SFL {Th:2}Chap 12 parts 1 & 2 pg42 updtd 9/1/13

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Anu

@Libra

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#181

Hey Alkaji,

Just read your review of my FF

Thank you so much, for all the wonderful comments.

I am glad you like the story. It is close to my heart also.

And abhi toh kaafi kuch bacha hai ismein.

I have a lot of ideas running around in my head for it.

So hopefully it will be around for a while.

Thank you once again. I really appreciate it.😃

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Aardhan

@aardhan

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: Libra

Thank you so much Aarti. It feels nice to be back. Like coming home. I really missed you all very much.
Missed you too Anu but knew you were tied up with family and your health issues, so I did not want to disturb you. But its good to have you back. 🤗

Par abhi I have a nice long break. My kids are coming home next week, and will be with me all summer. Than my 25th Wedding anniversary is in June.
So lots is happening. Its going to be fun.😃
@bold.. wow, has it been a year already! Its seems like only yesterday when we were all wishing you and having fun in the 'Lets make our...' thread. 😳 😃 Time definitely files...

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Anjani9

@Anjani9

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#183

Anuji, My review is pending, will give by tomorrow...

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suku_07

@suku_07

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Wonderful update Anu ji... Its good to see you back and you not only back but back with bang of course !!

You made up for your absence with the two super AWESOME updates, great!

Poor Ashni, what an adventurous start to their marriage, first Komal, then Purab and lock up and then a fight...

Liked the way both comforted each other in just 2 mins and then were ready to face the world... Lolz Nidhi is really a kid, loved her reaction on seeing Komal for the first time in her house and their banter that followed.. Lolz both are hardcore Shakespeare fan 😉 Poor Ashu, phir ek bachchi mil gayi 😉

Well, it was really nice to see Manny and Amy together... Nothing in this world can beat a true and old friend !! BTW this Manny is too cute... But what i am enjoying the most is Rohan's role in this FF, I am liking Ashu's dependence and trust on him. Its really going to be very difficult for Purab this time...

Back at home this was nice to see Ashni's second but actually first fight after marriage... It again showed Nidhi's maturity level and Ashu's stubborn attitude.. Loved how Nidhi gave him back... But the best part of this FF was Ashu singing for his ruthi hui bride, it was so cute... Armaan is his best buddy actually !! It was a nice reception followed by the sizzling hot session in night. OMG, this was BEST!

LOLz this Nidhi is really priceless what a question Nidhi woh bhi on her second night... Bravo... Poor Ashu... Beware Ashu yeh Nidhi kuch alag hai 😉

Eagerly waiting for next update !!

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anjalini

@anjalini

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#185

Hi,

Welcome back Anu,with a wonderful, super long,superfluous update.👍🏼

Loved it every bit,especially your hand on humor! I swear I read it full 2 parts at one go and it was exhausting but enjoyable at the same time.Look Anu I am hanging out here only to read your stories and have not ventured to start reading any new FFs or anything on any forum. I would request you to Plz give subsequent updates of all your FFs fast and help me abstain from my addiction.

Love,

Anju. 😃

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Anjani9

@Anjani9

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Purab has hit them major way.

If not for Manny and his sister AshNi would have landed in a embarrassing situation with the party in the evening.

They are just lucky to come out of that situation. They have not estimated the trouble coming in the form of Purab well.😔

But knowing Ashu's position, how is Purab willing to take that risk?😕

But Ashu is not bothered what others think...the way he was holding her in front of Manny and his jid before reception.😉

Nidhi is swinging between her childishness & innocence to matured woman who bothers about her family & friends.😊

You have tried humor in this update and it is too good. Ammy & Manny and Komal...👏

Their fight is very romantic this time...Ashu is only thinking about sleeping on Sofa and Armaan is also scaring him about that...😆

Their moonlight lit night and Nidhi's questions...☺️

Thank you for such a looong update...

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Anu

@Libra

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: suku_07
Anu ji phir gayab hp gayi 😕

No yaar

Not gayab Busy writing update for you all.

Thoda waqt Lagta hai.

Come yaar give me a break.😕

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suku_07

@suku_07

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: Libra

No yaar
Not gayab Busy writing update for you all.

Thoda waqt Lagta hai.
Come yaar give me a break.😕

Arre you give updates at your own sweet time, no problem at all...Health and work comes first 😛 but please don't leave the forum 😆... we all love you a lot... and for updates they can surely wait 😛

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ssktlk

@ssktlk

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#189

Hi Anu,

Great to see you back after long. Missed u sooo much. Loved both updates as always. After a long gap also your story flows so flawlessly, hats off to you. Absolutely love the humor in this ff. Ha ha, Ashu says he ended up with the queen of loonies🤣

Can't wait for the next update. Hope u re feeling better now.

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Anu

@Libra

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: suku_07
Wonderful update Anu ji... Its good to see you back and you not only back but back with bang of course !!

Thank you
😳
You made up for your absence with the two super AWESOME updates, great!
Nahin it was not two updates. It was one very long update, but I had to post it in two parts.😳

Poor Ashni, what an adventurous start to their marriage, first Komal, then Purab and lock up and then a fight...
Liked the way both comforted each other in just 2 mins and then were ready to face the world... Lolz Nidhi is really a kid, loved her reaction on seeing Komal for the first time in her house and their banter that followed.. Lolz both are hardcore Shakespeare fan 😉 Poor Ashu, phir ek bachchi mil gayi 😉
Marriages need to have a bit of adventure! Nahin? Otherwise things get boring.😆
I am planning to do more with Komals Character. I think that differents characters add spice to a story, and keep in interesting.😃 And I am a hard core SHakespeare Fan. Akhir apna stamp toh story mein lagana chahiye na.😳

Well, it was really nice to see Manny and Amy together... Nothing in this world can beat a true and old friend !! BTW this Manny is too cute... But what i am enjoying the most is Rohan's role in this FF, I am liking Ashu's dependence and trust on him. Its really going to be very difficult for Purab this time...
I agree. Nothing is sweeter than old friends. I recently hooked up with a few friends whom I have not had any contact with in about 28 years. It was amazing. Bachpan yaad aa gaya.
And Purab is going to regret that he ever took pangas with Hamare Ashman.😉 Wait and see in the next update.😉

Back at home this was nice to see Ashni's second but actually first fight after marriage... It again showed Nidhi's maturity level and Ashu's stubborn attitude.. Loved how Nidhi gave him back... But the best part of this FF was Ashu singing for his ruthi hui bride, it was so cute... Armaan is his best buddy actually !! It was a nice reception followed by the sizzling hot session in night. OMG, this was BEST!
Ab I have to try and keep the original character intact a little bit, yes? Show mein bhi toh Nidhi is shown as very mature and responsible, when need be. Is liye I did not want to deviate from that. And Ashuji as always, stubborn to a fault. But then just as quick to try and make up. And what is a make up in newly weds other than some hot and happening romance.😳

LOLz this Nidhi is really priceless what a question Nidhi woh bhi on her second night... Bravo... Poor Ashu... Beware Ashu yeh Nidhi kuch alag hai 😉
Kitni alag, yeh also will be revealed as the story unfolds.😃 Just wait and watch. Abhi toh shuruaat hai Mam.😉

Eagerly waiting for next update !!

Working on it.😃