hurt Nidhi as much as possible! tho y target her? surely after all these years he cud've been able to forgive Nidhi to some degree considering her age and the kind of rship thy shared!
Also y ritual mrg, y not register mrg if it was jst for sake of company and its employees! Does he see it in thr a chance to make Nidhi feel the same kind of betrayal and hurt tht he felt! Nidhi is up for a big big heartbreak for sure.. her world wud come crashing down wen she will see his "open" betrayal/infedility.. wen he will bring home those women or make it open and clear to Nidhi tht all he is intrstd is in one thing.. physical pleasure.. and he already had casual r'ships over the decade! .. tht wud b biggest blow and dent to Nidhi and her love.. wat wud Nidhi do thn? wud she turn to Rohan and Ashu realize and repent? Or wud she still keep believing in her luv and remain strong and resilient!
Also, I want to see to wat extent this wounded tiger can go in his revenge.. bt honestly Nidhi doesnt deserve all this hurt and pain.. the real culprits r Armaan and Aditi and whoever it is tht killed Aditi!
bt u may chose to dilute Ashu's character a bit later on and make him try and see Nidhi in a diffrnt light and v know he is going to feel jealous of Nidhi-Rohan's fship and Rohan's obvious love for Nidhi! And i m sure he somewhere knows tht Nidhi loves him bt he jst doesnt care abt it right now!
will need to wait and c wer u take this story from here...
u hinted somewer tht this chapter will give a clue to killer.. i m still wondering!
so Mallika doesnt know abt Armaan's past! hmmm... a good story thr!
wow so Angie is thr to keep an eye on Ashu at VM.. good .. Nidhi with Armaan.. and Angie with Ashu.. so wud these two girls bridge the gap btn thm..? bt right now luks like Angie is going to avenge Nidhi's heartbreak till she can get close to Ashu and really start help in bridging gaps btn thm!
the part wer Ashu feels for his parents was touching.. so Nidhi is already making inroads to his heart bt he is one stubborn guy and isnt going to break easily!
I can c the warm f'ship Rohan-Nidhi share.. some ppl can jst make u smile and forget everything.. i think Rohan is tht kind of guy for Nidhi! already luving him!
abhi criminal lawyer.. so he is at rescue of whoever is the culprit! So again my point of suspicion is pointing to someone in particular! Bt unless clues r thrown in one cannot possibly guess! so will wait for tht!
so overall, Ashu is all set to bring Nidhi's world crashing down gradually and may b perhaps without cruel intentions, only nxt chapter wud reveal wat he is upto!
also i m waiting to c how he makes an "emotionless" luv to Nidhi!😆 and more intrstd to know how u r going to present it.. will it b purely lustful from him or a try to make as cold and pleasure-less an affair for Nidhi!😆
well the story can go in any direction as far as Ashu-Nidhi's rship is considered only future chapters will unfold the story..
as for the murder mystery, i m guessing tht tht Tsunami filled 4th chapter is going to throw some clues!
thnk u for this wonderful update..
and yes it is too small! :P
Edited by achiever - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

Bachche Log!!! Sab log jald aajao...

for the "Next chapter tomorrow" ...campaign!!!!

ready when u r Mudra !!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sss97

THIS ASHU IS A TYPICAL HARDSTONE.

This one is an awesome update you have time and again proved that sabar ka fal meetha hota hai.
Seriously kyaa chapter hai I surely need time 2 recover. Please post the next chap as soon as possible as I probably may not be able to wait for too long.
Review and questionnaire will be tomorrow so be prepared on the hot seat 😆


thank you Swathi...

will have my bfast and be seated in the hot seat fresh tomorrow morning...

next update Wednesday..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mithalee

Aur ek baat Sujaji this ff i feel like i am reading some bestseller novel...u r too good...the only difference is novel haath main ho toh main jab tak puri khatam na kardu,tabtak chodti nahi...but yaha aapke update ka intezaar karna padta:'( Mudraji ka idea sach main acha tha,hume aapke ghar chori karna padega next part ke liye


aawww..thank you Mithalee...

and as for mere ghar mein chori...Mudraji...😡😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

Bachche Log!!! Sab log jald aajao...

for the "Next chapter tomorrow" ...campaign!!!!


Mudraji... bachchon aise mat bhadkaoji...

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